In short, I still only have 2 Maps and a non-complete list of events, but I'm looking for critiques/ Helping me look for plot holes in the history
Basically, We have Pre-Fall, During Fall, and Post-Fall dates (Such as in our world we have BC/BCE and CE/AD). In ancient history, there is a church that has two offshoots. It isn't that fully fleshed out, but there are two stems, which use vowels in important names, either using three consecutive, different, vowels or using 3 different vowels with one sound in between (EX: Biuem or Arucho follow either convention)
Timeline
Time System: Pre Fall (PrF), During Fall (DF), Post Fall (PoF)
6951 PrF: Euiloa Nyv falls to the Mooreian Empire, uniting the world
6823: Plate of Etuniloral created in Hameal, capital of the Mooreian Empire
6665: Plate of Etuniloral lost in Gori Sea
6664: Nehjaie succedes from Mooreian, the first time the world is split in centuries
6663: Oaern succeeds from Mooreian
6660: Euiloa Nyv succeeds from Mooreian
6657: Baiel, Creail, Uaem, and Nevamu succeeds from Mooreian
6648: Gameki and Wadilo succeeds from Mooreian
6604: Flaien succeeds from Mooreian, leaving it with no lands on the Aeo Continent
6547: Mooreian dissolves to infighting, sparking the first dark age
6236: The Plate of Etuniloral is found by Jaeiv the Redeemer
6008: The Church of Oaiseyu dissolves, leaving the world in its wake, renaming continents and countries.
6008: Holy Country names are changed Nehjaie->Baiv, Oaern-> Golar, Baiel-> Farin, Creail-> Lion, Uaem-> Uam, Nevamu-> Vevum, Gameki-> Gamki, Wadilo-> Dilo, and Flaien-> Neipm
5847: Neipm and Baiv dissolve due to Oaiseyu Revolt
5845: Uam reverts to Uaem and re-accepts the church
5843: Wadilo, Gameki and Nevamu re-accepts the church
5833: Lion, Farin, and Golar officially reject the Church and combine into the Jade Republic.
5824-5784: The War of Endless Days, Jade Republic claims what used to be Neipm
5780-5757: The War of Nehjaie/Baiv, Baiv is split
5733-5702: The Reckoning War, the Continent of Mraove (Tribal Continent) is destroyed
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Disposable items that allow the sampling of homebrew feats,subclasses and magic items are DM safe. Note it changes your subclass,equipment and skills for the items duration NOT adds to them usually.
Disposable items that allow the sampling of homebrew feats,subclasses and magic items are DM safe. Note it changes your subclass,equipment and skills for the items duration NOT adds to them usually.
If you're talking about the Brands, everyone has one in this world, and specific individuals have more (see HoAM). You always have it.
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I’m very impressed with the timeline but I would like some more context for some parts namely the Church of Oaiseyu who appear in 6008 PrF by falling apart and then dominate the next few events on the timeline.
I’m very impressed with the timeline but I would like some more context for some parts namely the Church of Oaiseyu who appear in 6008 PrF by falling apart and then dominate the next few events on the timeline.
I'm working on politics right now, but getting some actual doctrine and founding (and re-founding, and re-re-founding), in some stuff that isn't on here it is founded much earl.ier
Helper of Create a World thread/Sedge is Chaotic Neutral/ Mega Yahtzee High: 34, Low: 14/I speak English, je me parle le Francais, agus Labhraim beagan Gaeilge
A good politic flow chart set up is to give all parties involved a power source with it's own bain. A reachable conquest or merger goal with a leveredge angle. A well sheltered position or loyal prestigious alli. And a non mutual thing the value more than survival. Politics are often side effects of such things.
