Looking for feed back on a bardic college inspired by Flamenco dancers. This is just the mechanics, not the wording or explication. Also if I misused the Spanish and someone out there knows better, let me know.
(3rd) Traje: The features of this subclass cannot be used while wearing armor, but you can cast Mage Armor once per long rest without expending a spell slot. When you cast Mage Armor you may elect to have a beautiful set of performance clothes appear on your body (including footwear). This outfit replaces what you were wearing and disappears when the spell ends, replaced by whatever you were originally wearing. You may also use footwear designed for dancing as a spell foci.
(3rd) Paso o Salto: You may use a bonus action to take the Disengage or Dash action on your turn. Your jump distance is doubled.
(6th) Zapateado: Synchronized with the rhythm of your dance, you may cause your instrument or footware to eject a burst of magical energy. Enemies within engagement range of you are forced to take a Reaction to Disengage when you use this feature. If they are unable to do so (such as having already used their Reaction that round or being unable to move from their space) they take damage equal to a d6 + your Charisma modifier. You may use this feature a number of times equal to your proficiency modifier per short rest.
(14th) Esquivar o Deleitar: The Help (Distract) action is available to you as a bonus action. In addition, you may use the Dodge action as a bonus action twice per short rest.
Looking for feed back on a bardic college inspired by Flamenco dancers. This is just the mechanics, not the wording or explication. Also if I misused the Spanish and someone out there knows better, let me know.
(3rd) Traje: The features of this subclass cannot be used while wearing armor, but you can cast Mage Armor once per long rest without expending a spell slot. When you cast Mage Armor you may elect to have a beautiful set of performance clothes appear on your body (including footwear). This outfit replaces what you were wearing and disappears when the spell ends, replaced by whatever you were originally wearing. You may also use footwear designed for dancing as a spell foci.
(3rd) Paso o Salto: You may use a bonus action to take the Disengage or Dash action on your turn. Your jump distance is doubled.
(6th) Zapateado: Synchronized with the rhythm of your dance, you may cause your instrument or footware to eject a burst of magical energy. Enemies within engagement range of you are forced to take a Reaction to Disengage when you use this feature. If they are unable to do so (such as having already used their Reaction that round or being unable to move from their space) they take damage equal to a d6 + your Charisma modifier. You may use this feature a number of times equal to your proficiency modifier per short rest.
(14th) Esquivar o Deleitar: The Help (Distract) action is available to you as a bonus action. In addition, you may use the Dodge action as a bonus action twice per short rest.