First impression - it's all a bit mechanical, by which I mean it could do with some fluff. An introduction with a description of what it looks like, maybe why it was created, by whom and for what purpose. It should be telling a story, with the mechanics secondary (and keep them as simple as possible). If you can, add a picture too.
If you are going to amplify a spell why a cantrip? I can see an amplifier being mounted on a ship. Push a fireball spell in and doing double damage to a ship or a monster attacking your ship. Make so it only works in space and not portable. Like it gets graphed to the ship to work or something in those words.
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I'm new to creating homebrew magic items, and I just created one called Krimh's Amplifier. I would like a little feedback if possible. Thanks!
it's been a long time...
First impression - it's all a bit mechanical, by which I mean it could do with some fluff. An introduction with a description of what it looks like, maybe why it was created, by whom and for what purpose. It should be telling a story, with the mechanics secondary (and keep them as simple as possible). If you can, add a picture too.
If you are going to amplify a spell why a cantrip? I can see an amplifier being mounted on a ship. Push a fireball spell in and doing double damage to a ship or a monster attacking your ship. Make so it only works in space and not portable. Like it gets graphed to the ship to work or something in those words.