I posted this in the XGtE thread but I think it got overlooked because of how similar it was to the post I made about the PHB. So I'm putting it in it's own thread.
I looked through the Basic Rules. Many of the issues from the PHB were also mirrored in the Basic Rules with only a few minor difference, so I was able to go through almost all of the chapters in one go.
Chapter 1: Step-By-Step Characters
In the Level section, the words Beyond 1st Level in the last sentence should link to the Beyond 1st Level section.
In the Weapons section, the word finesse in the first bullet point should link to the finesse weapon property and the word thrown in the second bullet point should link to the thrown weapon property.
In the Building Bruenor, Step 5 section, the word thrown in the last sentence should link to the thrown weapon property.
Chapter 4: Personality and Background
In the Height and Weight section, in the last sentence of the last paragraph the text (12 . 3) should read (12 × 3).
Chapter 5: Equipment
In the Standard Exchange Rates table, the CP, SP, EP, GP, and EP column names should be lower case (e.g., cp instead of CP).
In the Variant: Equipment Sizes text bubble, the entry "1d4 . 10" in the last sentence should read "1d4 × 10".
In the Weapon Properties section, the words ammunition and thrown in the paragraph that begins with Range should link to the ammunition and thrown weapon properties respectively. Also, the word finesse in the last sentence of the paragraph that begins with Thrown should link to the finesse weapon property. (These changes should also be applied to the Weapon Properties section of the PHB)
In the Improvised Weapons section, the word thrown in the second sentence of the last paragraph should link to the thrown weapon property.
Chapter 7: Using Ability Scores
In the Proficiency Bonus section, the word History in the last sentence of the 4th paragraph should link to the History skill (2 instances).
In the Skills section, there are a number of reference to the various skills that should be linked.
In the Passive Checks section, the word Dexterity in the last paragraph of this section should link to the Dexterity section in the chapter. Also, the Perception in the 3rd paragraph should link to the Perception skill (2 instances).
In the Working Together section, the word Help in the last sentence of the 1st paragraph should link to the Help action.
In the Group Checks section, the word Survival in the 3rd paragraph should link to the Survival skill.
In the Strength Checks section, the word Athletics in second sentence should link to the Athletics skill.
In the Dexterity Checks section, the words Acrobatics, Sleight of Hand, and Stealth in second sentence should link to their respective skill.
In the Hiding text bubble, words Stealth and Perception (when not used as a paragraph header) should link to their respective skills.
In the Intelligence Checks section, the words Arcana, History, Investigation, Nature, and Religion in second sentence should link to their respective skill.
In the Wisdom Checks section, the words Animal Handling, Insight, Medicine, Perception, and Survival in second sentence should link to their respective skill.
In the Finding a Hidden Object text bubble, word Perception in the first sentence of the 1st paragraph and the third sentence of the 2nd paragraph should link to the Perception skill.
In the Charisma Checks section, the words Deception, Intimidation, Performance, and Persuasion in second sentence should link to their respective skill.
Chapter 8: Adventuring
In the Travel Pace section, the word exhaustion at the end of the the 2nd paragraph should link to the exhaustion condition.
In the Jumping section, the word Athletics in the 3rd paragraph should link to the Athletics skill.
In the Other Activities section, the word Perception in the 1st paragraph should link to the Perception skill.
In the Being Prone section, the terms drop prone in the first sentence and Standingup in the second sentence should be bolded.
In the Attack section, the words Making an Attack should link to the Making an Attack section.
In the Modifiers to the Roll section, the words finesse and thrown in the 2nd paragraph should link to the finesse and thrown weapon properties.
In the Opportunity Attacks section, the word Disengage in the 3rd paragraph should link to the Disengage action.
In the Two-Weapon Fighting section, the word Attack in the first sentence should link to the Attack action. Also, in the first paragraph the word light should link to the light weapon property (2 instances) and in the 2nd paragraph the word thrown should link to the thrown weapon property.
In the Grappling section, the word Attack in the 1st paragraph should link to the Attack action (2 instances).
In the Shoving a Creature section, the word Attack in the 1st paragraph should link to the Attack action (2 instances).
In the Mounting and Dismounting section, the word prone in the 2nd and 3rd paragraphs (4 instances) should link to the prone condition. Also, the words Dash, Disengage, and Dodge in the 2nd paragraph should link to their respective actions.
Chapter 10: Spellcasting
In the Concentration section, the word incapacitated in the last bullet point should link to the incapacitated condition.
In the Attack Rolls section, the word incapacitated in the second paragraph should link to the incapacitated condition.
Appendix A: Conditions
In the Grappled section, the word incapacitated in the second bullet point should link to the incapacitated condition.
In the Paralyzed section, the word incapacitated in the first bullet point should link to the incapacitated condition.
In the Petrified section, the word incapacitated in the second bullet point should link to the incapacitated condition.
In the Stunned section, the word incapacitated in the first bullet point should link to the incapacitated condition.
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I posted this in the XGtE thread but I think it got overlooked because of how similar it was to the post I made about the PHB. So I'm putting it in it's own thread.
I looked through the Basic Rules. Many of the issues from the PHB were also mirrored in the Basic Rules with only a few minor difference, so I was able to go through almost all of the chapters in one go.
