yk I can see that. I did realize the coven system is similar to the owl house, but I started before I’d ever seen the show so idk
any suggestions or improvements I could make?
Well, before I can come up with any real criticism, I need to know the intent behind this world. Is it for a story? If so, what are the themes? Is it for a campaign in a universal system like Fate Core? Is it just for fun? Or is there something I haven't even considered?
Each one has its own purpose, and will interact differently with your worldbuilding. I personally think it's great, but if it has a purpose behind it then it could have some issues that I don't see yet.
yk I can see that. I did realize the coven system is similar to the owl house, but I started before I’d ever seen the show so idk
any suggestions or improvements I could make?
Well, before I can come up with any real criticism, I need to know the intent behind this world. Is it for a story? If so, what are the themes? Is it for a campaign in a universal system like Fate Core? Is it just for fun? Or is there something I haven't even considered?
Each one has its own purpose, and will interact differently with your worldbuilding. I personally think it's great, but if it has a purpose behind it then it could have some issues that I don't see yet.
It’s just a world
It was originally for a story, then later for a campaign but I’ve scrapped both of those at this point and am just focusing on the world
Maybe don't burn it yet. Unless it's all done and turned in and returned and stuff. I guess then it's fine. You should wait until it's not needed anymore.
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Hi! I'm Potato. I am a player and DM using 2014 5th edition D&D. I am always happy to help with whatever you need! I prefer no pronouns, but they/them if necessary. Unfortunately, I will no longer be on the forums. Sorry, friends! Stay sparkly!
Maybe don't burn it yet. Unless it's all done and turned in and returned and stuff. I guess then it's fine. You should wait until it's not needed anymore.
I did
The reason I hate the teacher is that she's sexist and homophobic
Hello
I see you met circle…
Sel
They/he
Reading, dnd, theatre, art (Irunwithskissors)
Tossing and turning
The sun’s in the sky
It’s five am, I can’t close my eyes
Well, before I can come up with any real criticism, I need to know the intent behind this world. Is it for a story? If so, what are the themes? Is it for a campaign in a universal system like Fate Core? Is it just for fun? Or is there something I haven't even considered?
Each one has its own purpose, and will interact differently with your worldbuilding. I personally think it's great, but if it has a purpose behind it then it could have some issues that I don't see yet.
Let him who is without sin cast the first stone.
Awake, impure, divine
Breathgiver of the Strugels
It’s just a world
It was originally for a story, then later for a campaign but I’ve scrapped both of those at this point and am just focusing on the world
also the history because the gods are silly
Sel
They/he
Reading, dnd, theatre, art (Irunwithskissors)
Tossing and turning
The sun’s in the sky
It’s five am, I can’t close my eyes
Yeah, I did
Hello! Call me Tana
My pronouns are She/Her
I have Autism. And, you would probably call me Trans Femme, Pansexual pancake, and Ace
I will always support you. To the best of my ability. Because that is my way of showing how much I care
Current Dice Code: [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] = [roll][roll:-6]+[roll:-5]+[roll:-4]+[roll:-3]+[roll:-2]+[roll:-1][/roll]
Current List of Children: Golden, Salem, Wes, Aspen, Link, and Foalin.
That’s nice
how’ve you been
Sel
They/he
Reading, dnd, theatre, art (Irunwithskissors)
Tossing and turning
The sun’s in the sky
It’s five am, I can’t close my eyes
Decent, church was... church
Was very blunt tho
You?
Hello! Call me Tana
My pronouns are She/Her
I have Autism. And, you would probably call me Trans Femme, Pansexual pancake, and Ace
I will always support you. To the best of my ability. Because that is my way of showing how much I care
Current Dice Code: [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] = [roll][roll:-6]+[roll:-5]+[roll:-4]+[roll:-3]+[roll:-2]+[roll:-1][/roll]
Current List of Children: Golden, Salem, Wes, Aspen, Link, and Foalin.
So just for fun, then.
I see no potential problems with it.
Let him who is without sin cast the first stone.
Awake, impure, divine
Breathgiver of the Strugels
Yay! Can I pester you with other things later?
Sel
They/he
Reading, dnd, theatre, art (Irunwithskissors)
Tossing and turning
The sun’s in the sky
It’s five am, I can’t close my eyes
Of course!
Let him who is without sin cast the first stone.
