So I made a whole world for 5e...

I have made an entire new setting and world for DnD 5e, based on ideas from over many years of playing.  I made new systems, optimization options for Martial classes (playtesting, martials drop off after about level 12 in power scaling vs spellcasters), new vehicles, basically new everything.  I want to turn it into a sourcebook for everyone to use, as I think the world of Aetherra has great potential for insane possibilities.  It's still a work in progress, and I will be stress testing it with a party that LOVES to mix-max and optimize their characters. I want your guy's and gal's thoughts on what I could fix for this if you see anything blatantly wrong with the setting or the lore. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WkXZIxI9zeOxUJ10X-Iz4U_rP9eTblE62Pod_8DAY1A/edit?usp=sharing

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I have made an entire new setting and world for DnD 5e, based on ideas from over many years of playing.  I made new systems, optimization options for Martial classes (playtesting, martials drop off after about level 12 in power scaling vs spellcasters), new vehicles, basically new everything.  I want to turn it into a sourcebook for everyone to use, as I think the world of Aetherra has great potential for insane possibilities.  It's still a work in progress, and I will be stress testing it with a party that LOVES to mix-max and optimize their characters. I want your guy's and gal's thoughts on what I could fix for this if you see anything blatantly wrong with the setting or the lore. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WkXZIxI9zeOxUJ10X-Iz4U_rP9eTblE62Pod_8DAY1A/edit?usp=sharing

 Looks really good made me realise that I should try to get my computer back on and load up obsidian to do more writing in it