Chapter 1: Step-By-Step Characters
In the Level section, the words Beyond 1st Level in the last sentence should link to the Beyond 1st Level section.
In the Weapons section, the word finesse in the first bullet point should link to the finesse weapon property and the word thrown in the second bullet point should link to the thrown weapon property.
In the Building Bruenor, Step 5 section, the word thrown in the last sentence should link to the thrown weapon property.
Chapter 4: Personality and Background
In the Height and Weight section, in the last sentence of the last paragraph the text (12 . 3) should read (12 × 3).
Chapter 5: Equipment
In the Standard Exchange Rates table, the CP, SP, EP, GP, and EP column names should be lower case (e.g., cp instead of CP).
In the Variant: Equipment Sizes text bubble, the entry "1d4 . 10" in the last sentence should read "1d4 × 10".
In the Weapon Properties section, the words Improvised Weapons in the third paragraph should link to the Improvised Weapons section. (This change should also be applied to the Weapon Properties section of the PHB with the link pointing to the PHB Improvised Weapons section)
In the Weapon Properties section, the words ammunition and thrown in the paragraph that begins with Range should link to the ammunition and thrown weapon properties respectively. Also, the word finesse in the last sentence of the paragraph that begins with Thrown should link to the finesse weapon property. (These changes should also be applied to the Weapon Properties section of the PHB)
In the Improvised Weapons section, the word thrown in the second sentence of the last paragraph should link to the thrown weapon property.
Chapter 7: Using Ability Scores
In the Proficiency Bonus section, the word History in the last sentence of the 4th paragraph should link to the History skill (2 instances).
In the Skills section, there are a number of reference to the various skills that should be linked.
In the Variant: Skills with Different Abilities section, the words Athletics and Intimidation should link to the Athletics and Intimidation skills respectively (5 instances of Athletics, 2 instances of Intimidation). (These changes should be applied to the Variant: Skills with Different Abilities in the PHB)
In the Passive Checks section, the word Dexterity in the last paragraph of this section should link to the Dexterity section in the chapter. Also, the Perception in the 3rd paragraph should link to the Perception skill (2 instances).
In the Working Together section, the word Help in the last sentence of the 1st paragraph should link to the Help action.
In the Group Checks section, the word Survival in the 3rd paragraph should link to the Survival skill.
In the Strength Checks section, the word Athletics in second sentence should link to the Athletics skill.
In the Dexterity Checks section, the words Acrobatics, Sleight of Hand, and Stealth in second sentence should link to their respective skill.
In the Hiding text bubble, words Stealth and Perception (when not used as a paragraph header) should link to their respective skills.
In the Intelligence Checks section, the words Arcana, History, Investigation, Nature, and Religion in second sentence should link to their respective skill.
In the Wisdom Checks section, the words Animal Handling, Insight, Medicine, Perception, and Survival in second sentence should link to their respective skill.
In the Finding a Hidden Object text bubble, word Perception in the first sentence of the 1st paragraph and the third sentence of the 2nd paragraph should link to the Perception skill.
In the Charisma Checks section, the words Deception, Intimidation, Performance, and Persuasion in second sentence should link to their respective skill.
Chapter 8: Adventuring
In the Travel Pace section, the word exhaustion at the end of the the 2nd paragraph should link to the exhaustion condition.
In the Jumping section, the word Athletics in the 3rd paragraph should link to the Athletics skill.
In the Other Activities section, the word Perception in the 1st paragraph should link to the Perception skill.
Chapter 9: Combat
In the Your Turn section, the links to the Actions in Combat section and the Movement and Position section should be in quotations, e.g., "Movement and Position". Also, the words Dodge and Ready in the 4th paragraph should link to the Dodge and Ready actions respectively.
In the Being Prone section, the terms drop prone in the first sentence and Standing up in the second sentence should be bolded.
In the Attack section, the words Making an Attack should link to the Making an Attack section.
In the Modifiers to the Roll section, the words finesse and thrown in the 2nd paragraph should link to the finesse and thrown weapon properties.
In the Opportunity Attacks section, the word Disengage in the 3rd paragraph should link to the Disengage action.
In the Two-Weapon Fighting section, the word Attack in the first sentence should link to the Attack action. Also, in the first paragraph the word light should link to the light weapon property (2 instances) and in the 2nd paragraph the word thrown should link to the thrown weapon property.
In the Grappling section, the word Attack in the 1st paragraph should link to the Attack action (2 instances).
In the Shoving a Creature section, the word Attack in the 1st paragraph should link to the Attack action (2 instances).
In the Mounting and Dismounting section, the word prone in the 2nd and 3rd paragraphs (4 instances) should link to the prone condition. Also, the words Dash, Disengage, and Dodge in the 2nd paragraph should link to their respective actions.
Chapter 10: Spellcasting
In the Concentration section, the word incapacitated in the last bullet point should link to the incapacitated condition.
In the Attack Rolls section, the word incapacitated in the second paragraph should link to the incapacitated condition.
Appendix A: Conditions
In the Grappled section, the word incapacitated in the second bullet point should link to the incapacitated condition.
In the Paralyzed section, the word incapacitated in the first bullet point should link to the incapacitated condition.
In the Petrified section, the word incapacitated in the second bullet point should link to the incapacitated condition.
In the Stunned section, the word incapacitated in the first bullet point should link to the incapacitated condition.