The race seems fine. You give a racial bonus to Charisma or Wisdom but then have the cantrip Intelligence based. Other races tie their spellcasting to their racial ability score bonus.
When I think Limbo, I think of chaos, of creation and destruction happening around you all at once. I don't think of elves that can see in the dark. Perhaps the lore answers that but I was not prepared to read what looks like a chapter from MToF. For the casual passerby, like myself, perhaps give the reader a good idea of what a night elf is in the first paragraph. We should understand who they are at a glance.
"The relevant equation is: Knowledge = power = energy = matter = mass; a good bookshop is just a genteel Black Hole that knows how to read." - Terry Pratchett
In short, I'm blown away by what you did. I think a secondary static ability score bonus would help define characters more clearly. My critique is now mostly copy editing.
Titles, both description and traits, should not have periods. Traits should be in alphabetical order after Ability Score Improvement.
Typically second level spells are not give out as racial abilities until 3rd level. The correct language for "cast moonbeam at it's lowest level" is "cast moonbeam as a 2nd level spell."
Inconsistant Form could be written as "At the beginning or end of a long rest you can change your form." The secondary effects should come in at 3rd level, or true sight should be knocked down to blindsight.
"The relevant equation is: Knowledge = power = energy = matter = mass; a good bookshop is just a genteel Black Hole that knows how to read." - Terry Pratchett
The race seems fine. You give a racial bonus to Charisma or Wisdom but then have the cantrip Intelligence based. Other races tie their spellcasting to their racial ability score bonus.
When I think Limbo, I think of chaos, of creation and destruction happening around you all at once. I don't think of elves that can see in the dark. Perhaps the lore answers that but I was not prepared to read what looks like a chapter from MToF. For the casual passerby, like myself, perhaps give the reader a good idea of what a night elf is in the first paragraph. We should understand who they are at a glance.
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Astromancer's Homebrew Assembly
"The relevant equation is: Knowledge = power = energy = matter = mass; a good bookshop is just a genteel Black Hole that knows how to read." - Terry Pratchett
In short, I'm blown away by what you did. I think a secondary static ability score bonus would help define characters more clearly. My critique is now mostly copy editing.
Titles, both description and traits, should not have periods. Traits should be in alphabetical order after Ability Score Improvement.
Typically second level spells are not give out as racial abilities until 3rd level. The correct language for "cast moonbeam at it's lowest level" is "cast moonbeam as a 2nd level spell."
Inconsistant Form could be written as "At the beginning or end of a long rest you can change your form." The secondary effects should come in at 3rd level, or true sight should be knocked down to blindsight.
And remember to tooltip senses, and skills.
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Astromancer's Homebrew Assembly
"The relevant equation is: Knowledge = power = energy = matter = mass; a good bookshop is just a genteel Black Hole that knows how to read." - Terry Pratchett
Man, this is looking really solid. Great concept to start with and great improvement on the second pass.
"Not all those who wander are lost"