Are you prepared to journey to Icewind Dale, the frozen north of Faerûn? Times are strange, and countless rumors swirl around this cold and isolated land, like so many snowflakes in an endless blizzard. The next D&D adventure, announced last weekend at D&D Live 2020, is a dark fantasy horror story titled Icewind Dale: Rime of the Frostmaiden. This encounter begins a five-part (or perhaps more?) encounter series called “Icewind Mail: Special Delivery” and is a non-canon dark comedy that leads into the official adventure. Well, sort of. It’s more like it tosses players in the general direction of the official adventure with some silly props and says to go have fun.
Exploring Luskan First Paragraph: (Changed the word in bold)
Parcelmaster Bassk gives the characters a map of the city of Luskan and a list of people seeking to deliver packages. Use this map and lists as props—either by sharing them digitally with your players if you’re playing online or printing them out if you’re playing in person—that you can your players can all look at and point to together. Since the people they need to collect parcels from aren’t listed on the map, they’ll have to look between the list and the map, helping them get more immersed in the act of traveling through the city.
Conclusion: Set Sail for Icewind Dale Second Paragraph: (just remove the third word - ‘as’)
The moment as the Icebreaker departs Luskan and sails northward toward the horizon is a perfect time for this session to draw to a close. Many chilly adventures await! However, if you want to give this episode an ominous cliffhanger, describe day passing to night as the characters begin to make their northward along the coast. Ask all of the characters to make Wisdom (Perception) checks as they fall asleep. Read or paraphrase the following to the character with the highest result: ...
Thank you! I tried to hit him up on Twitter but a "Hey, DM me for some edits to the Encounter of the Week" might've unintentionally made me sound like a troll. The kind folks in the dev update Twitch chat this AM led me here. Stay cool ya'll
Thanks for your keen eye, Warpants. Twitter moves awful fast, and notifications like yours often slip through the cracks. Making a post over here on the forums and alerting someone on the DDB staff is better for me than email or Twitter DMs or what have you, anyway.
I should've made it clearer - that first 'a' wasn't obvious enough in my first post. I like the other changes you made!
2nd Sentence of the whole thing: "The next D&D adventure, announced last weekend at D&D Live 2020, is a dark fantasy horror story titled Icewind Dale: Rime of the Frostmaiden."
Four little grammar issues I spotted:
1 Paragraph: (Added the words in bold)
Are you prepared to journey to Icewind Dale, the frozen north of Faerûn? Times are strange, and countless rumors swirl around this cold and isolated land, like so many snowflakes in an endless blizzard. The next D&D adventure, announced last weekend at D&D Live 2020, is a dark fantasy horror story titled Icewind Dale: Rime of the Frostmaiden. This encounter begins a five-part (or perhaps more?) encounter series called “Icewind Mail: Special Delivery” and is a non-canon dark comedy that leads into the official adventure. Well, sort of. It’s more like it tosses players in the general direction of the official adventure with some silly props and says to go have fun.
Exploring Luskan First Paragraph: (Changed the word in bold)
Parcelmaster Bassk gives the characters a map of the city of Luskan and a list of people seeking to deliver packages. Use this map and lists as props—either by sharing them digitally with your players if you’re playing online or printing them out if you’re playing in person—that you can your players can all look at and point to together. Since the people they need to collect parcels from aren’t listed on the map, they’ll have to look between the list and the map, helping them get more immersed in the act of traveling through the city.
Conclusion: Set Sail for Icewind Dale Second Paragraph: (just remove the third word - ‘as’)
The moment as the Icebreaker departs Luskan and sails northward toward the horizon is a perfect time for this session to draw to a close. Many chilly adventures await! However, if you want to give this episode an ominous cliffhanger, describe day passing to night as the characters begin to make their northward along the coast. Ask all of the characters to make Wisdom (Perception) checks as they fall asleep. Read or paraphrase the following to the character with the highest result: ...
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Thanks for the feedback - this has been passed along to James :D
Thank you! I tried to hit him up on Twitter but a "Hey, DM me for some edits to the Encounter of the Week" might've unintentionally made me sound like a troll. The kind folks in the dev update Twitch chat this AM led me here. Stay cool ya'll
Thanks for your keen eye, Warpants. Twitter moves awful fast, and notifications like yours often slip through the cracks. Making a post over here on the forums and alerting someone on the DDB staff is better for me than email or Twitter DMs or what have you, anyway.
I should've made it clearer - that first 'a' wasn't obvious enough in my first post. I like the other changes you made!
2nd Sentence of the whole thing: "The next D&D adventure, announced last weekend at D&D Live 2020, is a dark fantasy horror story titled Icewind Dale: Rime of the Frostmaiden."
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