And I have another idea, this one I like slightly more
Your hypeman has arrived. It's a great idea.
You haven’t even heard it yet
My job isn't to here the idea, it's to hype you up. I trust that its a great idea.
Do you want to hear it or not
Yeah I'm down to hear.
Ok
So, in the world I’m imagining, a kind of creature called Colossi (Sing: Colossus) that are absolutely massive. The average Colossus reaches above commercial airplane flight heights. They are also pretty much invulnerable, at least by normal standards. No man made weapon has ever managed to pierce the hide of a Colossus, and are generally presumed to have an infinite lifespan. All in all, they’re borderline immortal. Colossi aren’t often seen, as they are incredibly solitary creatures, rarely seen awake (they sleep for extended periods of time, around 100-150 years, staying awake for a comparable amount of time). They are also incredibly magical, some scholars believing that they were the progenitors of magic, teaching them to the first wizards. Why is this important? Because people wanted to harness that power. They couldn’t tame a Colossi, but they could try to copy its genetic makeup. And it worked. Various kingdoms and nations managed to create Pseudo Colossi, technically called Biologically Engineered Gigantic Organisms or BEGO for short. Nobody calls them that anymore, mostly because they’re all dead. Why you may ask? Because everyone saw that everyone else also had these superpowered living super weapons and all did the natural thing. Started a world war. Fun fact, there was actually a evolutionary reason Colossi are so durable and peaceful. It’s because their entire bodies are magical, and when then die, some kind of reaction happens, causing them to poison the environment so much that staying there for more than 30 minutes results in instant death. In slightly better news, it also reshape the land around it for some reason, warping it greatly. This time, the corpses sunk underground and the surrounding earth rose high in the air, above the very clouds. Now, over a thousand years after that horrible war, everybody has adapted to high altitude life, creating the sky ships as a way of travel. Sadly, the world is greatly split apart, causing all these countries in the sky to become isolated. Some people don’t like that, making it their life’s mission to visit as much of this fractured world as they can, possibly even mapping out the entire thing
Feel free to critique, though I personally find it interesting, I’m biased since it’s my work
What did I tell you, this is absolutely awesome idea. I love anything with Colossi, especially when a story involves failed attempts to harness the power of said creatures. Reminds me of Shadow of the Colossus, which was a legendary game.
There are somethings simply not meant for mankind to control
And yet we refuse to accept that, the world will be our oyster, or we’ll burn it down trying.
And I have another idea, this one I like slightly more
Your hypeman has arrived. It's a great idea.
You haven’t even heard it yet
My job isn't to here the idea, it's to hype you up. I trust that its a great idea.
Do you want to hear it or not
Yeah I'm down to hear.
Ok
So, in the world I’m imagining, a kind of creature called Colossi (Sing: Colossus) that are absolutely massive. The average Colossus reaches above commercial airplane flight heights. They are also pretty much invulnerable, at least by normal standards. No man made weapon has ever managed to pierce the hide of a Colossus, and are generally presumed to have an infinite lifespan. All in all, they’re borderline immortal. Colossi aren’t often seen, as they are incredibly solitary creatures, rarely seen awake (they sleep for extended periods of time, around 100-150 years, staying awake for a comparable amount of time). They are also incredibly magical, some scholars believing that they were the progenitors of magic, teaching them to the first wizards. Why is this important? Because people wanted to harness that power. They couldn’t tame a Colossi, but they could try to copy its genetic makeup. And it worked. Various kingdoms and nations managed to create Pseudo Colossi, technically called Biologically Engineered Gigantic Organisms or BEGO for short. Nobody calls them that anymore, mostly because they’re all dead. Why you may ask? Because everyone saw that everyone else also had these superpowered living super weapons and all did the natural thing. Started a world war. Fun fact, there was actually a evolutionary reason Colossi are so durable and peaceful. It’s because their entire bodies are magical, and when then die, some kind of reaction happens, causing them to poison the environment so much that staying there for more than 30 minutes results in instant death. In slightly better news, it also reshape the land around it for some reason, warping it greatly. This time, the corpses sunk underground and the surrounding earth rose high in the air, above the very clouds. Now, over a thousand years after that horrible war, everybody has adapted to high altitude life, creating the sky ships as a way of travel. Sadly, the world is greatly split apart, causing all these countries in the sky to become isolated. Some people don’t like that, making it their life’s mission to visit as much of this fractured world as they can, possibly even mapping out the entire thing
Feel free to critique, though I personally find it interesting, I’m biased since it’s my work
What did I tell you, this is absolutely awesome idea. I love anything with Colossi, especially when a story involves failed attempts to harness the power of said creatures. Reminds me of Shadow of the Colossus, which was a legendary game.
