A better stage magician, mentalist with a useful familiar. Your opinion ?
Master stage magician
When you join the college of prestidigitation at 3rd level, you gain access to the prestidigitation and thaumaturgy cantrips or 2 other cantrips of your class if you already know them. The 2 spells are for you combined into one. Casting a spell gives you 2 effects from the combined list. If you cast this spell multiple times, you can actively have up to six of their effects at a time, and you can break an effect at the cost of an action.
Mentalist
Also at level 3, your inspiration allows you to overcome the mental resistances of your targets. If a creature within 30 feet roll a wisdom, intelligence, or charisma saving throw, you can use your reaction to spend a use of Bardic Inspiration and subtract your result from the result of the saving throw. If this saving throw is made as a result of a spell you cast, your spell ignores any saving throw advantage and any resistance. The creature is immune if you can't see it or if charms don't affect it.
Level 6:
The voice of his master
From level 6, your stage companion becomes a magical creature. You learn the Find Familiar spell. Your familiar, in addition to its usual abilities, is a casting catalyst. Cast a spell through it:
[list] You can use bardic inspiration through your familiar
No verbal or somatic component is required.
Any condition preventing you from casting the spell is temporarily lifted, as if you are dying. Your familiar itself should not be affected by such conditions. [/ List]
[spoiler] A monkey, a rabbit, etc. or a puppet could be added to the list of familiar, on DM call [/ spoiler]
Level 14:
Mass hypnotism From level 14, after a performance or speech of 10 minutes or more, for all non-hostile creatures that can hear you within a radius of 150 feet (or more if relays are used), you can implant a suggestion ( according to the terms of the namesake spell) of your choice in the mind of any creature that fails a wisdom saving throw. Your charisma is the casting modifier for this ability. The effect can be used once, then requires a short or long rest before being used again. The effect lasts for an hour.
the spell name is find familar and their is no such thing as the dying condition everythings wording is off mass hypnotism is odd the voice of his master is too strong and their is like no flavor or ribbons anywhere
he voice of his master: There is a permanent still spell metamagic, otherwise the other features are not stronger than any other bard college-
it is just less restrictive. Same spells, more opportunity to cast them.
The ruibbon ability is the combined prest/thaum spell- as for most of the spellcasters, it is the only ribbon found in the sub-class.
As per the flavor... Well, if you don,t like stage magic, you won't see any flavor. If you don't like hack and slash, you won't like the berserker barb. etc.
he voice of his master: There is a permanent still spell metamagic, otherwise the other features are not stronger than any other bard college-
it is just less restrictive. Same spells, more opportunity to cast them.
The ruibbon ability is the combined prest/thaum spell- as for most of the spellcasters, it is the only ribbon found in the sub-class.
As per the flavor... Well, if you don,t like stage magic, you won't see any flavor. If you don't like hack and slash, you won't like the berserker barb. etc.
not quite what i meant first of all the voice of his master is just too strong their is a reason base find familiar only lets you send touch spells trust me i learned the hard way
second two cantrips is not a ribbon and bards tend to have most ribbons in their subclasses
the flavor i get its just sporadic what i meant is that if you removed the flavor text and changed some names i would have no idea what the subclass is about which is a bad thing and this is called a lack of mechanic consinteincy
As per flavor, there is no stage magician in your country ? Illusion with or without animals, mentalism and hypnotism is one staple of magician.
The issue being raised is that, based on the descriptions, you wouldn't know this was written to model a stage magician.
On a minor note, I'd change the name, simply so as to not overlap with the name of the cantrip. It could be 'College of Magicians', 'College of Legerdemain', 'College of Fakirs' or 'College of Hocus Pocus'.
A better stage magician, mentalist with a useful familiar. Your opinion ?
Master stage magician
When you join the college of prestidigitation at 3rd level, you gain access to the prestidigitation and thaumaturgy cantrips or 2 other cantrips of your class if you already know them. The 2 spells are for you combined into one. Casting a spell gives you 2 effects from the combined list. If you cast this spell multiple times, you can actively have up to six of their effects at a time, and you can break an effect at the cost of an action.
Mentalist
Also at level 3, your inspiration allows you to overcome the mental resistances of your targets. If a creature within 30 feet roll a wisdom, intelligence, or charisma saving throw, you can use your reaction to spend a use of Bardic Inspiration and subtract your result from the result of the saving throw. If this saving throw is made as a result of a spell you cast, your spell ignores any saving throw advantage and any resistance. The creature is immune if you can't see it or if charms don't affect it.
Level 6:
The voice of his master
From level 6, your stage companion becomes a magical creature. You learn the Find Familiar spell. Your familiar, in addition to its usual abilities, is a casting catalyst. Cast a spell through it:
[list] You can use bardic inspiration through your familiar
No verbal or somatic component is required.
Any condition preventing you from casting the spell is temporarily lifted, as if you are dying. Your familiar itself should not be affected by such conditions. [/ List]
[spoiler] A monkey, a rabbit, etc. or a puppet could be added to the list of familiar, on DM call [/ spoiler]
Level 14:
Mass hypnotism From level 14, after a performance or speech of 10 minutes or more, for all non-hostile creatures that can hear you within a radius of 150 feet (or more if relays are used), you can implant a suggestion ( according to the terms of the namesake spell) of your choice in the mind of any creature that fails a wisdom saving throw. Your charisma is the casting modifier for this ability. The effect can be used once, then requires a short or long rest before being used again. The effect lasts for an hour.
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by minor spell you mean cantrip
the spell name is find familar and their is no such thing as the dying condition everythings wording is off mass hypnotism is odd the voice of his master is too strong and their is like no flavor or ribbons anywhere
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he voice of his master: There is a permanent still spell metamagic, otherwise the other features are not stronger than any other bard college-
it is just less restrictive. Same spells, more opportunity to cast them.
The ruibbon ability is the combined prest/thaum spell- as for most of the spellcasters, it is the only ribbon found in the sub-class.
As per the flavor... Well, if you don,t like stage magic, you won't see any flavor. If you don't like hack and slash, you won't like the berserker barb. etc.
not quite what i meant first of all the voice of his master is just too strong their is a reason base find familiar only lets you send touch spells trust me i learned the hard way
second two cantrips is not a ribbon and bards tend to have most ribbons in their subclasses
the flavor i get its just sporadic what i meant is that if you removed the flavor text and changed some names i would have no idea what the subclass is about which is a bad thing and this is called a lack of mechanic consinteincy
Check out my homebrew subclasses spells magic items feats monsters races
i am a sauce priest
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As per flavor, there is no stage magician in your country ? Illusion with or without animals, mentalism and hypnotism is one staple of magician.
The other is evasion abilities.
The issue being raised is that, based on the descriptions, you wouldn't know this was written to model a stage magician.
On a minor note, I'd change the name, simply so as to not overlap with the name of the cantrip. It could be 'College of Magicians', 'College of Legerdemain', 'College of Fakirs' or 'College of Hocus Pocus'.