Of course. You already have a good foundation, but you could use some refinement in your techniques.
How so?
For one thing, don’t say you have a really mean insult then say multiple. Focus your energy into creating one good insult instead of multiple mediocre ones
If you want me to be straight up, that drawing was downright horrendous
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O sorrow, I have ended, you see, by respecting you, because I am certain you will never leave me.
Ah! I realize it: your beauty lies in the force of your being. You are like those who never left the sad fireside corner of my poor black heart.
O my sorrow, you are better than a well-beloved: because I know that on the day of my final agony, you will be there, lying in my sheets, O sorrow, so that you might once again attempt to enter my heart.
Weapon (longsword), very rare (requires attunement)
Attack Type: Martial Melee Weapon
Reach: 5 ft.
Damage: 2d8
Damage Type: Slashing
Properties: Versatile (2d10)
Weight: 3 lb.
Cost: 475 gp
A blade whose shine glistens with an aura of violence. You have a +2 bonus to your attack and damage rolls with this weapon.
One Thousand Cuts. As an action, you may target a creature you can see within 30 feet of you. You instantly appear before the creature and make a flurry of blows against them. The target must make a DC 15 Dexterity saving throw. On a failure, they take 12d8 slashing damage. On a success they take half as much. This ability can only be used twice, and this item regains use of this effect at dawn.
Proficiency with a longsword allows you to add your proficiency bonus to the attack roll for any attack you make with it.
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Hi there! My name's Elk. I'm NoiSilverheart's doppelgänger. I'm a demi/grayromantic, socially awkward Okie who may or may not be a pyromaniac. *random confetti blast*
I'm a warlock of the Archcrone, and my patron is TheFriendlyArchfey. I was nicknamed AchatesCervus8337 by VitusW and given the titles "Swashbuckling Scorcher", "The Unpredictable Jedi", "Burning Fury of the Ancients", and "Combustion Knight" by DrummerBoyDragonSlayer.
Of course. You already have a good foundation, but you could use some refinement in your techniques.
How so?
For one thing, don’t say you have a really mean insult then say multiple. Focus your energy into creating one good insult instead of multiple mediocre ones
If you want me to be straight up, that drawing was downright horrendous
Whatever
Straight insults are fine, but clever ones are more entertaining. Insulting drawings would be more towards the straight up insults, while insulting a person you should twist their words and be more clever about it.
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Hey y’all, you can call me Sel, pronouns they/he. Some things about me, I like reading, writing, dnd, theater, art. I have an art doc and my yt channel linked below. Pms are always open if you need to talk. Love y’all <3
Dawg that insult was as burning as mustard. Get some real heat before you start trying. Respectfully.
This is why im trying to help himy lol
ive been insulting people since i was like seven. It was my favorite activity in second grade. A couple boys and i would spend all of recess insulting each other to see who had better insults
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Hey y’all, you can call me Sel, pronouns they/he. Some things about me, I like reading, writing, dnd, theater, art. I have an art doc and my yt channel linked below. Pms are always open if you need to talk. Love y’all <3
Dawg that insult was as burning as mustard. Get some real heat before you start trying. Respectfully.
Hombre I ain’t even trying. That was just me stating my opinion. Or facts cause ngl it truly was ass
respectfully of course
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O sorrow, I have ended, you see, by respecting you, because I am certain you will never leave me.
Ah! I realize it: your beauty lies in the force of your being. You are like those who never left the sad fireside corner of my poor black heart.
O my sorrow, you are better than a well-beloved: because I know that on the day of my final agony, you will be there, lying in my sheets, O sorrow, so that you might once again attempt to enter my heart.
O sorrow, I have ended, you see, by respecting you, because I am certain you will never leave me.
Ah! I realize it: your beauty lies in the force of your being. You are like those who never left the sad fireside corner of my poor black heart.
O my sorrow, you are better than a well-beloved: because I know that on the day of my final agony, you will be there, lying in my sheets, O sorrow, so that you might once again attempt to enter my heart.
Dawg that insult was as burning as mustard. Get some real heat before you start trying. Respectfully.
Hombre I ain’t even trying. That was just me stating my opinion. Or facts cause ngl it truly was ass
respectfully of course
Himy v jester
go
show me what you can do while youre trying
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Hey y’all, you can call me Sel, pronouns they/he. Some things about me, I like reading, writing, dnd, theater, art. I have an art doc and my yt channel linked below. Pms are always open if you need to talk. Love y’all <3
Hey y’all, you can call me Sel, pronouns they/he. Some things about me, I like reading, writing, dnd, theater, art. I have an art doc and my yt channel linked below. Pms are always open if you need to talk. Love y’all <3
Hi there! My name's Elk. I'm NoiSilverheart's doppelgänger. I'm a demi/grayromantic, socially awkward Okie who may or may not be a pyromaniac. *random confetti blast*
I'm a warlock of the Archcrone, and my patron is TheFriendlyArchfey. I was nicknamed AchatesCervus8337 by VitusW and given the titles "Swashbuckling Scorcher", "The Unpredictable Jedi", "Burning Fury of the Ancients", and "Combustion Knight" by DrummerBoyDragonSlayer.
