I am a relatively new DM (I've done a few one-shots before) and have been working on a campaign that takes place in a Carribbean-like setting. I'm planning a swashbuckling adventure that starts after the chapter I am attaching below. I like the direction I went with chapters 2 and 3, but I'm not 100% on the first chapter. I would love some suggestions as to how I can improve this section.
I am a relatively new DM (I've done a few one-shots before) and have been working on a campaign that takes place in a Carribbean-like setting. I'm planning a swashbuckling adventure that starts after the chapter I am attaching below. I like the direction I went with chapters 2 and 3, but I'm not 100% on the first chapter. I would love some suggestions as to how I can improve this section.
Here is the first chapter:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/19ayx2JA7pKBPRPWuGljjmvM7kjHJBP9IEzW0srDshio/edit?usp=sharing