Hey, so this is my first time making a class, intended for use in 5e. I'm looking for any criticisms, comments or suggestions anyone might have on the class. If you feel like spending the time, I'd be happy to hear what you think.
I've formatted the class using homebrewery, the link is below. Apologies in advance for any spelling mistakes I may have missed.
Your flavor text makes it sound like a psychic warrior / battlemind from previous editions, but mechanically it's pretty close to a monk. I think you would be better off making it a monk subclass.
It would certainly be quite a bit to condense down into a subclass however that´s a fair point you bring up. My idea was sort of a warlock,fighter,monk hybrid but perhaps I didn´t do good enough of a job at making the class unique in its own right. I´ll try looking it over some more. Thanks for the feedback.
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Hey, so this is my first time making a class, intended for use in 5e. I'm looking for any criticisms, comments or suggestions anyone might have on the class. If you feel like spending the time, I'd be happy to hear what you think.
I've formatted the class using homebrewery, the link is below. Apologies in advance for any spelling mistakes I may have missed.
http://homebrewery.naturalcrit.com/share/rkrBIJfTiM
Your flavor text makes it sound like a psychic warrior / battlemind from previous editions, but mechanically it's pretty close to a monk. I think you would be better off making it a monk subclass.
It would certainly be quite a bit to condense down into a subclass however that´s a fair point you bring up. My idea was sort of a warlock,fighter,monk hybrid but perhaps I didn´t do good enough of a job at making the class unique in its own right. I´ll try looking it over some more. Thanks for the feedback.