There are somethings simply not meant for mankind to control
And yet we refuse to accept that, the world will be our oyster, or we’ll burn it down trying.
It reminds me of the plot of a Studio Ghibli movie, or really just the background for it
And I have another idea, this one I like slightly more
Your hypeman has arrived. It's a great idea.
You haven’t even heard it yet
My job isn't to here the idea, it's to hype you up. I trust that its a great idea.
Do you want to hear it or not
Yeah I'm down to hear.
Ok
So, in the world I’m imagining, a kind of creature called Colossi (Sing: Colossus) that are absolutely massive. The average Colossus reaches above commercial airplane flight heights. They are also pretty much invulnerable, at least by normal standards. No man made weapon has ever managed to pierce the hide of a Colossus, and are generally presumed to have an infinite lifespan. All in all, they’re borderline immortal. Colossi aren’t often seen, as they are incredibly solitary creatures, rarely seen awake (they sleep for extended periods of time, around 100-150 years, staying awake for a comparable amount of time). They are also incredibly magical, some scholars believing that they were the progenitors of magic, teaching them to the first wizards. Why is this important? Because people wanted to harness that power. They couldn’t tame a Colossi, but they could try to copy its genetic makeup. And it worked. Various kingdoms and nations managed to create Pseudo Colossi, technically called Biologically Engineered Gigantic Organisms or BEGO for short. Nobody calls them that anymore, mostly because they’re all dead. Why you may ask? Because everyone saw that everyone else also had these superpowered living super weapons and all did the natural thing. Started a world war. Fun fact, there was actually a evolutionary reason Colossi are so durable and peaceful. It’s because their entire bodies are magical, and when then die, some kind of reaction happens, causing them to poison the environment so much that staying there for more than 30 minutes results in instant death. In slightly better news, it also reshape the land around it for some reason, warping it greatly. This time, the corpses sunk underground and the surrounding earth rose high in the air, above the very clouds. Now, over a thousand years after that horrible war, everybody has adapted to high altitude life, creating the sky ships as a way of travel. Sadly, the world is greatly split apart, causing all these countries in the sky to become isolated. Some people don’t like that, making it their life’s mission to visit as much of this fractured world as they can, possibly even mapping out the entire thing
Feel free to critique, though I personally find it interesting, I’m biased since it’s my work
What did I tell you, this is absolutely awesome idea. I love anything with Colossi, especially when a story involves failed attempts to harness the power of said creatures. Reminds me of Shadow of the Colossus, which was a legendary game.
There are somethings simply not meant for mankind to control
And yet we refuse to accept that, the world will be our oyster, or we’ll burn it down trying.
It reminds me of the plot of a Studio Ghibli movie, or really just the background for it
I love Studio Ghibli, even if one of the famous directors did say that Anime was a mistake. Anyway, I love titans, Colossi, and Gargantuan creatures.
And I have another idea, this one I like slightly more
Your hypeman has arrived. It's a great idea.
You haven’t even heard it yet
My job isn't to here the idea, it's to hype you up. I trust that its a great idea.
Do you want to hear it or not
Yeah I'm down to hear.
