I have recently been working on a DND world, and i am looking for feedback and comments. I have been creating a lore packet, that is in the working. if you are interested, here is the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/15BnoVw82ih3NNJaP9xMPxqIDtysC9GiRnVE1t43vv1M/edit?tab=t.0. This is currently in the working, so it will be changed often, but interested on what you think.
uptate: I am giving up on trying to figure out how to add PDF maps to the packet, so I will put the links here. they will also be in the lore packet.
I like what you have a done and would like to see some more expansion on the lore as more ideas form your base. As far as recommendations go, it would be to alter the Buhamat and Tiamat **** thing. suggestions, would be make an early eugenics thing, or union out teritorial, reputation, status etc. gain, One convinces the other that their beliefs are aligned so that they can have the Children turn on the other.
Just a couple quick ones off the top of my head. But this is your story and if you are enjoying the lore the way it is shaping now I hope that I can follow the growth of this lore.
Thanks for the suggestion. I actually like that idea better than what I had. The only reason I was doing my original idea, was, again, because I wanted Buhamat and Tiamat to be the father and mother of all dragons and could not figure out how to do that other than to have Buhamat raped.
Please Keep going with the world, I like the lore and look forward to seeing this grow. Hope this even turns into a campaign setting, I would definitely be interested.
I have recently been working on a DND world, and i am looking for feedback and comments. I have been creating a lore packet, that is in the working. if you are interested, here is the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/15BnoVw82ih3NNJaP9xMPxqIDtysC9GiRnVE1t43vv1M/edit?tab=t.0. This is currently in the working, so it will be changed often, but interested on what you think.
uptate: I am giving up on trying to figure out how to add PDF maps to the packet, so I will put the links here. they will also be in the lore packet.
map of the astral plane that actually reflects the lore of my world: https://www.canva.com/design/DAG73jRye_I/reSFia_oYF9xyVs4fSy1vg/view?utm_content=DAG73jRye_I&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=uniquelinks&utlId=hfdee6b7206
I like what you have a done and would like to see some more expansion on the lore as more ideas form your base. As far as recommendations go, it would be to alter the Buhamat and Tiamat **** thing. suggestions, would be make an early eugenics thing, or union out teritorial, reputation, status etc. gain, One convinces the other that their beliefs are aligned so that they can have the Children turn on the other.
Just a couple quick ones off the top of my head. But this is your story and if you are enjoying the lore the way it is shaping now I hope that I can follow the growth of this lore.
Thank you
Thanks for the suggestion. I actually like that idea better than what I had. The only reason I was doing my original idea, was, again, because I wanted Buhamat and Tiamat to be the father and mother of all dragons and could not figure out how to do that other than to have Buhamat raped.
Please Keep going with the world, I like the lore and look forward to seeing this grow. Hope this even turns into a campaign setting, I would definitely be interested.
the time elemantel plane is a cool idea
Respectfully,
Nanra