I have created an angel template inspired by the books that I would love to get some feedback for! I am currently trying to add to it a variant type to have no flight and be bound like an angel from the storyline to accomodate dungeon masters that don't like flight. Please help me! Thoughts are welcome! https://www.dndbeyond.com/characters/races/83546-angel-boros-ravnica edit: I have just found out i applied the Ability Score wrong and doesn't show up properly in the character sheet, I will edit that when I add the Variant option at a later date.
2nd edit: I updated the traits while making sure to get them right by looking at predone races from the book. They should work now. I added instead of a Variant, an optional ruling for dms for flight. It appeals to the flavor of the books and incorporates Renown within your guild. Allowing better power level for lower level character building and more roleplay. I also reworded character descriptions due to copyright issues I unintentionally did.
Oops! Forgot the languages! According to the lore specific to ravnica angels, they have all languages. So i intend to add that later today after work. Thanks for catching that! Also, what is the diffence of labeling it as a racial feat and not just a trait? What does that change exactly? And ill totally fix the size as well! Thankyou for your feedback!
Oops! Forgot the languages! According to the lore specific to ravnica angels, they have all languages. So i intend to add that later today after work. Thanks for catching that! Also, what is the diffence of labeling it as a racial feat and not just a trait? What does that change exactly? And ill totally fix the size as well! Thankyou for your feedback!
I understand the angel monsters know all languages, but player characters should not be handed that much utility.
I mean to remove it from the race, and make it a feat with the angel race prerequisite. So the player will have to choose to take it instead of an ASI or another feat.
I like this idea, seeing i borrowed from the battleforge. This could open up an option going your way to allow another differnt feat that could fall more in line with the firemane template of casting. So the player gets to choose. Ill have to brainstorm tonight. Thanks again!
Updated sheet for languages, but kept the design for ability the same. Personal reason being that when comparing it to the Aasimar subraces, I didn't want the player to feel punished for having an ability that lasts one turn. While the Aasimar's ability can last for a full minute and still gets a stat bump.
Probably will be the last update to this unless if they add stuff. Thank you DxJxC for all of your input.
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I have created an angel template inspired by the books that I would love to get some feedback for! I am currently trying to add to it a variant type to have no flight and be bound like an angel from the storyline to accomodate dungeon masters that don't like flight. Please help me! Thoughts are welcome!
https://www.dndbeyond.com/characters/races/83546-angel-boros-ravnica
edit: I have just found out i applied the Ability Score wrong and doesn't show up properly in the character sheet, I will edit that when I add the Variant option at a later date.
2nd edit: I updated the traits while making sure to get them right by looking at predone races from the book. They should work now. I added instead of a Variant, an optional ruling for dms for flight. It appeals to the flavor of the books and incorporates Renown within your guild. Allowing better power level for lower level character building and more roleplay. I also reworded character descriptions due to copyright issues I unintentionally did.
I like it.
Needs to specify "Your size is medium" in size and needs to list languages (common and celestial obviously).
I think that it might be a little too strong though, to remedy that, I recommend making "rally the righteous" a racial feat instead of a trait.
Oops! Forgot the languages! According to the lore specific to ravnica angels, they have all languages. So i intend to add that later today after work. Thanks for catching that! Also, what is the diffence of labeling it as a racial feat and not just a trait? What does that change exactly? And ill totally fix the size as well! Thankyou for your feedback!
I understand the angel monsters know all languages, but player characters should not be handed that much utility.
I mean to remove it from the race, and make it a feat with the angel race prerequisite. So the player will have to choose to take it instead of an ASI or another feat.
I like this idea, seeing i borrowed from the battleforge. This could open up an option going your way to allow another differnt feat that could fall more in line with the firemane template of casting. So the player gets to choose. Ill have to brainstorm tonight. Thanks again!
Updated sheet for languages, but kept the design for ability the same. Personal reason being that when comparing it to the Aasimar subraces, I didn't want the player to feel punished for having an ability that lasts one turn. While the Aasimar's ability can last for a full minute and still gets a stat bump.
Probably will be the last update to this unless if they add stuff. Thank you DxJxC for all of your input.