I like it! Only two criticism/suggestions: I'd probably specify the kind of armor that can be selected with the equipment bit, something like no armor costing more than 200 gp, as it would already allow the acquisition of armors not normally included or monetarily available to a lvl 1 character. I would laso specify how much the pay in the pouch is, as other backgrounds do.
For the rest, it's a very solid, stout dwarven background.
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When you select the background you get to choose between light, medium and heavy, the actual armor you get is pre-selected depending on the category, (studded, Chain Shirt, Ring Mail iirc)
As for the moneypouch, it's 15 gold but mainly up to your DM if he wants you to have more or less. :)
Oh thats clever with the armor. I'd suggest actually naming them though so people know what they're getting.
The tool proficiency should also name Cartogropher tools just so newer folks or those people like me who didnt know that was the name until googling dont have to google.
Otherwise its pretty straightforward and interesting. Dwarves have always been one of my favorite races and this brings a new life to ideas I have on characters.
When you select the background you get to choose between light, medium and heavy, the actual armor you get is pre-selected depending on the category, (studded, Chain Shirt, Ring Mail iirc)
As for the moneypouch, it's 15 gold but mainly up to your DM if he wants you to have more or less. :)
I see! I didn't take that into consideration ^^
I agree with KageAcuma it might best to write those down though, just for completeness.
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https://www.dndbeyond.com/characters/backgrounds/6572-dwarven-defender
constructive criticism welcome :)
I like it!
Only two criticism/suggestions: I'd probably specify the kind of armor that can be selected with the equipment bit, something like no armor costing more than 200 gp, as it would already allow the acquisition of armors not normally included or monetarily available to a lvl 1 character.
I would laso specify how much the pay in the pouch is, as other backgrounds do.
For the rest, it's a very solid, stout dwarven background.
Born in Italy, moved a bunch, living in Spain, my heart always belonged to Roleplaying Games
When you select the background you get to choose between light, medium and heavy, the actual armor you get is pre-selected depending on the category, (studded, Chain Shirt, Ring Mail iirc)
As for the moneypouch, it's 15 gold but mainly up to your DM if he wants you to have more or less. :)
Oh thats clever with the armor. I'd suggest actually naming them though so people know what they're getting.
The tool proficiency should also name Cartogropher tools just so newer folks or those people like me who didnt know that was the name until googling dont have to google.
Otherwise its pretty straightforward and interesting. Dwarves have always been one of my favorite races and this brings a new life to ideas I have on characters.
Born in Italy, moved a bunch, living in Spain, my heart always belonged to Roleplaying Games
already done, submitted new version ;)
https://www.dndbeyond.com/characters/backgrounds/6915-dwarven-defender
final version :)