Dangawru, inconsistent formatting of many in-line sub-headers.
Area 7, Treasure (bolded but not italicized)
Area 9, Window (not bolded)
Area 11, Throne (Should only be bolded and not italicized)
Area 14, Treasure (bolded but not italicized)
Area 18, Treasure (bolded but not italicized)
Area 24, Treasure (bolded but not italicized)
Fixed Errors
Tortle Race, “Adventurers at Heart”: there is an erroneous line break between “A tortle settlement is primarily used as a kind of moot,” and “where tortles can socialize with one another, share useful information, and trade with strangers in the safety of greater numbers."
High Horn: there is an erroneous line break between “At high tide, three” and “of the wrecks...”
Ahoyhoy, Area 2: Erroneous line-break between "stand guard on" and "10-foot-high wooden ramparts..."
Random Encounters: the "s" in "blood hawks" is not bolded AND the last "s" in "reef sharks" is not included in the monster link
Dangwaru, Area 24: The “treasure” section has an erroneous line break between “The third chest is” and “unlocked and contains...”.
Shrine of Fangs, “Talking Snakes”: there is an erroneous line break between “...stole an icon of Merr-“ and “shaulk.”
New Monsters, Tortle: there is an erroneous line break between “They“ and “don’t wear clothing...”.
New Monsters, Geonid: there is an erroneous line-break between "contains" and "a live poisonous snake."
New Monsters, Geonid: The "Boulder Guise" box section uses the wrong font (the normal text font rather than the smaller creature box font)
New Monsters, Topi: The "Turn Resistance" and "Undead Fortitude" sections of the box entry use the wrong font (the normal text font rather than the smaller creature box font)
In the intro, the “Text that appears in a box like this is meant to be read aloud or paraphrased for the players when their characters first arrive at a location or under a specific circumstance, as described in the text.” is not placed in a boxed text box.
Dangwaru, Area 22: It is missing. Update: Turns out it’s an issue with headers. Text at the end of Area 20 should be Area 21, Area 21 is actually Are 22.
Looks like a few of these have been fixed (Items 1 and 3), but still more to go. Also noticed some new ones:
Throughout the Typhoon Palace, many in-line headers "e.g., "Treasure.", "Seaside Entrance." are not bolded and italicized. Others are (e.g., "Throne"). I would assume they all should be bolded and italicized, as is usually WotC's style. There are a lot of instances, so I won't list them all here, but it's a pervasive formatting inconsistency.
Topi entry has an erroneous line-break between "contains" and "a live poisonous snake."
The "Turn Resistance" and "Undead Fortitude" sections of the Topi entry use the wrong font (the normal text font rather than the smaller creature box font)
Area 2 of Ahoyhoy: Erroneous line-break between "stand guard on" and "10-foot-high wooden ramparts..."
Random Encounters: the "s" in "blood hawks" is not bolded AND the last "s" in "reef sharks" is not included in the monster link
Random Encounters: the "s" in "blood hawks" is not bolded AND the last "s" in "reef sharks" is not included in the monster link
That's because the system doesn't currently support plural tooltips.
Yes, but they usually make sure the "s" matches the style of the linked text; in this case, red text and bolded. These instances do not match similar entries in the same section and throughout the site.
There's still a lot of formatting issues with this. Lots more links needed. Seriously, give me access to it for just one day and I'll fix them all, for free. It's triggering my anal-retentive gland.
Most of my errors reported have been fixed (yay!). The only issue I can see is the Typhoon Palace subheaders. The formatting remain inconsistent. Some are bolded, some are bolded and italicized, and some are still in normal weighted font.
Here's the list of those that need a look (I am assuming non-treasure subheaders are only to be bolded and not italicized):
Area 7, Treasure (bolded but not italicized)
Area 9, Window (not bolded)
Area 11, Throne (Should only be bolded and not italicized)
Area 14, Treasure (bolded but not italicized)
Area 18, Treasure (bolded but not italicized)
Area 24, Treasure (bolded but not italicized)
This needs some cleaning up, but we are in a better place than we were. :-)
Just wanted to add on more suggestion, about the nav on the left side. The two most important places on the island (Ahoyhoy and Dangwaru) are buried under "exploring the island" while two-paragraph locations (like the Geonid Caves) get their own section.
I'd suggest keep all the random encounters under "Exploring the Island" and making Ahoyhoy and Dangwaru their own entries. (Alternatively, to better match the PDF, a section called "Island Locations" could have a drop down that includes those two as well as High Horn, Geonid Caves, etc.)