Ok
So, in the world I’m imagining, a kind of creature called Colossi (Sing: Colossus) that are absolutely massive. The average Colossus reaches above commercial airplane flight heights. They are also pretty much invulnerable, at least by normal standards. No man made weapon has ever managed to pierce the hide of a Colossus, and are generally presumed to have an infinite lifespan. All in all, they’re borderline immortal. Colossi aren’t often seen, as they are incredibly solitary creatures, rarely seen awake (they sleep for extended periods of time, around 100-150 years, staying awake for a comparable amount of time). They are also incredibly magical, some scholars believing that they were the progenitors of magic, teaching them to the first wizards. Why is this important? Because people wanted to harness that power. They couldn’t tame a Colossi, but they could try to copy its genetic makeup. And it worked. Various kingdoms and nations managed to create Pseudo Colossi, technically called Biologically Engineered Gigantic Organisms or BEGO for short. Nobody calls them that anymore, mostly because they’re all dead. Why you may ask? Because everyone saw that everyone else also had these superpowered living super weapons and all did the natural thing. Started a world war. Fun fact, there was actually a evolutionary reason Colossi are so durable and peaceful. It’s because their entire bodies are magical, and when then die, some kind of reaction happens, causing them to poison the environment so much that staying there for more than 30 minutes results in instant death. In slightly better news, it also reshape the land around it for some reason, warping it greatly. This time, the corpses sunk underground and the surrounding earth rose high in the air, above the very clouds. Now, over a thousand years after that horrible war, everybody has adapted to high altitude life, creating the sky ships as a way of travel. Sadly, the world is greatly split apart, causing all these countries in the sky to become isolated. Some people don’t like that, making it their life’s mission to visit as much of this fractured world as they can, possibly even mapping out the entire thing
Feel free to critique, though I personally find it interesting, I’m biased since it’s my work
What did I tell you, this is absolutely awesome idea. I love anything with Colossi, especially when a story involves failed attempts to harness the power of said creatures. Reminds me of Shadow of the Colossus, which was a legendary game.
There are somethings simply not meant for mankind to control
And yet we refuse to accept that, the world will be our oyster, or we’ll burn it down trying.
It reminds me of the plot of a Studio Ghibli movie, or really just the background for it
I can see that.
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O sorrow, I have ended, you see, by respecting you, because I am certain you will never leave me.
Ah! I realize it: your beauty lies in the force of your being. You are like those who never left the sad fireside corner of my poor black heart.
O my sorrow, you are better than a well-beloved: because I know that on the day of my final agony, you will be there, lying in my sheets, O sorrow, so that you might once again attempt to enter my heart.
So, in the world I’m imagining, a kind of creature called Colossi (Sing: Colossus) that are absolutely massive. The average Colossus reaches above commercial airplane flight heights. They are also pretty much invulnerable, at least by normal standards. No man made weapon has ever managed to pierce the hide of a Colossus, and are generally presumed to have an infinite lifespan. All in all, they’re borderline immortal. Colossi aren’t often seen, as they are incredibly solitary creatures, rarely seen awake (they sleep for extended periods of time, around 100-150 years, staying awake for a comparable amount of time). They are also incredibly magical, some scholars believing that they were the progenitors of magic, teaching them to the first wizards. Why is this important? Because people wanted to harness that power. They couldn’t tame a Colossi, but they could try to copy its genetic makeup. And it worked. Various kingdoms and nations managed to create Pseudo Colossi, technically called Biologically Engineered Gigantic Organisms or BEGO for short. Nobody calls them that anymore, mostly because they’re all dead. Why you may ask? Because everyone saw that everyone else also had these superpowered living super weapons and all did the natural thing. Started a world war. Fun fact, there was actually a evolutionary reason Colossi are so durable and peaceful. It’s because their entire bodies are magical, and when then die, some kind of reaction happens, causing them to poison the environment so much that staying there for more than 30 minutes results in instant death. In slightly better news, it also reshape the land around it for some reason, warping it greatly. This time, the corpses sunk underground and the surrounding earth rose high in the air, above the very clouds. Now, over a thousand years after that horrible war, everybody has adapted to high altitude life, creating the sky ships as a way of travel. Sadly, the world is greatly split apart, causing all these countries in the sky to become isolated. Some people don’t like that, making it their life’s mission to visit as much of this fractured world as they can, possibly even mapping out the entire thing
Feel free to critique, though I personally find it interesting, I’m biased since it’s my work
That's so cool.
