Level
Cantrip
Casting Time
1 Bonus Action
Range/Area
Touch
Components
V, S, M *
Duration
Until Dispelled 2 Days
School
Illusion
Attack/Save
None
Damage/Effect
Fire brings you power.
* - (A component pouch)Previous Versions
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Posted Jul 13, 2021I commend you on trying to create something that people would enjoy. I would also say about creating something unique, but then I would have to understand what you made. For future reference, the people on the internet don't know what your intent is with this spell. Without a proper description there is no way to know what this spell is supposed to be. For some constructive criticism on the spell, that I can understand at least, this is a bonus action cantrip and the duration is for two days? For what cantrips are capable of this seems too much. Also a material component being a component pouch is not exactly how that works. Unless the material component is literally the pouch itself, which I doubt, the material component is what's in the pouch. Like with Fireball for example, the material component is, "A tiny ball of bat guano and sulfur," that would be in the component pouch. Now I know this was created five months ago, and you most likely forgot about this spell, I just want to provide constructive criticism because I'm board, not out of malice. I do commend you on trying to create something yourself and make this game your own. You can do so much better in the future. Good luck with your gaming.