Level
9th
Casting Time
10 Actions
Range/Area
45 ft.
Components
M *
Duration
Until Dispelled
School
Enchantment
Attack/Save
None
Damage/Effect
a horde of flying minions within your range appear from the dimension known as altek and attack 4-6 enemy's of your choice. they swarm and rip the flesh of your enemy's as it deals 5d6 or kills them altogether
* - (3 pieces of iron)
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Posted Oct 9, 2018this is so cool
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Posted Oct 15, 2018Needs way more specifics as it stands this an awful 9th level spell 5d6?
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Posted Apr 20, 2024Just some constructive criticism:
Honestly, I would change the casting time to 1 Action. 10 Actions a) doesn't make sense, as this is clearly a spell designed to be cast during combat, and b) is just ... 1 minute. There is no reason to word the casting time as 10 Actions, even if that's how long you want it to take to cast.
Based on the spell description you gave, which definitely needs to be reworded to be more clear and mechanically descriptive, the duration of the spell should be instantaneous instead of untill dispelled.
Here's an example of such a rewrite, making sure to have a focus on what mechanically happens when the spell is cast:
You summon 3 + 1d4 swarms of flying monsters from the plane known as Altek. Each of these swarms will hit a creature of your choice within range, dealing 10d6 force damage, before dissappearing. If this damage reduces the target to 0 hit points, it is disintegrated. All of the swarms can strike simultaneously and you can direct the swarms to all hit one target or several.
Best of luck with your homebrewing! :)