Good Day Everyone!

I've drafted a new spell for one of my characters and I would like to get some constructive feedback from the community. I have presented it to my group and they claimed it was too strong for a 3rd level spell, but in my review of other 3rd level spells, I'm not convinced that it's too powerful. I'm hoping to get some feedback from you all. You all can find the spell in question here: https://www.dndbeyond.com/spells/814281-kais-permafrost-field. 

Any feedback you all have is greatly appreciated!! Please leave notes here or in the comments on the spell. Thank you!!

Um, I would assume because I can see it you already published it. You can't edit the published version of the spell remember. 

I can't say I am the best judge here, but the damage does feel a bit on the higher side, especially when combined with the restrained condition and the fact it is now difficult terrain that can cause another condition, then it can increase in power. You also had a typo, it lists 150 ft. on the short, when you say 15 ft. in the description. I think it should be reduced by at least by 1d6, maybe 2, and it should be good as a level 3. 

Thank you for the feedback!! I'll reevaluate the damage for the next version of this spell! I'll consider adjusting the status conditions, too. 

Regarding the typo, the spell has a range of 150 ft and the cylinder of the area of affect has a 15 ft height. I understand the confusion, though. 

Right, thanks for the correction. I would also consider then that you do not increase the range of the effect as the spell level increases. It is already affecting a good 40ft. of area total. And reduce the maximum spell range.