If you choose to go with the Ghibli vibe Jester mentioned, I think that would really fit and add a bit to the cool factor.
So, in the world I’m imagining, a kind of creature called Colossi (Sing: Colossus) that are absolutely massive. The average Colossus reaches above commercial airplane flight heights. They are also pretty much invulnerable, at least by normal standards. No man made weapon has ever managed to pierce the hide of a Colossus, and are generally presumed to have an infinite lifespan. All in all, they’re borderline immortal. Colossi aren’t often seen, as they are incredibly solitary creatures, rarely seen awake (they sleep for extended periods of time, around 100-150 years, staying awake for a comparable amount of time). They are also incredibly magical, some scholars believing that they were the progenitors of magic, teaching them to the first wizards. Why is this important? Because people wanted to harness that power. They couldn’t tame a Colossi, but they could try to copy its genetic makeup. And it worked. Various kingdoms and nations managed to create Pseudo Colossi, technically called Biologically Engineered Gigantic Organisms or BEGO for short. Nobody calls them that anymore, mostly because they’re all dead. Why you may ask? Because everyone saw that everyone else also had these superpowered living super weapons and all did the natural thing. Started a world war. Fun fact, there was actually a evolutionary reason Colossi are so durable and peaceful. It’s because their entire bodies are magical, and when then die, some kind of reaction happens, causing them to poison the environment so much that staying there for more than 30 minutes results in instant death. In slightly better news, it also reshape the land around it for some reason, warping it greatly. This time, the corpses sunk underground and the surrounding earth rose high in the air, above the very clouds. Now, over a thousand years after that horrible war, everybody has adapted to high altitude life, creating the sky ships as a way of travel. Sadly, the world is greatly split apart, causing all these countries in the sky to become isolated. Some people don’t like that, making it their life’s mission to visit as much of this fractured world as they can, possibly even mapping out the entire thing
Feel free to critique, though I personally find it interesting, I’m biased since it’s my work
That's so cool.
If you choose to go with the Ghibli vibe Jester mentioned, I think that would really fit and add a bit to the cool factor.
Oh believe me I want to get incredibly whimsy with this. Basically imagine sky one piece (or granblue fantasy) mixed with a bit of Ghibli magic. I should probably watch Spirited Away again. That was a good movie
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O sorrow, I have ended, you see, by respecting you, because I am certain you will never leave me.
Ah! I realize it: your beauty lies in the force of your being. You are like those who never left the sad fireside corner of my poor black heart.
O my sorrow, you are better than a well-beloved: because I know that on the day of my final agony, you will be there, lying in my sheets, O sorrow, so that you might once again attempt to enter my heart.
So, in the world I’m imagining, a kind of creature called Colossi (Sing: Colossus) that are absolutely massive. The average Colossus reaches above commercial airplane flight heights. They are also pretty much invulnerable, at least by normal standards. No man made weapon has ever managed to pierce the hide of a Colossus, and are generally presumed to have an infinite lifespan. All in all, they’re borderline immortal. Colossi aren’t often seen, as they are incredibly solitary creatures, rarely seen awake (they sleep for extended periods of time, around 100-150 years, staying awake for a comparable amount of time). They are also incredibly magical, some scholars believing that they were the progenitors of magic, teaching them to the first wizards. Why is this important? Because people wanted to harness that power. They couldn’t tame a Colossi, but they could try to copy its genetic makeup. And it worked. Various kingdoms and nations managed to create Pseudo Colossi, technically called Biologically Engineered Gigantic Organisms or BEGO for short. Nobody calls them that anymore, mostly because they’re all dead. Why you may ask? Because everyone saw that everyone else also had these superpowered living super weapons and all did the natural thing. Started a world war. Fun fact, there was actually a evolutionary reason Colossi are so durable and peaceful. It’s because their entire bodies are magical, and when then die, some kind of reaction happens, causing them to poison the environment so much that staying there for more than 30 minutes results in instant death. In slightly better news, it also reshape the land around it for some reason, warping it greatly. This time, the corpses sunk underground and the surrounding earth rose high in the air, above the very clouds. Now, over a thousand years after that horrible war, everybody has adapted to high altitude life, creating the sky ships as a way of travel. Sadly, the world is greatly split apart, causing all these countries in the sky to become isolated. Some people don’t like that, making it their life’s mission to visit as much of this fractured world as they can, possibly even mapping out the entire thing
Feel free to critique, though I personally find it interesting, I’m biased since it’s my work
That's so cool.