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In short, I still only have 2 Maps and a non-complete list of events, but I'm looking for critiques/ Helping me look for plot holes in the history
Basically, We have Pre-Fall, During Fall, and Post-Fall dates (Such as in our world we have BC/BCE and CE/AD). In ancient history, there is a church that has two offshoots. It isn't that fully fleshed out, but there are two stems, which use vowels in important names, either using three consecutive, different, vowels or using 3 different vowels with one sound in between (EX: Biuem or Arucho follow either convention)
Timeline
Time System: Pre Fall (PrF), During Fall (DF), Post Fall (PoF)
6951 PrF: Euiloa Nyv falls to the Mooreian Empire, uniting the world
6823: Plate of Etuniloral created in Hameal, capital of the Mooreian Empire
6665: Plate of Etuniloral lost in Gori Sea
6664: Nehjaie succedes from Mooreian, the first time the world is split in centuries
6663: Oaern succeeds from Mooreian
6660: Euiloa Nyv succeeds from Mooreian
6657: Baiel, Creail, Uaem, and Nevamu succeeds from Mooreian
6648: Gameki and Wadilo succeeds from Mooreian
6604: Flaien succeeds from Mooreian, leaving it with no lands on the Aeo Continent
6547: Mooreian dissolves to infighting, sparking the first dark age
6236: The Plate of Etuniloral is found by Jaeiv the Redeemer
6008: The Church of Oaiseyu dissolves, leaving the world in its wake, renaming continents and countries.
6008: Holy Country names are changed Nehjaie->Baiv, Oaern-> Golar, Baiel-> Farin, Creail-> Lion, Uaem-> Uam, Nevamu-> Vevum, Gameki-> Gamki, Wadilo-> Dilo, and Flaien-> Neipm
5847: Neipm and Baiv dissolve due to Oaiseyu Revolt
5845: Uam reverts to Uaem and re-accepts the church
5843: Wadilo, Gameki and Nevamu re-accepts the church
5833: Lion, Farin, and Golar officially reject the Church and combine into the Jade Republic.
5824-5784: The War of Endless Days, Jade Republic claims what used to be Neipm
5780-5757: The War of Nehjaie/Baiv, Baiv is split
5733-5702: The Reckoning War, the Continent of Mraove (Tribal Continent) is destroyed
5674: The Church dissolves to infighting
5674: Uaem-> Laav, Nevamu-> Vevum, Gameki-> Gamki, Wadilo->Ravem, Jade Republic-> Jadeorean Empire
5673-4536: The Text Death (Next to nothing is known about this time)
4535: The Jadeorean Empire, Goeuln, Daom, Sadis, and The Dannick Empire come out of the Text Death alive
4533: Sadis declares neutrality, and they establish the Scribes of History
4530-3678: Jadeor and Dannick start the Thousandwar Rush
4522: Sadis gets invaded by Dannick
4501: The SoH disbands, but not before chronicling almost 2k years of history
4438-4305: The Stalemate occurs
4304-4006: The Second Text Death occurs
4005: Jadeor, Goeuln, and The Daumic Empire make it out of the Second text death
4001: Jadeor-> The Jadeorean Empire
4001: TJE takes over Goeuln
3996-3769: The Second Stalemate occurs
3768: Daumic sorcerers attempt to summon an Archfiend
3766: The power remains change the population forever, giving a person one of 5 brands
3765: The Brandish War begins
3757: Arin, Hager, Ceare, Thren, and Forean come out of the war, each one representing one of the marks.
