Is my backstory good?

this is for a character named OverLord Will. he is a Dragonborn with great power, but not so great wisdom. he is my main character, and I'd like to know if this is good.

 I lived in the natural cave system of Exsnare, a spiteful planet where no creature should ever live. I lived with my father, who I now hate with all my heart. he was a horrible person, corrupted by his own belifes and lies. I never knew my mother. she died when I was 1 notch old. I left that horrible god forgiven place when I was 14 notches. I came upon new lands with my last sliver of hope for a future. After living in GoulCrest for 3 years, I finally met someone. A sweet woman named Crystal. it was love at first glance. Well, maybe not, but still, the love was strong. I was on my way through town when I accidentally crushed her vermillads. instead of scolding me, she asked me on a date. 6 moths later, we were married. a year after that, SnakeRoot came, enraged by the news of my marriage. he burned Goulcrest to the ground, killed my wife, and left me with a scar that held this brutal memory