Hello everyone. I'm working on my first DM's guild project and, as part of it, I've made a new sorcerer origin. I'm wondering if people are willing to help with fine tuning it. The name of it still kind of sucks, so if you think of a better name, let me know. However, my biggest concern is balancing with other sorcerer origins. In particular, I'm struggling to balance the 18th level ability, as all the others seem to vary a lot, so I'm having a hard time comparing it with others. If you spot other issues, please let me know. Thank you everyone!
Hello everyone. I'm working on my first DM's guild project and, as part of it, I've made a new sorcerer origin. I'm wondering if people are willing to help with fine tuning it. The name of it still kind of sucks, so if you think of a better name, let me know. However, my biggest concern is balancing with other sorcerer origins. In particular, I'm struggling to balance the 18th level ability, as all the others seem to vary a lot, so I'm having a hard time comparing it with others. If you spot other issues, please let me know. Thank you everyone!
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