This feels like a sort of stronger version of Hold Person that requires a Con save. I don't see anything too out of sorts that it would raise any red flags for me right out of the gate...though there may need to be some trinket text in there where it doesn't work on creatures that obviously lack blood.
so I created this spell and kinda just want the community's opinion about it
edit: thanks for moving to correct place
This feels like a sort of stronger version of Hold Person that requires a Con save. I don't see anything too out of sorts that it would raise any red flags for me right out of the gate...though there may need to be some trinket text in there where it doesn't work on creatures that obviously lack blood.