* i wanted to share this because I don't really know where else to get peer review. The following is from the book I'm writing, The portal and Beyond.
Sometimes, the simplest stories are the most enjoyable. But no one is truly simple, are they? Everyone has their many problems, complicities, and issues. But why does it have to be that way? Gods, I wish things were simple! Why can’t the answer ever be straightforward and easy and with a clear direction of what you’re supposed to do with clear instructions wrapped up in a nice little bow? Why does life have to be so complicated? Why do feelings have to be so complicated? Why do I have to be so complicated?
Rants are very fun to write*
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I'm Fry, a doodler, writer, aspiring singer/songwriter, and sort-of youtuber (check me out!) goofin' around on the interwebs Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult) I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown, but I do my best :3 Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, undead cutie pie, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose Internet big sib to aspeninthetrees, TheGatoLover, (and hopefully more)
* i wanted to share this because I don't really know where else to get peer review. The following is from the book I'm writing, The portal and Beyond.
Sometimes, the simplest stories are the most enjoyable. But no one is truly simple, are they? Everyone has their many problems, complicities, and issues. But why does it have to be that way? Gods, I wish things were simple! Why can’t the answer ever be straightforward and easy and with a clear direction of what you’re supposed to do with clear instructions wrapped up in a nice little bow? Why does life have to be so complicated? Why do feelings have to be so complicated? Why do I have to be so complicated?
Rants are very fun to write*
That’s a great paragraph to use as an intro for your book, like as the first paragraph. It actually doesn’t feel like a rant at all to me. It feels like the existential crisis of someone who’s in great emotional and philosophical pain.
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I really like D&D, especially Ravenloft and Forgotten Realms. My pronouns are she/they.
I like reading and writing too, but I’m not much of an artist.
* i wanted to share this because I don't really know where else to get peer review. The following is from the book I'm writing, The portal and Beyond.
Sometimes, the simplest stories are the most enjoyable. But no one is truly simple, are they? Everyone has their many problems, complicities, and issues. But why does it have to be that way? Gods, I wish things were simple! Why can’t the answer ever be straightforward and easy and with a clear direction of what you’re supposed to do with clear instructions wrapped up in a nice little bow? Why does life have to be so complicated? Why do feelings have to be so complicated? Why do I have to be so complicated?
Rants are very fun to write*
That’s a great paragraph to use as an intro for your book, like as the first paragraph. It actually doesn’t feel like a rant at all to me. It feels like the existential crisis of someone who’s in great emotional and philosophical pain.
*I agree, could be a really great way to hook people too, as I reckon most people can relate to it. Very well written my friend*
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Long live the dragon slayers, long live the spider guild, long live the forums.
I want you to know. You are going to lose. You are going to lose badly. You’re going to lose badly and it’s going to be awesome.
* i wanted to share this because I don't really know where else to get peer review. The following is from the book I'm writing, The portal and Beyond.
Sometimes, the simplest stories are the most enjoyable. But no one is truly simple, are they? Everyone has their many problems, complicities, and issues. But why does it have to be that way? Gods, I wish things were simple! Why can’t the answer ever be straightforward and easy and with a clear direction of what you’re supposed to do with clear instructions wrapped up in a nice little bow? Why does life have to be so complicated? Why do feelings have to be so complicated? Why do I have to be so complicated?
Rants are very fun to write*
*Exactly! I just wanna play a simple character! No trauma, no overpowered stuff, just a dude or dudette with a sword*
Ty for all the feedback! when I finish the book, I'll for sure let you guys read it.
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I'm Fry, a doodler, writer, aspiring singer/songwriter, and sort-of youtuber (check me out!) goofin' around on the interwebs Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult) I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown, but I do my best :3 Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, undead cutie pie, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose Internet big sib to aspeninthetrees, TheGatoLover, (and hopefully more)
*np. It's fantasy for all of us dnd nerds. It's also got some themes of mental illness and other deeper topics so gonna have to slap a 13+ rating on this bad boy*
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I'm Fry, a doodler, writer, aspiring singer/songwriter, and sort-of youtuber (check me out!) goofin' around on the interwebs Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult) I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown, but I do my best :3 Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, undead cutie pie, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose Internet big sib to aspeninthetrees, TheGatoLover, (and hopefully more)
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Long live the dragon slayers, long live the spider guild, long live the forums.
