My Custom Reaction!

Can someone help me word this just right for a Red Dragon I'm working on?

Reaction

Pack Predation. Trigger: The dragon is forced to make a Constitution saving throw against a spell or other magical effect while a willing or Incapacitated ally is within 10 ft. of it. Response: the dragon can take a Reaction to devour one ally within 10 ft., instantly killing that creature. The dragon then gains Advantage on the triggering saving throw.

Seems pretty good. All you need to do is change it to "Response: the dragon devours one ally within 10 ft of it, . . . " Specifying in the description of the reaction that you need to take a reaction to use it is redundant.

Quote from Maruntoryx >>

Seems pretty good. All you need to do is change it to "Response: the dragon devours one ally within 10 ft of it, . . . " Specifying in the description of the reaction that you need to take a reaction to use it is redundant.

 Thank you, but I'm mostly stuck feeling that 10ft. mentioned twice is also redundant, I wonder if I should only say it once but don't know where it should go

Quote from Felgrand4123 >>

Quote from Maruntoryx >>

Seems pretty good. All you need to do is change it to "Response: the dragon devours one ally within 10 ft of it, . . . " Specifying in the description of the reaction that you need to take a reaction to use it is redundant.

 Thank you, but I'm mostly stuck feeling that 10ft. mentioned twice is also redundant, I wonder if I should only say it once but don't know where it should go

 I think the only time you need to state the range is in the devouring an ally part.