Does my character storytelling suck

Okay, so I'm new to D&D and I'd like to know how good my character is at creating the "magic" of the game. For example, this is how my character reacts to things.

1: Will says something sarcastic (for example) "Are you always agery?" his response: "No, sometimes I'm sleeping."

2: Will will imedietly, go first (for example) "You hear the noise of faint whispering among the trees." His response: "I go investigate." without any heisting.

3: There is a wall: (for example) "I smash through the wall."

Is this good or bad for a character with a 19 strength score 20 charisma score, 10 wisdom score?

Play the sort of character you'd want to play in uour favorite fantasy movie. If you're having fun, and you're not murderhoboing the party into prison, should be fine....