Is this going to be finished?

What do you mean?

I think he means that “gain one of the following effects” is still incomplete and you need to add more than one effects. 

Checked it over.

Looks fine to me.  At best I could add more actions to the first option, which I will do when home from vacation but other than that I see no issue 

But what is this level’s transformation flaw? And what’s the transformation boon options?

The flaw is the action on the main level.

The boon options are the options that each set attack modifiers