Does my character storytelling suck

Okay, so I'm new to D&D and I'd like to know how good my character is at creating the "magic" of the game. For example, this is how my character reacts to things.

1: Will says something sarcastic (for example) "Are you always agery?" his response: "No, sometimes I'm sleeping."

2: Will will imedietly, go first (for example) "You hear the noise of faint whispering among the trees." His response: "I go investigate." without any heisting.

3: There is a wall: (for example) "I smash through the wall."

Is this good or bad for a character with a 19 strength score 20 charisma score, 10 wisdom score?

Play the sort of character you'd want to play in uour favorite fantasy movie. If you're having fun, and you're not murderhoboing the party into prison, should be fine....

Sounds to me like you are playing a sarcastic and straight-forward character. Nothing wrong with that. My best suggestion would be just to make sure you have a way to connect with the party in some way. For example, I played a Barbarian who had a bad habit of just walking up and smashing people with his maul if he thought they needed smashing. After a few times doing this when he shouldn't, he started leaning over to the Wizard (aka "the bookish nerdy guy") and whispering "Should I smash him?". If the Wizard said yes, he would walk up nonchalantly and smack the guy without saying a word.