Homebrew Floran Species Details
They are there own race
Floran Traits
A Floran is a treelike humanoid celestial that can range from 7-9ft.Powerful Build
You count as one size larger when determining your carrying capacity and the weight you can push, drag, or lift.
Natural Weapon
You have the ability grow your arms 30 feet and attack someone. On success the person takes 1d6 of damage + Strength modifier+Proficiency Bonus (Also enemy must pass Strength saving throw or be knocked prone)
Plant Talents
Proficiency in nature and intimidation
Racial Bonus
+2 to strength score and +1 to any score of your choosing
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Posted Oct 22, 2018Boring, lacking detail, and Natural Weapon is too powerful.
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Posted Oct 23, 2018If you think it is boring then don't use it! And what other detail would you like to see? Im not supposed to give a background of the character or anything as that is up to the player. Also, the Natural Weapon was just to add some sort of a ranged attack to my character as it did not really make sense to have a longbow or crossbow. The only reason it is too "powerful" (if you really want to call it powerful) is because there are other weaknesses that I forgot to put up like a disadvantage on attacks that involve rolling against fire damage.
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Posted Oct 28, 2018At least add something more than "They are there own race." What on earth does that even mean? What do florans look like? Who are they? What makes them a cool choice for a race?
The natural weapon could be fine if you just made it not a 30-foot range. That's an absurdly powerful attack that you can use an unlimited number of times. And you never add your proficiency bonus to the damage roll, only the attack rolls.
You don't need to be all defensive about this. If you put it up online like this for other people to see, I assumed you wanted feedback to make it better.