Like the title says I'm looking for some feedback on some heritage based feats, keep in mind they are meant to be used with either TCoE custom lineage or the variant human. I would also appreciate anyone that would be willing to help me make some of the text sound and feel more "official" for lack of a batter word. anyways here's a link to a google doc I've made with them all since I don't want to publish them until they've been polished a bit.
For those who want an idea of what's there before opening the link here's a list
BEAST: Bull, Crow, Frogs, Falcon, Hippo, Hyena, Lion, Rabbit, Rat
ELEMENTAL: Air, Earth, Fire, Water
ELF: Astral, Basic, Dark, High, Lunar, Sea, Wood
FAE/FIEND: Changeling, Devil
HALFLING: Basic, Kender
HUMANOID: Bugbear, Goblin, Hadozee, Orc
OOZE: Plasmoid
Also yes most of these are of course based off existing races. But they are just that Based.
I just jumped in and left a bunch of comments on the Google doc itself. In general, these feel pretty powerful and in some cases are almost better than what the races they're based on get. I'd be careful with these unless you want custom lineage to be the standard choice in your games.
Yeah they're primarily meant to be used with custom lineage. And as far as all the advantages, I couldn't think of possible stipulations, because yeah I thought they were bit to strong. That's the main reason I posted it asking for feedback. And for the air elemental getting feather fall I ended up going with that since the homebrew creater only lets you use spells from the basic rules. And the earth elemental I just couldn't think of a suitable damage resistance. Then for the changing I was trying to make the changelings shape changer feature more compact. And finally thank you for the input.
I just jumped in and left a bunch of comments on the Google doc itself. In general, these feel pretty powerful and in some cases are almost better than what the races they're based on get. I'd be careful with these unless you want custom lineage to be the standard choice in your games.
I've just gone through and applied what I think are suitable fixes for many of the things you pointed out, however for a couple of them I explained my reasoning. I would once again like to thank you for the feedback. :)
Like the title says I'm looking for some feedback on some heritage based feats, keep in mind they are meant to be used with either TCoE custom lineage or the variant human. I would also appreciate anyone that would be willing to help me make some of the text sound and feel more "official" for lack of a batter word. anyways here's a link to a google doc I've made with them all since I don't want to publish them until they've been polished a bit.
For those who want an idea of what's there before opening the link here's a list
BEAST: Bull, Crow, Frogs, Falcon, Hippo, Hyena, Lion, Rabbit, Rat
ELEMENTAL: Air, Earth, Fire, Water
ELF: Astral, Basic, Dark, High, Lunar, Sea, Wood
FAE/FIEND: Changeling, Devil
HALFLING: Basic, Kender
HUMANOID: Bugbear, Goblin, Hadozee, Orc
OOZE: Plasmoid
Also yes most of these are of course based off existing races. But they are just that Based.
If I can't say something nice, I try to not say anything at all. So if I suddenly stop participating in a topic that's probably why.
I just jumped in and left a bunch of comments on the Google doc itself. In general, these feel pretty powerful and in some cases are almost better than what the races they're based on get. I'd be careful with these unless you want custom lineage to be the standard choice in your games.
Yeah they're primarily meant to be used with custom lineage. And as far as all the advantages, I couldn't think of possible stipulations, because yeah I thought they were bit to strong. That's the main reason I posted it asking for feedback. And for the air elemental getting feather fall I ended up going with that since the homebrew creater only lets you use spells from the basic rules. And the earth elemental I just couldn't think of a suitable damage resistance. Then for the changing I was trying to make the changelings shape changer feature more compact. And finally thank you for the input.
If I can't say something nice, I try to not say anything at all. So if I suddenly stop participating in a topic that's probably why.
I've just gone through and applied what I think are suitable fixes for many of the things you pointed out, however for a couple of them I explained my reasoning. I would once again like to thank you for the feedback. :)
If I can't say something nice, I try to not say anything at all. So if I suddenly stop participating in a topic that's probably why.
Happy to help!