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Status update: I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^
A lot of these really need a description to help us understand what you're trying to accomplish.
I've just opened them all up in separate tabs and am working on some specific feedback, but the descriptions lacking is really making it difficl to judge them properly.
Yes, thanks for the feedback, that is what I was talking about with some of them (ie most of them) being pretty trash, though that newest one, plus the newer version of it i just finished making, are my pride and joy as they are better at that category and provide more explaining, at least i feel they do but that is why i made this thread, for others opinions.
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Status update: I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^
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Status update: I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^
Since I was already aware of the flaw you pointed out to me, any feedback you have I would like to not be about that particular flaw, and if possible, critique my more recent creations more than the older ones, as they are bit of a break through in my Homebrew making skills.
Also to be clear, I don't mean to sound like I'm dissing the feedback you gave me, I do appreciate it. I this as I know that sometimes what I think the message I am putting across to others is actually completely to what I think I am saying.
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Status update: I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^
Sorry, just read your feedback message again and have another reply to it.
If you want to judge the stuff that the Homebrew i have made does that isn't being described, I could give you that info through and image or explain it as well. Since you found the description flaw I have all to often it makes it hard for you to measure the content.
What I mean to say is, was your original point made that you are struggling to find adequate feedback as you couldn't understand what they do? Or is it as I originally interpreted and you are giving me the feedback containing the description flaw while you analyse them for more?
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Status update: I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^
Sorry if I sound needy or toxic or irritating with all this, I just want to do whatever I have the power to do, to improve my Homebrew so others can, if they wish, experience the joy I felt while making them. So basically, I'm just desperate for ways to self improve.
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Status update: I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^
With a lot of details not being spelled out, I'm going to be a bit broad here rather than call out specific items.
You're making a lot of magical items artifacts when they're nowhere near that power level. You'll want to identify items in a similar range and assign a rarity. This tells us where you're aiming. The descriptions will allow us to suggest alternative or additional benefits.
You need to dial back the races and be more explicit about what the benefits are. In some cases, you've described "several benefits." Remember that we can't see all the details without adding these to our collections and building characters with them.
Look at your races and consider which classes they jive most with. They should mostly be subclasses. Maybe a few features can be relegated to feats.
Also I'm going to be away from this forum for a bit as I am actually a student doing a class right now as I type, and even though it's a spare lesson, I should still do at least a bit of work related content. So if you reply asking or confirming something and I don't answer relatively quickly, that's why, just a heads up for you and any other future feedback providers.
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Status update: I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^
Just before I do go away for a bit, I saw that comment you made, and thanks for that feedback, I didn't know about that rarity level factor when I was making the items, I just assumed artefact related to being and old and unique item category. I also will work on the descriptions and such. it may take me a couple of days and maybe weeks, but soon I will post or repost new or improved Homebrew for you to further critique, while in-between doing such, respond and react to any other feedback i receive during that time.
Anyway got to go now, I'll either be online again within a couple of minutes, hours or days, though I will try creating and improving more until then.
Thanks again for the feedback.
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I really like the forsaken, but I do have a question. What is the forsaken touch?
Yes people also ask that question.
Melee attack that deals necrotic damage, I beleive, could be wrong as I am not currently checking to confirm, that it deals 3d8 +6 necrotic damage.
Not entirely sure but it is pretty close to accurate
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Status update: I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^
And as I mentioned earlier, you can only add others homebrew using subscription, with the base subscription it only costs about 5 dollars Australian or something per month.
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"Know your enemy, know your self" Click here to read my Homebrew thread! "Veni, vidi, vici...
Status update: I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^
Also, if you can't add it, I could arrange sometime in the future to help you create it for yourself over discord or something
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Status update: I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^
Also I really appreciate the feedback I have been given so far...
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"Know your enemy, know your self" Click here to read my Homebrew thread! "Veni, vidi, vici...
Status update: I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^
Also I will be updating and refining some of my better creations over the next couple of months.
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"Know your enemy, know your self" Click here to read my Homebrew thread! "Veni, vidi, vici...
Status update: I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^
I expect that I will have another better version of the Forsaken by at most the end of two weeks.
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But I will!
"Know your enemy, know your self"
Click here to read my Homebrew thread!
"Veni, vidi, vici...
Status update:
I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^
I promise...
"Know your enemy, know your self"
Click here to read my Homebrew thread!
"Veni, vidi, vici...
Status update:
I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^
sorry, I accidentally posted something that i did not mean to sorry
A lot of these really need a description to help us understand what you're trying to accomplish.
I've just opened them all up in separate tabs and am working on some specific feedback, but the descriptions lacking is really making it difficl to judge them properly.
Yes, thanks for the feedback, that is what I was talking about with some of them (ie most of them) being pretty trash, though that newest one, plus the newer version of it i just finished making, are my pride and joy as they are better at that category and provide more explaining, at least i feel they do but that is why i made this thread, for others opinions.
"Know your enemy, know your self"
Click here to read my Homebrew thread!