If you choose to go with the Ghibli vibe Jester mentioned, I think that would really fit and add a bit to the cool factor.
Oh believe me I want to get incredibly whimsy with this. Basically imagine sky one piece (or granblue fantasy) mixed with a bit of Ghibli magic. I should probably watch Spirited Away again. That was a good movie
That sounds wonderful.
I never watched One Piece, but I've always thought it was a cool concept.
I have been incredibly productive today, so I’m going to be even more productive!
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O sorrow, I have ended, you see, by respecting you, because I am certain you will never leave me.
Ah! I realize it: your beauty lies in the force of your being. You are like those who never left the sad fireside corner of my poor black heart.
O my sorrow, you are better than a well-beloved: because I know that on the day of my final agony, you will be there, lying in my sheets, O sorrow, so that you might once again attempt to enter my heart.
A present. Next is Druid (if I can get some inspiration soon that is)
Monk- Way/Warrior of the Asura
The Asura. A being of pure chaos, wrath and destruction. You’ve learned to emulate that power, striking with pure force and no mercy
3rd level feature. Arms of the Asura: As a bonus action, you may spend one focus point to form a demonic arm. Unarmed strikes you make with this arm have an extra 5 feet of range, and may be used to manipulate objects If you have 2 extra arms, you may make an additional unarmed strike as a bonus action or whenever you use your flurry of blows. You may have up to 4 extra arms
6th level feature. Furious Flurry: You’ve learned how to take advantage of an enemy’s momentary weakness, making your attacks even more lethal. If you have advantage against a creature, you roll an extra damage die when you use your flurry of blows
11th level feature. Warpath. Each time you reduce a creature to zero hp, you regain a number of focus points equal to half your proficiency bonus (rounded down)
17th level feature. Unleash the 8 Trigrams: As a bonus action for 4 focus points you gain an extra two arms (even if you already had an extra 4) and the following benefits for the next 10 minutes:
Unarmed strikes you make are critical hits on an 18, 19 or 20
You gain an extra 20 ft of movement
You have advantage on all saving throws
If you kill a creature with less hp than the damage you dealt, you can deal that extra damage to one creature within 5 feet of the one you killed, so long as the original attack roll beats their armor class
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O sorrow, I have ended, you see, by respecting you, because I am certain you will never leave me.
Ah! I realize it: your beauty lies in the force of your being. You are like those who never left the sad fireside corner of my poor black heart.
O my sorrow, you are better than a well-beloved: because I know that on the day of my final agony, you will be there, lying in my sheets, O sorrow, so that you might once again attempt to enter my heart.
-Excerpt, Prayer for loving sorrow
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And yet we refuse to accept that, the world will be our oyster, or we’ll burn it down trying.
It reminds me of the plot of a Studio Ghibli movie, or really just the background for it
I love Studio Ghibli, even if one of the famous directors did say that Anime was a mistake. Anyway, I love titans, Colossi, and Gargantuan creatures.
Wonder why they think that
Someone made a video essay, but I can’t remember what it said. It was very interesting though.
Let him who is without sin cast the first stone.
Awake, impure, divine
Breathgiver of the Strugels
There it is, thank you so much Baalze.
I can see that.
O sorrow, I have ended, you see, by respecting you, because I am certain you will never leave me.
Ah! I realize it: your beauty lies in the force of your being. You are like those who never left the sad fireside corner of my poor black heart.
