Hi Thanks will remove the Temp hp from the build as I agree it didn't feel right.
and your welcome - you polished it all up for me what can I say, you deserve it...
Once again I appreciate it. The core idea of the class was really sweet though, because it basically seemed like you were going for the Avatar: The Last Airbender vibe where the subclass is basically bending the essence of shadow in combat which is thematic as all hell...and 90% of the kit and 100% theme was all you. So be proud of that because all I did was move some things around, reword things a bit, and present 1 thing that was actually different from what you started with. The main guts of the subclass was all you.
Finally, if you disagree with the changes I suggested, ya don't owe it to me to include them if you don't agree with them. I won't take offense if you preferred your original vision. If that is the case I'd just go and fix up the wording you were using to clarify things and stick to what you had before. As I said, you don't owe some rando on the internet anything just because they were spit balling some ideas. If you feel that the changes I suggested don't hold true to your original vision, go back to your original vision.
Ok, That has been edited in and out now properly.
Enjoy the New Subclass...
Once again I appreciate it. The core idea of the class was really sweet though, because it basically seemed like you were going for the Avatar: The Last Airbender vibe where the subclass is basically bending the essence of shadow in combat which is thematic as all hell...and 90% of the kit and 100% theme was all you. So be proud of that because all I did was move some things around, reword things a bit, and present 1 thing that was actually different from what you started with. The main guts of the subclass was all you.
Finally, if you disagree with the changes I suggested, ya don't owe it to me to include them if you don't agree with them. I won't take offense if you preferred your original vision. If that is the case I'd just go and fix up the wording you were using to clarify things and stick to what you had before. As I said, you don't owe some rando on the internet anything just because they were spit balling some ideas. If you feel that the changes I suggested don't hold true to your original vision, go back to your original vision.
They fit perfectly - Thank you. :D