Level
4th
Casting Time
1 Action
Range/Area
Touch
Components
V, S
Duration
Concentration
1 Minute
School
Enchantment
Attack/Save
WIS Save
Damage/Effect
Psychic
Touching a creature, you send waves of pain coursing through them. They must make a Wisdom saving throw. On a failure, they take 4d8 psychic damage, and have disadvantage on all attacks and saving throws for the duration.
At Higher Levels. When you cast this spell using a spell slot of 5th level or higher, the damage increases by 1d8 for each slot level above 1st.
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Posted Aug 19, 2018Any suggestions for improvements are more than welcome.
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Posted Sep 22, 2018I think you may want to increase the damage on this spell. The fireball spell, for example, does 8d6 damage and has are of effect damage, but is a lower level. I think you should either lower the spell level or increase the damage by a lot. Other than that, however, I really like your spell.
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Posted Sep 22, 2018The damage was not increased because of the powerful debuff that tags on to it. I usually use Fireball to scale my spells, and this one seemed to hold up alright. Disadvantage on all attacks and saving throws is incredibly powerful, especially since they can't save each turn to end it. Thanks for your feedback, though!
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Posted Sep 27, 2018Here's the funny thing:
It's supposed to say "each slot level above 4th." That was my bad. My thoughts were, this debuff is basically a reverse slightly weaker version of foresight, with a saving throw.
Thanks for your feedback!
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Posted Sep 27, 2018Thanks for the suggestions! I'll definitely take them into account.
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Posted Oct 27, 2018I find this to be a very interesting spell. That said I would consider making it a constitution saving throw. I say this because other pain based spells like both Symbol and Power Word Pain both use Con as their save of choice. I understand the thought that the damage is psychic in nature and your willpower is enabling you to act through it for consistency across the system I would consider constitution.
I also agree that a slight damage bump may be in order say to like 6d8 plus 2d8 for each level over 4th.
The proof though, as always, will be how it plays in your game and if you and the others enjoy it. Hope the feedback helps.
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Posted Dec 31, 2018Thank you for all the feedback, everyone. I'm working on a new version of this that should be released shortly.
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Posted Dec 31, 2018Thank you for all the feedback, everyone. I'm working on a new version of this that should be released shortly.