Hey Everyone. I am trying my first attempts at homebrewing. I was wondering if anyone would be willing to give constructive criticism. I am trying to maintain the feel of these two races while not completely breaking the game.
With the Nagpa I nerfed most of its major abilities or replaced it with a weaker alternative. The thing is that I am still left with them getting a once per day long range equivalent of the Monk's stunning strike. I'm not sure if that is still too much and the Corruption trait would be better off just being completely removed.
Then there is the Neogi. I know the Neogi was totally the most requested race out there to be made playable *cough*. Anyway, in the spirit of Lords Of Madness I made them. I made Enslave once per day and specified that it can only have one active at a time. But since there is no limit on what it can enslave it could get absurd. I mean if someone enslaved a dragon for a day and then it swears eternal vengeance up on them the next day is that in and of itself a sort of balance? Taking them into combat can break them out of their enslavement as well. I'm just curious what everyone thinks about it.
Hey Everyone. I am trying my first attempts at homebrewing. I was wondering if anyone would be willing to give constructive criticism. I am trying to maintain the feel of these two races while not completely breaking the game.
With the Nagpa I nerfed most of its major abilities or replaced it with a weaker alternative. The thing is that I am still left with them getting a once per day long range equivalent of the Monk's stunning strike. I'm not sure if that is still too much and the Corruption trait would be better off just being completely removed.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/races/347686-nagpa
Then there is the Neogi. I know the Neogi was totally the most requested race out there to be made playable *cough*. Anyway, in the spirit of Lords Of Madness I made them. I made Enslave once per day and specified that it can only have one active at a time. But since there is no limit on what it can enslave it could get absurd. I mean if someone enslaved a dragon for a day and then it swears eternal vengeance up on them the next day is that in and of itself a sort of balance? Taking them into combat can break them out of their enslavement as well. I'm just curious what everyone thinks about it.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/races/349397-neogi