I was reading through the class page for the new Blood Hunter class and noticed a few formatting discrepancies. For the formatting changes I compared against the latest version of the class on dmsguild.com.
In the Creating a Blood Hunter section, there is an extra space between the words in and lost in the last sentence of the 2nd paragraph.
In the Quick Build sidebar, there is an extra line break between the words Haunted and One in the last sentence.
In the Hit Points section, there is an extra period at the end of the third paragraph after the word 1st (there should be no period here to keep it consistent with the formatting of other classes, but this is consistent with the formatting in the PDF for the class).
In the Primal Rites feature, the names of each of the rites should be bolded as well as italicized.
In the Esoteric Rites feature, the names of each of the rites should be bolded as well as italicized. Also, there is an extra space between the tile and the description of the third option, Rite of the Dead.
In the Blood Maledict feature, the words Blood Curses in the second sentence of the 1st paragraph should link to the Blood Curses section later on. Also the period after the word choice in the second sentence of the 1st paragraph should be a comma.
In the Rite of the Dawn feature, the title of the Rite of the Dawn ability should be bolded as well as italicized.
Order of the Lycan
In the introduction, the word Nature in the last sentence of the 1st paragraph should not be capitalized and should not link to the Nature skill. Also, there is an extra space between the words who and undergo in the first sentence of the 2nd paragraph.
In The Onus of Lycanthropy sidebar, there is an extra space between the words sacred and oaths in the last sentence of the 1st paragraph.
In the Hybrid Transformation feature, the words Monster's Manual in the 2nd paragraph should be Monster Manual and these words should be italicized and should link to the Lycanthrope section of the MM.
Order of the Mutant
In the Mutagens section, there is an extra space between the tile and the description of the Side effect paragraph for the Rapidity option.
Order of the Profane Soul
In the Otherworldly Patron feature, the words Player's Handbook should link to the Otherworldly Patrons section of the PHB, the words Sword Coast Adventurer's Guide should link to the section The Undying in the SCAG, and the words Xanathar's Guide to Everything should link to the Warlock section in XGtE.
In the Pact Magic feature, the words chapter 10 should link to chapter 10 of the PHB and the words chapter 11 should link to the Warlock Spells section in chapter 11 of the PHB.
In the Rite Focus feature, the words chapter 5 should link to chapter 5 of the PHB.
I was reviewing the blood hunter when I noticed that the document may be out dated. The section Blood Maledict has the following sentance, ""
"At 2nd level, you gain the knowledge to further channel, and sacrifice, a part of your vital essence to curse and manipulate your enemies. You gain one blood curse of your choice, detailed in the "blood curses" section below. You learn one additional blood curse of your choice at 6th, 10th, 14th, and 18th level."
It should say,
"At 2nd level, you gain the knowledge to further channel, and sacrifice, a part of your vital essence to curse and manipulate your enemies. You gain one blood curse of your choice, detailed in the "blood curses" section below. You learn one additional blood curse of your choice at 5th, 9th, 13th, 16th, and 20th level."
If this is the wrong section could a mod please move it to the correct forum section. I couldn't figure out where else to point out the error. They may be more things out of date. If I see more I will report them here.
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I was reading through the class page for the new Blood Hunter class and noticed a few formatting discrepancies. For the formatting changes I compared against the latest version of the class on dmsguild.com.
In the Creating a Blood Hunter section, there is an extra space between the words in and lost in the last sentence of the 2nd paragraph.
In the Quick Build sidebar, there is an extra line break between the words Haunted and One in the last sentence.
In the Hit Points section, there is an extra period at the end of the third paragraph after the word 1st (there should be no period here to keep it consistent with the formatting of other classes, but this is consistent with the formatting in the PDF for the class).
In the Primal Rites feature, the names of each of the rites should be bolded as well as italicized.
In the Esoteric Rites feature, the names of each of the rites should be bolded as well as italicized. Also, there is an extra space between the tile and the description of the third option, Rite of the Dead.
In the Blood Maledict feature, the words Blood Curses in the second sentence of the 1st paragraph should link to the Blood Curses section later on. Also the period after the word choice in the second sentence of the 1st paragraph should be a comma.
In the Rite of the Dawn feature, the title of the Rite of the Dawn ability should be bolded as well as italicized.
Order of the Lycan
In the introduction, the word Nature in the last sentence of the 1st paragraph should not be capitalized and should not link to the Nature skill. Also, there is an extra space between the words who and undergo in the first sentence of the 2nd paragraph.
In The Onus of Lycanthropy sidebar, there is an extra space between the words sacred and oaths in the last sentence of the 1st paragraph.
In the Hybrid Transformation feature, the words Monster's Manual in the 2nd paragraph should be Monster Manual and these words should be italicized and should link to the Lycanthrope section of the MM.
Order of the Mutant
In the Mutagens section, there is an extra space between the tile and the description of the Side effect paragraph for the Rapidity option.
Order of the Profane Soul
In the Otherworldly Patron feature, the words Player's Handbook should link to the Otherworldly Patrons section of the PHB, the words Sword Coast Adventurer's Guide should link to the section The Undying in the SCAG, and the words Xanathar's Guide to Everything should link to the Warlock section in XGtE.
In the Pact Magic feature, the words chapter 10 should link to chapter 10 of the PHB and the words chapter 11 should link to the Warlock Spells section in chapter 11 of the PHB.
In the Rite Focus feature, the words chapter 5 should link to chapter 5 of the PHB.
I was reviewing the blood hunter when I noticed that the document may be out dated. The section Blood Maledict has the following sentance, ""
"At 2nd level, you gain the knowledge to further channel, and sacrifice, a part of your vital essence to curse and manipulate your enemies. You gain one blood curse of your choice, detailed in the "blood curses" section below. You learn one additional blood curse of your choice at 6th, 10th, 14th, and 18th level."
It should say,
"At 2nd level, you gain the knowledge to further channel, and sacrifice, a part of your vital essence to curse and manipulate your enemies. You gain one blood curse of your choice, detailed in the "blood curses" section below. You learn one additional blood curse of your choice at 5th, 9th, 13th, 16th, and 20th level."
If this is the wrong section could a mod please move it to the correct forum section. I couldn't figure out where else to point out the error. They may be more things out of date. If I see more I will report them here.