Base Class: Bard
travel the planes and protect your friends with this planar themed bard subclass
planar knowledge
When you join the College of the astral road at 3rd level, you gain proficiency in your choice of arcana,investigation or nature.In addition you have advantage on all checks to detect the presence and effect of planar energies or entities.
nexus of planes
Also at 3rd level, you learn to create notes of planar potential to protect and attack.as an action you can expend one use of bardic inspiration and choose a creature within 30ft of you.the creature can add your proficiency bonus in force damage to one attack they make each round for ten minutes minute. in addition celestials , elementals,fey and fiend are automatically vulnerable to the extra force damage.
planar minstrel
At 6th level, you learn to travel the astral road short distances with ease and enhance your healing magics with planar energy.as a bonus action you can teleport 10ft . at 10th level this increases too 15ft and 15th level it increases to 20ft.whenever you heal a creature you can expend your reaction to give a creature you healed advantage on their next attack roll before the end of their next turn.
planar mastery
Starting at 14th level, your planar nexus ability adds force damage equal to twice your proficiency bonus and you learn the dimension door spell.
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Posted May 28, 2021Regarding my grammar,I may at some point fix it in the future.However,that will mostly only happen if I find a editor or, if I actually find something rules side that needs fixing.Lastly I think that is unimportant to make it look like real dnd (game design me knows thats a bad idea).So that shall not be fixed.
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Posted May 27, 2021This seems like an interesting subclass. You may want to fix the grammar and make sure it seems more like something from official D&D, such as italicizing spells, making ability names uppercase, rewording sentences (in this case changing "in addition celestials , elementals,fey and fiend are automatically vulnerable to the extra force damage" to "In addition, celestials, elementals, fey, and fiends are vulnerable to this damage"), and using "additionally" when adding more than one part to an ability. You may also want to make nexus of the planes a bonus action.
I hope this helps, and remember, this is just a suggestion; you don't have to listen to this. Have a nice day ;)
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Posted May 27, 2021This is one of the main problems with homebrew, people don't make the homebrew with proper grammar or don't make in the D&D format.
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Posted May 27, 2021This is an amazing idea, but the main problem is not in the class, but the grammar. Nobody really likes something that doesn't seem to have effort put into it, and grammar is part of that effort. You need to add spaces after commas and periods, as well as make sure that there is only one space between words. You also should capitalize more, like the subclasses name and the ability names. Along with all that, the periods that end a sentence do not a get a space between them and the last word. That is it.