i have recently been working on a DND world, and i am looking for feedback and comments. I have been creating a lore packet, that is in the working. if you are interested, here is the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/15BnoVw82ih3NNJaP9xMPxqIDtysC9GiRnVE1t43vv1M/edit?tab=t.0. This is currently in the working, so it will be changed often, but interested on what you think.
content warning: A god does get raped, because i could not think of any other explanation for Buhamat and Tiamat to have children together.
I like what you have a done and would like to see some more expansion on the lore as more ideas form your base. As far as recommendations go, it would be to alter the Buhamat and Tiamat **** thing. suggestions, would be make an early eugenics thing, or union out teritorial, reputation, status etc. gain, One convinces the other that their beliefs are aligned so that they can have the Children turn on the other.
Just a couple quick ones off the top of my head. But this is your story and if you are enjoying the lore the way it is shaping now I hope that I can follow the growth of this lore.
Thank you
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i have recently been working on a DND world, and i am looking for feedback and comments. I have been creating a lore packet, that is in the working. if you are interested, here is the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/15BnoVw82ih3NNJaP9xMPxqIDtysC9GiRnVE1t43vv1M/edit?tab=t.0. This is currently in the working, so it will be changed often, but interested on what you think.
content warning: A god does get raped, because i could not think of any other explanation for Buhamat and Tiamat to have children together.
I like what you have a done and would like to see some more expansion on the lore as more ideas form your base. As far as recommendations go, it would be to alter the Buhamat and Tiamat **** thing. suggestions, would be make an early eugenics thing, or union out teritorial, reputation, status etc. gain, One convinces the other that their beliefs are aligned so that they can have the Children turn on the other.
Just a couple quick ones off the top of my head. But this is your story and if you are enjoying the lore the way it is shaping now I hope that I can follow the growth of this lore.
Thank you