3752: Rejecters of the Mark form the island country of Marno
3750-1511: Relative Peace occurs
1511-876: The War of the Mark occurs
875: Tensions start rising even further
875-635: Another Stalemate
634-11: The Last War occurs
10: A hero of all marks appear
4: The Marked One starts making an army
0 DF: The Marked one invades Arin
8: Invasion of Hager
17: Ceare falls
32: Thren manages to rebuff an invasion, and reclaims West Arin
37: North Ceare is reclaimed
46: Markotal is established, covering Thren, West Arin, and Northeast Ceare
47: Forean and Marno join Markotal
49: Thren is invaded
61: Markotal falls
78: The Attal Rebels are killed off
1 PoF: The New Mooreian Empire is established
17: The Plate of Etuniloral is splintered into 13 Shards
18: The Mind Shard is claimed by Oern Jakaldor
Those are all not final
Maps:
6604 PrF
4006 PrF
3765 PrF
3752 PrF
17 DF
49 DF
18 PoF
I haven't ever finished a world before, but I have one other world and many smaller short Fiction ideas
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Additions (I would edit but my computer decided to not let me edit it)
PoF Updates:
19: The Sound Shard is claimed by Jareyn Ielor and the Sliced Shard is claimed by Ove Foreun
20: The High Shard is claimed by Horoun Deliere and the Venom Shard is claimed by Hao Naob
21: The Stabbed Shard is claimed by Derethim the Overture
23: The Death Shard is claimed by Trithe Brassen
27: The Lightning Shard is claimed by Gratha Yaque
37: The Force Shard is claimed by Graven Theron
51: The Flame Shard is claimed by Horovar Kalaki
68: The Freeze Shard is claimed by Bram Iuok
85: The Shattered Shard is claimed by Lavon Terron
147: The last Shard, the Receding Shard is claimed by the Last Rebels
154: The Last Rebels form the Holdout of Dova
166: The Last Rebels form the Holdout of Japhetmuth
195: The Receding Shard is claimed by The Allmark
196-5986: Relative peace occurs
5987: The Rebellion occurs, splintering the world into 27 countries: Aevon, Alkon, Breval, Ceron, Dova, Eura, Fragha, Greabe, Hyem, Ivion, Jlabav, Krim, Mraron, Nethon, Norom, Overon, Praja, Quavon, Relin, Strallo, Tuvon, Ulavoat, Vraxe, Wathha, Wunn, Yixil, Zwil
Map:
5987 PoF
Helper of Create a World thread/Sedge is Chaotic Neutral/ Mega Yahtzee High: 34, Low: 14/I speak English, je me parle le Francais, agus Labhraim beagan Gaeilge
Dream of Days Lore Bard 9/Wizard 4 Baulder's Gate: Descent to Avernus (In Person/Over Zoom)
Saleadon Morgul Battle Smith Artificer 11 Tyranny of Dragons (In Person/Over Zoom)
Hurtharn Serpti Ghostslayer Blood Hunter 7 Spelljammer (Over Zoom)
Ex Sig
Disposable items that allow the sampling of homebrew feats,subclasses and magic items are DM safe. Note it changes your subclass,equipment and skills for the items duration NOT adds to them usually.
If you're talking about the Brands, everyone has one in this world, and specific individuals have more (see HoAM). You always have it.
Helper of Create a World thread/Sedge is Chaotic Neutral/ Mega Yahtzee High: 34, Low: 14/I speak English, je me parle le Francais, agus Labhraim beagan Gaeilge
Dream of Days Lore Bard 9/Wizard 4 Baulder's Gate: Descent to Avernus (In Person/Over Zoom)
Saleadon Morgul Battle Smith Artificer 11 Tyranny of Dragons (In Person/Over Zoom)
Hurtharn Serpti Ghostslayer Blood Hunter 7 Spelljammer (Over Zoom)
Ex Sig
I’m very impressed with the timeline but I would like some more context for some parts namely the Church of Oaiseyu who appear in 6008 PrF by falling apart and then dominate the next few events on the timeline.
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I'm working on politics right now, but getting some actual doctrine and founding (and re-founding, and re-re-founding), in some stuff that isn't on here it is founded much earl.ier
Helper of Create a World thread/Sedge is Chaotic Neutral/ Mega Yahtzee High: 34, Low: 14/I speak English, je me parle le Francais, agus Labhraim beagan Gaeilge
Dream of Days Lore Bard 9/Wizard 4 Baulder's Gate: Descent to Avernus (In Person/Over Zoom)
Saleadon Morgul Battle Smith Artificer 11 Tyranny of Dragons (In Person/Over Zoom)
Hurtharn Serpti Ghostslayer Blood Hunter 7 Spelljammer (Over Zoom)
Ex Sig
A good politic flow chart set up is to give all parties involved a power source with it's own bain. A reachable conquest or merger goal with a leveredge angle. A well sheltered position or loyal prestigious alli. And a non mutual thing the value more than survival. Politics are often side effects of such things.