I see you completely ignored all of the advice I gave you for your fighter subclass, except for the damage reduction, which is better, but another dice rolls is much more complicated to calculate and will slow things down. Also, try to word things well, clearly, and like the official books.
hey guys I want feedback on my home brew and just get it out there better so I’m putting every single of my homebrews here thank you guys
Adult glass dragon https://www.dndbeyond.com/homebrew/creations/view?entityTypeId=779871897&id=5945574
B3 battle droid https://www.dndbeyond.com/homebrew/creations/view?entityTypeId=1743923279&id=1893786
Blood vine https://www.dndbeyond.com/homebrew/creations/view?entityTypeId=779871897&id=5402110
Energy ball https://www.dndbeyond.com/homebrew/creations/view?entityTypeId=779871897&id=5929057
Flicker blade https://www.dndbeyond.com/homebrew/creations/view?entityTypeId=789467139&id=2565890
Goat folk https://www.dndbeyond.com/homebrew/creations/view?entityTypeId=1743923279&id=2040052
Goblin king https://www.dndbeyond.com/homebrew/creations/view?entityTypeId=779871897&id=5390966
goblin king crown https://www.dndbeyond.com/homebrew/creations/view?entityTypeId=112130694&id=10976999
goblin shaman https://www.dndbeyond.com/homebrew/creations/view?entityTypeId=779871897&id=5399364
gods wrath https://www.dndbeyond.com/homebrew/creations/view?entityTypeId=1118725998&id=3118587
Moros the wyrm lord https://www.dndbeyond.com/homebrew/creations/view?entityTypeId=779871897&id=6040429
Rushed https://www.dndbeyond.com/homebrew/creations/view?entityTypeId=779871897&id=5783721
Hallow guard https://www.dndbeyond.com/homebrew/creations/view?entityTypeId=789467139&id=2697365
whirlwind of blades https://www.dndbeyond.com/homebrew/creations/view?entityTypeId=789467139&id=2483218
Just home brewing around https://www.dndbeyond.com/homebrew/creations/view?entityTypeId=779871897&id=5945574 https://www.dndbeyond.com/homebrew/creations/view?entityTypeId=1743923279&id=2040052
https://www.dndbeyond.com/homebrew/creations/view?entityTypeId=779871897&id=5390966
https://www.dndbeyond.com/homebrew/creations/view?entityTypeId=779871897&id=5903213
https://www.dndbeyond.com/homebrew/creations/view?entityTypeId=789467139&id=2483218
I see you completely ignored all of the advice I gave you for your fighter subclass, except for the damage reduction, which is better, but another dice rolls is much more complicated to calculate and will slow things down. Also, try to word things well, clearly, and like the official books.
Sorry I forgot to change it here is the updated whirlwind of blades https://www.dndbeyond.com/homebrew/creations/view?entityTypeId=789467139&id=2704614
Just home brewing around https://www.dndbeyond.com/homebrew/creations/view?entityTypeId=779871897&id=5945574 https://www.dndbeyond.com/homebrew/creations/view?entityTypeId=1743923279&id=2040052
https://www.dndbeyond.com/homebrew/creations/view?entityTypeId=779871897&id=5390966
https://www.dndbeyond.com/homebrew/creations/view?entityTypeId=779871897&id=5903213
https://www.dndbeyond.com/homebrew/creations/view?entityTypeId=789467139&id=2483218