Name: Elena Liliana

Race: Half-elf

Old: 29 class Rogue / Paladin

I got dark mahogany wave hair, down to my shoulders.

I ware light green fabric cloth, nothing fancy, whit leather armor

I lived whit my family in a modest house in the woods.

My mother Lyra (elf) and my father Patric (human) and my sisters Amedee 4 years old and Solona 2 years old and at this point I were 14.

My mother were a Paladin how served Karamis Goddess of faith. I was alway hanging around learning every little bit I could.

My father was a trades man for people in high places.

The objects he collected for them were most of the time very rare, expensive and magical.

I did not have many friends, but about an hour in to the wood lived Ricardo, a human and he lived of the land.

He taught me how to hunt, which mushroom I could and could not eat.

He thought me how to sneak and other stuff I dint think my parents would be impressed whit.

One day I was walking home, and after a wile a smell of smoke hit me, and it were getting stronger, and then I heard their scream.

Screams of pain and for help. I started to run and as I came up to the treeline to our house.

I could here my father on the inside screaming, "Plese lett them go, just take me, dont harm them, they cant breat. Lett us out!"

One of the man on horses screamed "just give me what i want and i will lett you all, live”.

"i Cant i heard my fathe screm"

"thats your scoice the man said an trough an other tortsh on the house, and the firer just ingolft the hole hous.

I could here my sisters last screm befor it got really quiet, and i new, i will never get thous screm out of my head .

Or the guiylt out of my heart for not dying whit them.

As I were trying to cry wery quiet they saw me in the distance (5o feet) away, I started running.

They yells at etch other “ Get here, she my-bee knows were it is, and if she dont we kill her to because she seen us”

I kept running to Ricardo house, and suddenly I hear a “Swiff” near my ear, and one of the guys grabed his chest.

There was an arrow right trough he fell to the ground. The other man said “ you are going to regret this, mark my words, I will find you and you are going to die if you cant give me whats mine. I will bee there when you last expect it. And he took of.

Ricardo came running and took me in his arms, I just broke down in tears.

My whole family were gone because of some artifact. My life were gone as I new it.

We went back to the house, there were nothing left, not even the remains of my family.

I were looking around and I saw a glimmer in the shimmeney to the stove. There was a small hole there and I took out a beautiful bracelet, made in silver whit stones a red, a green, a blue ,and a white haning from it. I never seen that before? could this bee what they were after?

I tryied to put it on but Ricardo stopt me. " If this is what they are after, you need to keep it hiden so they never find you!

Ricardo took me in, and he has been my guardian ever since that day ( I am 29 now). he learn me al the tricks of a rouge and i have some of a paladin.

By age of 29 i made of my mind. I were going to find those bastards that took my family from me, and i am giong to find out how far up it gets, and what is this braclet , why kill to get it!

I kisst ricardo on the cheek , and started to take my first step alone out in the world.

when it got dark i found a place to camp, i lighted a fire.

And as always , every night since the fire i said "Amedee and Solna, it ok to come now" And I sat down and talked to my dead sisters about my day. i dont know if i completly lost it, becuse i swere i can see them , but they are dead, so most likly they are just in my head or or they...

Instead of center-aligned text, I would got with left-aligned text, as it is easier to read for longer passages like this. Beyond that, I'd say this gives a very strong impression of your characters background and frame of mind.

I like your story.  It was so well described that I could envision the whole scene as I was reading it.

Thanks! Oh Im so glad to hear that. no just to the problem to find a grupe to play whit. so you have any tips on how to find on that could play in GMT time? or is it hard?

Thank you so much! no to find a grupe to play whit.