I wrote this silly little story for a Halloween oneshot character. I'd be interested in what you think of it and suggestions to make it better:
"Felicity Bottomswallow was born into and raised in a death cult. Her parents are fanatical believers and high ranking members of the cult. Although they attempted to indoctrinate Felicity, she was never happy. The dour surroundings and somber tone of her home grated upon her and eventually she ran away hoping to live her own life. A life in which she can be happy.
She has a very sunny outlook on life.
That said, she is a warlock of the undying, was originally initiated into a death cult and has seen things that nobody should ever be forced to witness. As a result, she is not naïve, although her sunny disposition seems at odds with the life she has lived.
Felicity loves baked goods and will go to any length to get them. She rarely gets sick and will even eat them when they seem well past eating.
She loves them too much.
She also has a twin sister, Fanny, whom she adores. Unfortunately Fanny was never able to shake their parents control and has become the poster child for the cult.
Seeing posters that remind her of her sister is probably the only thing that is able to crack Felicity’s sunny charm."
Hi,
I wrote this silly little story for a Halloween oneshot character. I'd be interested in what you think of it and suggestions to make it better:
"Felicity Bottomswallow was born into and raised in a death cult. Her parents are fanatical believers and high ranking members of the cult. Although they attempted to indoctrinate Felicity, she was never happy. The dour surroundings and somber tone of her home grated upon her and eventually she ran away hoping to live her own life. A life in which she can be happy.
She has a very sunny outlook on life.
That said, she is a warlock of the undying, was originally initiated into a death cult and has seen things that nobody should ever be forced to witness. As a result, she is not naïve, although her sunny disposition seems at odds with the life she has lived.
Felicity loves baked goods and will go to any length to get them. She rarely gets sick and will even eat them when they seem well past eating.
She loves them too much.
She also has a twin sister, Fanny, whom she adores. Unfortunately Fanny was never able to shake their parents control and has become the poster child for the cult.
Seeing posters that remind her of her sister is probably the only thing that is able to crack Felicity’s sunny charm."
Looking forward to seeing your thoughts.
XD
A caffeinated nerd who has played TTRPGs or a number of years and is very much a fantasy adventure geek.
This is hilarious. Good job!