So, last time i made a promotion for my novel series that I've been working on for a long time, and I forgot to tell everyone here that another book is ready for order. The second book of The Elementalist Chronicles is called "Spark of a Demon's Spirit" and it centers around our hero losing control of his demon's powers. The demon moves to take possession of Peter's body and the demon is willing to weaken him to the point that his enemies will be able to do the killing.
Just read the first page and I have some thoughts. It's a lot of explanation of backstory right out of the get-go. I think maybe showing some of the backstory or having it come up organically would be a better way to go about it, rather than just laying it all out at the beginning. Cheers mate and I hope you find success!
So, last time i made a promotion for my novel series that I've been working on for a long time, and I forgot to tell everyone here that another book is ready for order. The second book of The Elementalist Chronicles is called "Spark of a Demon's Spirit" and it centers around our hero losing control of his demon's powers. The demon moves to take possession of Peter's body and the demon is willing to weaken him to the point that his enemies will be able to do the killing.
https://www.amazon.com/Elementalist-Chronicles-Spark-Demons-Spirit-ebook/dp/B07BPHW8DL/ref=pd_rhf_gw_p_img_3?_encoding=UTF8&psc=1&refRID=4A6DJCWAXAH092JMT357
My name is Patrick Traylor!
jedi knight
Writer of a novel series
Roleplayer of sorts
Smartass
~~I remember what happened in the north!~~
Just read the first page and I have some thoughts. It's a lot of explanation of backstory right out of the get-go. I think maybe showing some of the backstory or having it come up organically would be a better way to go about it, rather than just laying it all out at the beginning. Cheers mate and I hope you find success!
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Yeah, I was a little hyped up on coffee that night and it was early in the morning. Third book doesn't have that!
My name is Patrick Traylor!
jedi knight
Writer of a novel series
Roleplayer of sorts
Smartass
~~I remember what happened in the north!~~