One of my players rolled a Dragonborn Cleric and wanted to find something related to Dragonborn deities like Tamara. He found the "Domain of Tamara" made by Zukarlyn in the Homebrew section. I felt it was too much like a Life Domain Cleric so I took to reworking it for him. It is here:
"Disciple of Life" and "Disciple of Mercy" overlap and contradict one another. They're both the same ability, but one says "2 + the spell level" and the other says "1 + the spell level".
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Tayn of Darkwood. Lvl 10 human Life Cleric of Lathander. Retired.
Ikram Sahir ibn Malik al-Sayyid Ra'ad, Second Son of the House of Ra'ad, Defender of the Burning Sands. Lvl 9 Brass Dragonborn Sorcerer + Greater Fire Elemental Devil.
Viktor Gavriil. Lvl 20 White Dragonborn Grave Cleric, of Kurgan the God of Death.
One of my players rolled a Dragonborn Cleric and wanted to find something related to Dragonborn deities like Tamara. He found the "Domain of Tamara" made by Zukarlyn in the Homebrew section. I felt it was too much like a Life Domain Cleric so I took to reworking it for him. It is here:
https://www.dndbeyond.com/subclasses/213124-merciful-domain
I would like some feedback on it.
Thanks!
"Disciple of Life" and "Disciple of Mercy" overlap and contradict one another. They're both the same ability, but one says "2 + the spell level" and the other says "1 + the spell level".
Tayn of Darkwood. Lvl 10 human Life Cleric of Lathander. Retired.
Ikram Sahir ibn Malik al-Sayyid Ra'ad, Second Son of the House of Ra'ad, Defender of the Burning Sands. Lvl 9 Brass Dragonborn Sorcerer + Greater Fire Elemental Devil.
Viktor Gavriil. Lvl 20 White Dragonborn Grave Cleric, of Kurgan the God of Death.
Anzio Faro. Lvl 5 Prot. Aasimar Light Cleric.
Isnt the grave domain already merciful? This looks like it was just designed to be a better life domain.
Question about this: "treated as a dragon for purposes of being immune to the frightful presence of dragons or other similar creatures."
Dragons are not immune to frightful presence, so to what does this refer to?
Also, you dont have any domain spells.