I like it. The abilities are powerful, but appropriate for the levels you added them at. I might even play one at a tavern sometime if I ever make another character. Thanks for sharing here!
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As MilesToGo suggested, I also added a minor environmental effect that has a chance to grapple the characters.
Sounds cool! I was more going for an anvil-hanging-above-the-boss type environmental hazard, but making it challenging with an official monster and a grappling effect is a great idea!
It seems pretty cool. Maybe you could add something more interesting to the tail and bite? Like, why it ever not use the claws.... Maybe the tail could have a save against poison damage and the bite could have an effect like a weaker version of power word pain? (referencing the fact that they were "designed to cause pain")
Thanks for the thoughts, I'll incorporate both ideas. This is a pretty old piece, so I wanted to give it an update. Anyone else have stuff they want to share?
Thanks for the thoughts, I'll incorporate both ideas. This is a pretty old piece, so I wanted to give it an update. Anyone else have stuff they want to share?
Maybe for Chronal shift have their turn for that round move to the end of initiative? But other than a few grammatical errors and the fact it looks like it would kinda suck to play with someone playing this subclass, it's a cool concept I'd love to see further developed.
So I made this when I had the sudden urge to play Groot in D&D (I still haven't, though). Tell me your opinions/advice on how to improve it: Link.
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Thanks Nothic
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Sounds cool! I was more going for an anvil-hanging-above-the-boss type environmental hazard, but making it challenging with an official monster and a grappling effect is a great idea!
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It seems pretty cool. Maybe you could add something more interesting to the tail and bite? Like, why it ever not use the claws.... Maybe the tail could have a save against poison damage and the bite could have an effect like a weaker version of power word pain? (referencing the fact that they were "designed to cause pain")
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Maybe for Chronal shift have their turn for that round move to the end of initiative? But other than a few grammatical errors and the fact it looks like it would kinda suck to play with someone playing this subclass, it's a cool concept I'd love to see further developed.
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Hey Nothic how are you in pretty much every thread I see?
Here is my Homebrew race, the Oculus. Their basically humanoid beholders. Please give me feedback.
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Wait a sec. HOW! you and Nothic are in pretty much every forum I go to. Why?, how? When? Who? What? Cheese.
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20 posts now I only need 5 more. I’m on a roll. What do you mean? I’m not grinding for posts.
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