O my sorrow, you are better than a well-beloved: because I know that on the day of my final agony, you will be there, lying in my sheets, O sorrow, so that you might once again attempt to enter my heart.
-Excerpt, Prayer for loving sorrow
That's so cool.
If you choose to go with the Ghibli vibe Jester mentioned, I think that would really fit and add a bit to the cool factor.
Let him who is without sin cast the first stone.
Awake, impure, divine
Breathgiver of the Strugels
Not that it matters but I mentioned studio Ghibli not jester
Oh believe me I want to get incredibly whimsy with this. Basically imagine sky one piece (or granblue fantasy) mixed with a bit of Ghibli magic. I should probably watch Spirited Away again. That was a good movie
O sorrow, I have ended, you see, by respecting you, because I am certain you will never leave me.
Ah! I realize it: your beauty lies in the force of your being. You are like those who never left the sad fireside corner of my poor black heart.
O my sorrow, you are better than a well-beloved: because I know that on the day of my final agony, you will be there, lying in my sheets, O sorrow, so that you might once again attempt to enter my heart.
-Excerpt, Prayer for loving sorrow
That sounds wonderful.
I never watched One Piece, but I've always thought it was a cool concept.
Let him who is without sin cast the first stone.
Awake, impure, divine
Breathgiver of the Strugels
Frick.
I can't see pfps due to an issue I don't know how to fix, so I just assumed it was Jester.
Sorry, man.
Let him who is without sin cast the first stone.
Awake, impure, divine
Breathgiver of the Strugels
I have been incredibly productive today, so I’m going to be even more productive!
O sorrow, I have ended, you see, by respecting you, because I am certain you will never leave me.
Ah! I realize it: your beauty lies in the force of your being. You are like those who never left the sad fireside corner of my poor black heart.
O my sorrow, you are better than a well-beloved: because I know that on the day of my final agony, you will be there, lying in my sheets, O sorrow, so that you might once again attempt to enter my heart.
-Excerpt, Prayer for loving sorrow
It’s totally fine, not seeing PFPs must be so annoying. Is everyone just like a completely Balck square?
Like a grey, nondescript figure. Rounded shoulders, spherical head, white on a grey background.
Let him who is without sin cast the first stone.
Awake, impure, divine
Breathgiver of the Strugels
what does mine look like?
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I can actually see it.
An AI-generated man in armor with red eyes and an anime haircut.
Let him who is without sin cast the first stone.
Awake, impure, divine
Breathgiver of the Strugels
......weird
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A present. Next is Druid (if I can get some inspiration soon that is)
Monk- Way/Warrior of the Asura
The Asura. A being of pure chaos, wrath and destruction. You’ve learned to emulate that power, striking with pure force and no mercy
3rd level feature. Arms of the Asura: As a bonus action, you may spend one focus point to form a demonic arm. Unarmed strikes you make with this arm have an extra 5 feet of range, and may be used to manipulate objects If you have 2 extra arms, you may make an additional unarmed strike as a bonus action or whenever you use your flurry of blows. You may have up to 4 extra arms
6th level feature. Furious Flurry: You’ve learned how to take advantage of an enemy’s momentary weakness, making your attacks even more lethal. If you have advantage against a creature, you roll an extra damage die when you use your flurry of blows
11th level feature. Warpath. Each time you reduce a creature to zero hp, you regain a number of focus points equal to half your proficiency bonus (rounded down)
17th level feature. Unleash the 8 Trigrams: As a bonus action for 4 focus points you gain an extra two arms (even if you already had an extra 4) and the following benefits for the next 10 minutes:
O sorrow, I have ended, you see, by respecting you, because I am certain you will never leave me.
Ah! I realize it: your beauty lies in the force of your being. You are like those who never left the sad fireside corner of my poor black heart.
O my sorrow, you are better than a well-beloved: because I know that on the day of my final agony, you will be there, lying in my sheets, O sorrow, so that you might once again attempt to enter my heart.
-Excerpt, Prayer for loving sorrow