Yes

Can't wait for one of my players to bring this up in a vampire centered campaign..

I mean your concerns about this being overpowered aside (it's definitely vastly underpowered), because the damage is poison damage, d12 seems fine. Poison is the most-resisted damage type in the game, a d12 of poison is generally worth approximately the same as a d8 of radiant or necrotic.

As for Grease, a non-damaging first-level spell that creates battlefield hazards for both enemies and allies is not too powerful for at-will use on such an underpowered subclass.

are people actually having questions and suggestions and serious chats about this subclass

what spells go with this?

it nu say

please i read this to my party and we laughed for five minutes

Idea: For Delicious Retribution instead of them just dying they should disintegrate into garlic bread crumbs

Yes

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And that's how Strahd f*****g died

 1 gp to the swear jar.

Wow, I can't believe it took me this long to notice the updated Garlic Bread domain you made based on the advice I posted on the original. I'm super flattered that you took it into consideration and did something with it! Also glad you decided to keep the original around too, while the advice I gave you want intended to put the domain more inline with the rules and themes of other domains, the original is awesome in its own right.

At first I was worried that my advice would ruin the "charm" the domain had, but you incorporated it really well and gave it your own personal flair (I love the double poison damage against Vampires). I'm glad to see most of the responses have been positive with many other people also giving advice. Just don't get overwhelmed by it all, what matters at the end is that you're happy with it! Glad to see this thing take off and get the attention it deserves.

But now I have the conundrum of choosing between this one or the original for my future Garlic Bread Domain Cleric. Why must life be so difficult?

This is so funny, I LOVE IT!

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i think it might be a cool idea that at a higher level, the garlic bread made with being a disciple should grant temporary hit points. like at level 6 or 8, the garlic bread that has been created grants a number of temporary hit points equal to a d4 + con mod.

also with the Feed The Hungry And Gorge The Wicked, you could also make it so that at a higher level, feeding the hungry also stabilizes anyone who is unconscious in that radius, like maybe at level 14? and gorging the wicked at a higher level, you can decide if you want to give someone up to two levels of exhaustion at the same level as the higher level of feeding.

idk, i feel like the creation of garlic bread is great, but also needs just a little more utility; same the feeding the hungry.

 Feeding the hungry  was pretty much based on the idea of being a mobile soup kitchen. The creation thing is more useful than it seems, as 2 pieces of garlic bread can do a lot more than you would think. You just have to be creative with it.

EDIT: This isn't the current version. The newer one is here: The Garlic Bread Domain Class for Dungeons & Dragons (D&D) Fifth Edition (5e) - D&D Beyond (dndbeyond.com)

i think it might be a cool idea that at a higher level, the garlic bread made with being a disciple should grant temporary hit points. like at level 6 or 8, the garlic bread that has been created grants a number of temporary hit points equal to a d4 + con mod.

also with the Feed The Hungry And Gorge The Wicked, you could also make it so that at a higher level, feeding the hungry also stabilizes anyone who is unconscious in that radius, like maybe at level 14? and gorging the wicked at a higher level, you can decide if you want to give someone up to two levels of exhaustion at the same level as the higher level of feeding.

idk, i feel like the creation of garlic bread is great, but also needs just a little more utility; same as feeding the hungry.

ok let me try to explain a modifier is like strength when useing melee weapons you add lets say charisma to the roll to hit and damage and clerics use wisdom for some reason so keep it as charisma or change it to wisdom :)

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Yes hello, so, when people eat the garlic bread from "Disciple Of Garlic Bread", what happens? Do they heal? Is it delicious? Do they get a bonus to a stat or something?

 You are no longer hungry? The biggest points of this are to always have food and to find creative solutions to problems.

Yes hello, so, when people eat the garlic bread from "Disciple Of Garlic Bread", what happens? Do they heal? Is it delicious? Do they get a bonus to a stat or something?

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hi, it seems that you made the spell casting modifier for this cleric subclass charisma instead of wisdom.

 I have no idea. I haven't actually played that much DND (shocking, I know), and when I do I tend to avoid classes with magic, because I have trouble paying attention long enough to choose spells. TLDR: Whoops. I'm not sure which part of that is the problem or how to fix it. Sorry.

hi, it seems that you made the spell casting modifier for this cleric subclass charisma instead of wisdom.

I wanna play a Vampire Garlic Bread Cleric

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And that's how Strahd f*****g died

 1 gp to the swear jar.