Awake, impure, divine
Breathgiver of the Strugels
Sorry it took me a bit to notice this, people keep coming into my room so I have to hop off.
And... fine? Nothing special, in either a good OR bad way.
Here's a link to my Discord thing: The Dorky Dragon Tavern
"Avoid roasted cabbage, do not eat earwax, and look on the bright side of life." -Angela
this is Gato's way. [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] = [roll][roll:-6]+[roll:-5]+[roll:-4]+[roll:-3]+[roll:-2]+[roll:-1][/roll]
Hello, all! Foalin is my familiar, after a little conversation...
extended sig(click it): :3
Ah, is that a good or a bad thing?
Hello! Call me Tana
My pronouns are She/Her
I have Autism. And, you would probably call me Trans Femme, Pansexual pancake, and Ace
I will always support you. To the best of my ability. Because that is my way of showing how much I care
Current Dice Code: [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] = [roll][roll:-6]+[roll:-5]+[roll:-4]+[roll:-3]+[roll:-2]+[roll:-1][/roll]
Current List of Children: Golden, Salem, Wes, Aspen, Link, and Foalin.
Hey Gato, wanna RP on the Leo Line?
Let him who is without sin cast the first stone.
Awake, impure, divine
Breathgiver of the Strugels
Totally, you want to intro?
I almost said no, but then I thought that, you are worth my time
Hello! Call me Tana
My pronouns are She/Her
I have Autism. And, you would probably call me Trans Femme, Pansexual pancake, and Ace
I will always support you. To the best of my ability. Because that is my way of showing how much I care
Current Dice Code: [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] = [roll][roll:-6]+[roll:-5]+[roll:-4]+[roll:-3]+[roll:-2]+[roll:-1][/roll]
Current List of Children: Golden, Salem, Wes, Aspen, Link, and Foalin.
Already interacted with your intro from earlier.
That's really sweet of you, but if you aren't in the mood for it or you don't have time, we can table it.
Let him who is without sin cast the first stone.
Awake, impure, divine
Breathgiver of the Strugels
No, I can make the time for it, its fine
Hello! Call me Tana
My pronouns are She/Her
I have Autism. And, you would probably call me Trans Femme, Pansexual pancake, and Ace
I will always support you. To the best of my ability. Because that is my way of showing how much I care
Current Dice Code: [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] = [roll][roll:-6]+[roll:-5]+[roll:-4]+[roll:-3]+[roll:-2]+[roll:-1][/roll]
Current List of Children: Golden, Salem, Wes, Aspen, Link, and Foalin.
Mate what
Hallo
People who aren't from here or DeviantArt might know me from various games or might know me as Dino on some of those games
I will go by these if ya wanna say something nicknames: Dinao, Diano, Or Dino
'tis all
:p
I hate that project and that teacher
Hello! Call me Tana
My pronouns are She/Her
I have Autism. And, you would probably call me Trans Femme, Pansexual pancake, and Ace
I will always support you. To the best of my ability. Because that is my way of showing how much I care
Current Dice Code: [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] = [roll][roll:-6]+[roll:-5]+[roll:-4]+[roll:-3]+[roll:-2]+[roll:-1][/roll]
Current List of Children: Golden, Salem, Wes, Aspen, Link, and Foalin.
Maybe don't burn it yet. Unless it's all done and turned in and returned and stuff. I guess then it's fine. You should wait until it's not needed anymore.
Hi! I'm Potato. I am a player and DM using 2014 5th edition D&D. I am always happy to help with whatever you need!
I prefer no pronouns, but they/them if necessary.
Unfortunately, I will no longer be on the forums. Sorry, friends! Stay sparkly!
What even is it
Hallo
People who aren't from here or DeviantArt might know me from various games or might know me as Dino on some of those games
I will go by these if ya wanna say something nicknames: Dinao, Diano, Or Dino
'tis all
:p
I did
The reason I hate the teacher is that she's sexist and homophobic
Hello! Call me Tana
My pronouns are She/Her
I have Autism. And, you would probably call me Trans Femme, Pansexual pancake, and Ace
I will always support you. To the best of my ability. Because that is my way of showing how much I care
Current Dice Code: [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] + [roll]1d4[/roll] = [roll][roll:-6]+[roll:-5]+[roll:-4]+[roll:-3]+[roll:-2]+[roll:-1][/roll]
Current List of Children: Golden, Salem, Wes, Aspen, Link, and Foalin.