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*it goes alr*
Ye old creator of characters
Tortured poet and writer
This mortal body is expendable, I will be released from my binding soon.
*Good to hear*
*I have to go, but hope you find someone to rp with, if that's what you're looking for*
Long live the dragon slayers, long live the spider guild, long live the forums.
I want you to know. You are going to lose. You are going to lose badly. You’re going to lose badly and it’s going to be awesome.
*ok!*
Ye old creator of characters
Tortured poet and writer
This mortal body is expendable, I will be released from my binding soon.
* i wanted to share this because I don't really know where else to get peer review. The following is from the book I'm writing, The portal and Beyond.
Sometimes, the simplest stories are the most enjoyable. But no one is truly simple, are they? Everyone has their many problems, complicities, and issues. But why does it have to be that way? Gods, I wish things were simple! Why can’t the answer ever be straightforward and easy and with a clear direction of what you’re supposed to do with clear instructions wrapped up in a nice little bow? Why does life have to be so complicated? Why do feelings have to be so complicated? Why do I have to be so complicated?
Rants are very fun to write*
I'm Fry, a doodler, writer, aspiring singer/songwriter, and sort-of youtuber (check me out!) goofin' around on the interwebs
Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult)
I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown, but I do my best :3
Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, undead cutie pie, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose
Internet big sib to aspeninthetrees, TheGatoLover, (and hopefully more)
That’s a great paragraph to use as an intro for your book, like as the first paragraph. It actually doesn’t feel like a rant at all to me. It feels like the existential crisis of someone who’s in great emotional and philosophical pain.
I really like D&D, especially Ravenloft and Forgotten Realms. My pronouns are she/they.
I like reading and writing too, but I’m not much of an artist.
*I agree, could be a really great way to hook people too, as I reckon most people can relate to it. Very well written my friend*
Long live the dragon slayers, long live the spider guild, long live the forums.
I want you to know. You are going to lose. You are going to lose badly. You’re going to lose badly and it’s going to be awesome.
*Exactly! I just wanna play a simple character! No trauma, no overpowered stuff, just a dude or dudette with a sword*
Ty for all the feedback! when I finish the book, I'll for sure let you guys read it.
I'm Fry, a doodler, writer, aspiring singer/songwriter, and sort-of youtuber (check me out!) goofin' around on the interwebs
Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult)
I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown, but I do my best :3
Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, undead cutie pie, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose
Internet big sib to aspeninthetrees, TheGatoLover, (and hopefully more)
*Awesome, can’t wait!*
Long live the dragon slayers, long live the spider guild, long live the forums.
I want you to know. You are going to lose. You are going to lose badly. You’re going to lose badly and it’s going to be awesome.
*hello! What do we do here?*
*We roleplay!*
Long live the dragon slayers, long live the spider guild, long live the forums.
I want you to know. You are going to lose. You are going to lose badly. You’re going to lose badly and it’s going to be awesome.
*yoy :)*
You’re welcome. And that sounds great!
I really like D&D, especially Ravenloft and Forgotten Realms. My pronouns are she/they.
I like reading and writing too, but I’m not much of an artist.
*np. It's fantasy for all of us dnd nerds. It's also got some themes of mental illness and other deeper topics so gonna have to slap a 13+ rating on this bad boy*
I'm Fry, a doodler, writer, aspiring singer/songwriter, and sort-of youtuber (check me out!) goofin' around on the interwebs
Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult)
I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown, but I do my best :3
Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, undead cutie pie, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose
Internet big sib to aspeninthetrees, TheGatoLover, (and hopefully more)