"Veni, vidi, vici...
Status update:
I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^
Also here is the link to the newer version of the Forsaken race I made:
https://www.dndbeyond.com/races/1110844-forsaken
"Know your enemy, know your self"
Click here to read my Homebrew thread!
"Veni, vidi, vici...
Status update:
I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^
Also another thing I want to say is this.
Since I was already aware of the flaw you pointed out to me, any feedback you have I would like to not be about that particular flaw, and if possible, critique my more recent creations more than the older ones, as they are bit of a break through in my Homebrew making skills.
Also to be clear, I don't mean to sound like I'm dissing the feedback you gave me, I do appreciate it. I this as I know that sometimes what I think the message I am putting across to others is actually completely to what I think I am saying.
"Know your enemy, know your self"
Click here to read my Homebrew thread!
"Veni, vidi, vici...
Status update:
I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^
Sorry, just read your feedback message again and have another reply to it.
If you want to judge the stuff that the Homebrew i have made does that isn't being described, I could give you that info through and image or explain it as well. Since you found the description flaw I have all to often it makes it hard for you to measure the content.
What I mean to say is, was your original point made that you are struggling to find adequate feedback as you couldn't understand what they do? Or is it as I originally interpreted and you are giving me the feedback containing the description flaw while you analyse them for more?
"Know your enemy, know your self"
Click here to read my Homebrew thread!
"Veni, vidi, vici...
Status update:
I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^
Or both of those interpretations?
Or a completely different one?
Sorry if I sound needy or toxic or irritating with all this, I just want to do whatever I have the power to do, to improve my Homebrew so others can, if they wish, experience the joy I felt while making them. So basically, I'm just desperate for ways to self improve.
"Know your enemy, know your self"
Click here to read my Homebrew thread!
"Veni, vidi, vici...
Status update:
I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^
With a lot of details not being spelled out, I'm going to be a bit broad here rather than call out specific items.
You're making a lot of magical items artifacts when they're nowhere near that power level. You'll want to identify items in a similar range and assign a rarity. This tells us where you're aiming. The descriptions will allow us to suggest alternative or additional benefits.
You need to dial back the races and be more explicit about what the benefits are. In some cases, you've described "several benefits." Remember that we can't see all the details without adding these to our collections and building characters with them.
Look at your races and consider which classes they jive most with. They should mostly be subclasses. Maybe a few features can be relegated to feats.
Also I'm going to be away from this forum for a bit as I am actually a student doing a class right now as I type, and even though it's a spare lesson, I should still do at least a bit of work related content. So if you reply asking or confirming something and I don't answer relatively quickly, that's why, just a heads up for you and any other future feedback providers.
"Know your enemy, know your self"
Click here to read my Homebrew thread!
"Veni, vidi, vici...
Status update:
I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^
Just before I do go away for a bit, I saw that comment you made, and thanks for that feedback, I didn't know about that rarity level factor when I was making the items, I just assumed artefact related to being and old and unique item category. I also will work on the descriptions and such. it may take me a couple of days and maybe weeks, but soon I will post or repost new or improved Homebrew for you to further critique, while in-between doing such, respond and react to any other feedback i receive during that time.
Anyway got to go now, I'll either be online again within a couple of minutes, hours or days, though I will try creating and improving more until then.
Thanks again for the feedback.
"Know your enemy, know your self"
Click here to read my Homebrew thread!
"Veni, vidi, vici...
Status update:
I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^
I really like the forsaken, but I do have a question. What is the forsaken touch?
Yes people also ask that question.
Melee attack that deals necrotic damage, I beleive, could be wrong as I am not currently checking to confirm, that it deals 3d8 +6 necrotic damage.
Not entirely sure but it is pretty close to accurate
"Know your enemy, know your self"
Click here to read my Homebrew thread!
"Veni, vidi, vici...
Status update:
I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^
And as I mentioned earlier, you can only add others homebrew using subscription, with the base subscription it only costs about 5 dollars Australian or something per month.
"Know your enemy, know your self"
Click here to read my Homebrew thread!
"Veni, vidi, vici...
Status update:
I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^
Also, if you can't add it, I could arrange sometime in the future to help you create it for yourself over discord or something
"Know your enemy, know your self"
Click here to read my Homebrew thread!
"Veni, vidi, vici...
Status update:
I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^
Also I really appreciate the feedback I have been given so far...
"Know your enemy, know your self"
Click here to read my Homebrew thread!
"Veni, vidi, vici...
Status update:
I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^
Also I will be updating and refining some of my better creations over the next couple of months.
"Know your enemy, know your self"
Click here to read my Homebrew thread!
"Veni, vidi, vici...
Status update:
I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^
I expect that I will have another better version of the Forsaken by at most the end of two weeks.
"Know your enemy, know your self"
Click here to read my Homebrew thread!
"Veni, vidi, vici...
Status update:
I am going to be afk very frequently for a currently un predictable amount of time, for more information/details on this, check my homebrew thread which can be found easier by clicking the 'here' above ^^^