Remaining Errors (Updated 11/1/17)
Fixed Errors
Tortle Race, “Adventurers at Heart”: there is an erroneous line break between “A tortle settlement is primarily used as a kind of moot,” and “where tortles can socialize with one another, share useful information, and trade with strangers in the safety of greater numbers."High Horn: there is an erroneous line break between “At high tide, three” and “of the wrecks...”Ahoyhoy, Area 2: Erroneous line-break between "stand guard on" and "10-foot-high wooden ramparts..."Random Encounters: the "s" in "blood hawks" is not bolded AND the last "s" in "reef sharks" is not included in the monster linkDangwaru, Area 24: The “treasure” section has an erroneous line break between “The third chest is” and “unlocked and contains...”.Shrine of Fangs, “Talking Snakes”: there is an erroneous line break between “...stole an icon of Merr-“ and “shaulk.”New Monsters, Tortle: there is an erroneous line break between “They“ and “don’t wear clothing...”.New Monsters, Geonid: there is an erroneous line-break between "contains" and "a live poisonous snake."New Monsters, Geonid: The "Boulder Guise" box section uses the wrong font (the normal text font rather than the smaller creature box font)New Monsters, Topi: The "Turn Resistance" and "Undead Fortitude" sections of the box entry use the wrong font (the normal text font rather than the smaller creature box font)In the intro, the “Text that appears in a box like this is meant to be read aloud or paraphrased for the players when their characters first arrive at a location or under a specific circumstance, as described in the text.” is not placed in a boxed text box.Dangwaru, Area 22: It is missing. Update: Turns out it’s an issue with headers. Text at the end of Area 20 should be Area 21, Area 21 is actually Are 22.Just wondering if there's any update on correcting the errors in Tortle Package. Thanks!
The High Horn error was still there the last time I checked.
"Any society that would give up a little liberty to gain a little security will deserve neither and lose both" -- allegedly Benjamin Franklin
Tooltips (Help/aid)
More errors:
The DMG link in area 1 of Ahoyhoy links to the DMG "home menu", not the listed chapter.
The Ahoyhoy Lore table contains the sentence "A twoheaded dinosaur haunts the shallows at high tide." Two-headed should be hyphenated, I believe.
The ToA link in that same table suffers from the same problem as the DMG link in area 1.
Area 2 of Ahoyhoy has an erroneous line break between "Two tortles (see 'Tortles') stand guard on" and "10-foot-high wooden ramparts..."
Sentence 2 of the description of area 4 of Ahoyhoy contains an unnecessary comma.
Pteranodons isn't tooltipped in area 6 of Ahoyhoy.
The PHB link in area 9 of Ahoyhoy has the usual problem.
Nothing in the Ahoyhoy Goods table is tooltipped.
"Any society that would give up a little liberty to gain a little security will deserve neither and lose both" -- allegedly Benjamin Franklin
Tooltips (Help/aid)
sorry, I'm stupid and inattentive
"Any society that would give up a little liberty to gain a little security will deserve neither and lose both" -- allegedly Benjamin Franklin
Tooltips (Help/aid)
Looks like a few of these have been fixed (Items 1 and 3), but still more to go. Also noticed some new ones:
Getting closer to a fully corrected Tortle Package! But still a ways to go. :-)
"Any society that would give up a little liberty to gain a little security will deserve neither and lose both" -- allegedly Benjamin Franklin
Tooltips (Help/aid)
There's still a lot of formatting issues with this. Lots more links needed. Seriously, give me access to it for just one day and I'll fix them all, for free. It's triggering my anal-retentive gland.
Most of the errors reported by the OP has been fixed (if not all of them).
Most of my errors reported have been fixed (yay!). The only issue I can see is the Typhoon Palace subheaders. The formatting remain inconsistent. Some are bolded, some are bolded and italicized, and some are still in normal weighted font.
Here's the list of those that need a look (I am assuming non-treasure subheaders are only to be bolded and not italicized):
This needs some cleaning up, but we are in a better place than we were. :-)
For some reason, the Tortle side-bar is appearing like this:
Just wanted to add on more suggestion, about the nav on the left side. The two most important places on the island (Ahoyhoy and Dangwaru) are buried under "exploring the island" while two-paragraph locations (like the Geonid Caves) get their own section.
I'd suggest keep all the random encounters under "Exploring the Island" and making Ahoyhoy and Dangwaru their own entries. (Alternatively, to better match the PDF, a section called "Island Locations" could have a drop down that includes those two as well as High Horn, Geonid Caves, etc.)
Thanks! Love the work you guys do!
Formatting error: In the PDF version the second and fourth paragraph of 'Shrine of Fangs' are box texts; on DDB they're normal text.