Hello all, I was hoping to get some insight on a recent Homebrew I've been making that coincides with a realm I'm working on for DM'ing my first online campaign. The writeup is in depth about terms within this realm, so I'm hoping the details presented don't come off as confusing considering the lack of given information. If so, I'd like to know what and why, or if you have any general comments I'm happy to hear them as well. The character art enclosed is a commission from a friend.
Thank you for taking the time to browse my work, have a nice day!
This is really well done! The flavor is well written, and very creative. One typo, in the "Venom and Grace" section, you forgot to add a damage type to the venom ability. I presume poison damage? Anyways, very good, +1 from me.
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A fool pulls the leaves. A brute chops the trunk. A sage digs the roots.
also in venom and grace you forgot save type, I'm guessing Dex
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Hello all, I was hoping to get some insight on a recent Homebrew I've been making that coincides with a realm I'm working on for DM'ing my first online campaign. The writeup is in depth about terms within this realm, so I'm hoping the details presented don't come off as confusing considering the lack of given information. If so, I'd like to know what and why, or if you have any general comments I'm happy to hear them as well. The character art enclosed is a commission from a friend.
Thank you for taking the time to browse my work, have a nice day!
https://www.dndbeyond.com/races/501768-qerxi
This is really well done! The flavor is well written, and very creative. One typo, in the "Venom and Grace" section, you forgot to add a damage type to the venom ability. I presume poison damage? Anyways, very good, +1 from me.
A fool pulls the leaves. A brute chops the trunk. A sage digs the roots.
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also in venom and grace you forgot save type, I'm guessing Dex
NNCHRIS: SOUL THIEF, MASTER OF THE ARCANE, AND KING OF NEW YORKNN
Gdl Creator of Ilheia and her Knights of the Fallen Stars ldG
Lesser Student of Technomancy [undergrad student in computer science]
Supporter of the 2014 rules, and a MASSIVE Homebrewer. Come to me all ye who seek salvation in wording thy brews!
Open to homebrew trades at any time!! Or feel free to request HB, and Ill see if I can get it done for ya!
Characters (Outdated)
Thanks for pointing those out! I'll revise that in the next edit.