So for a while now in my spare time I've been trying to convert every race into a feat, and now that I've finally succeeded(ignoring Vedalken, Hobgoblins, and Kobolds) I was hoping to get some feedback on them.
Now while many of these feats are based off of preexisting races some of them are very different from their original race. This is because I wanted to remove cultural traits and only have "biological" traits or at least as close as you can get when you include magic. Because of this some of these feats may be incredibly similar to the race their based on, while others are unrecognizable.
Some of the things I'm looking for feedback on are the traits, do you feel like they fit, do they need tweaked, or changed entirely. Are they balanced(this is my biggest concern in all honesty). And finally how can I word these feats so that they sound more "official"
Now seeing as how these feats are unfinished and in need of balancing, I have yet to make/publish them in the homebrew creator because of this you can find them in the following links.
So for a while now in my spare time I've been trying to convert every race into a feat, and now that I've finally succeeded(ignoring Vedalken, Hobgoblins, and Kobolds) I was hoping to get some feedback on them.
Now while many of these feats are based off of preexisting races some of them are very different from their original race. This is because I wanted to remove cultural traits and only have "biological" traits or at least as close as you can get when you include magic. Because of this some of these feats may be incredibly similar to the race their based on, while others are unrecognizable.
Some of the things I'm looking for feedback on are the traits, do you feel like they fit, do they need tweaked, or changed entirely. Are they balanced(this is my biggest concern in all honesty). And finally how can I word these feats so that they sound more "official"
Now seeing as how these feats are unfinished and in need of balancing, I have yet to make/publish them in the homebrew creator because of this you can find them in the following links.
Actual Races, Fun Races(way less polished).
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