Dawg that insult was as burning as mustard. Get some real heat before you start trying. Respectfully.
Hombre I ain’t even trying. That was just me stating my opinion. Or facts cause ngl it truly was ass
respectfully of course
Himy v jester
go
show me what you can do while youre trying
I can’t go all out on a fellow black man on the forums. I would get banned in a heartbeat. Heck I can’t go all out I general on here
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O sorrow, I have ended, you see, by respecting you, because I am certain you will never leave me.
Ah! I realize it: your beauty lies in the force of your being. You are like those who never left the sad fireside corner of my poor black heart.
O my sorrow, you are better than a well-beloved: because I know that on the day of my final agony, you will be there, lying in my sheets, O sorrow, so that you might once again attempt to enter my heart.
Dawg that insult was as burning as mustard. Get some real heat before you start trying. Respectfully.
This is why im trying to help himy lol
ive been insulting people since i was like seven. It was my favorite activity in second grade. A couple boys and i would spend all of recess insulting each other to see who had better insults
you try too hard to be clever with your insults and it makes them weak selia.
but then again insulting me is like insulting a wall so dont listen to me
O sorrow, I have ended, you see, by respecting you, because I am certain you will never leave me.
Ah! I realize it: your beauty lies in the force of your being. You are like those who never left the sad fireside corner of my poor black heart.
O my sorrow, you are better than a well-beloved: because I know that on the day of my final agony, you will be there, lying in my sheets, O sorrow, so that you might once again attempt to enter my heart.
Dawg that insult was as burning as mustard. Get some real heat before you start trying. Respectfully.
Hombre I ain’t even trying. That was just me stating my opinion. Or facts cause ngl it truly was ass
respectfully of course
Himy v jester
go
show me what you can do while youre trying
I can’t go all out on a fellow black man on the forums. I would get banned in a heartbeat. Heck I can’t go all out I general on here
You dont have to go all out, just friendly insults like Grad and i normally exchange
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Hey y’all, you can call me Sel, pronouns they/he. Some things about me, I like reading, writing, dnd, theater, art. I have an art doc and my yt channel linked below. Pms are always open if you need to talk. Love y’all <3
Dawg that insult was as burning as mustard. Get some real heat before you start trying. Respectfully.
This is why im trying to help himy lol
ive been insulting people since i was like seven. It was my favorite activity in second grade. A couple boys and i would spend all of recess insulting each other to see who had better insults
you try too hard to be clever with your insults and it makes them weak selia.
but then again insulting me is like insulting a wall so dont listen to me
I mean probably on here but thats just because i end up spending too much time thinking about it
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Hey y’all, you can call me Sel, pronouns they/he. Some things about me, I like reading, writing, dnd, theater, art. I have an art doc and my yt channel linked below. Pms are always open if you need to talk. Love y’all <3
Hi there! My name's Elk. I'm NoiSilverheart's doppelgänger. I'm a demi/grayromantic, socially awkward Okie who may or may not be a pyromaniac. *random confetti blast*
I'm a warlock of the Archcrone, and my patron is TheFriendlyArchfey. I was nicknamed AchatesCervus8337 by VitusW and given the titles "Swashbuckling Scorcher", "The Unpredictable Jedi", "Burning Fury of the Ancients", and "Combustion Knight" by DrummerBoyDragonSlayer.
If you want me to be straight up, that drawing was downright horrendous
O sorrow, I have ended, you see, by respecting you, because I am certain you will never leave me.
Ah! I realize it: your beauty lies in the force of your being. You are like those who never left the sad fireside corner of my poor black heart.
O my sorrow, you are better than a well-beloved: because I know that on the day of my final agony, you will be there, lying in my sheets, O sorrow, so that you might once again attempt to enter my heart.
-Excerpt, Prayer for loving sorrow
Made a new homebrew item. How do y'all like it?
Katana of a Thousand Cuts
Weapon (longsword), very rare (requires attunement)
Attack Type: Martial Melee Weapon
Reach: 5 ft.
Damage: 2d8
Damage Type: Slashing
Properties: Versatile (2d10)
Weight: 3 lb.
Cost: 475 gp
A blade whose shine glistens with an aura of violence. You have a +2 bonus to your attack and damage rolls with this weapon.
One Thousand Cuts. As an action, you may target a creature you can see within 30 feet of you. You instantly appear before the creature and make a flurry of blows against them. The target must make a DC 15 Dexterity saving throw. On a failure, they take 12d8 slashing damage. On a success they take half as much. This ability can only be used twice, and this item regains use of this effect at dawn.
Proficiency with a longsword allows you to add your proficiency bonus to the attack roll for any attack you make with it.
Hi there! My name's Elk. I'm NoiSilverheart's doppelgänger. I'm a demi/grayromantic, socially awkward Okie who may or may not be a pyromaniac. *random confetti blast*
I'm a warlock of the Archcrone, and my patron is TheFriendlyArchfey. I was nicknamed AchatesCervus8337 by VitusW and given the titles "Swashbuckling Scorcher", "The Unpredictable Jedi", "Burning Fury of the Ancients", and "Combustion Knight" by DrummerBoyDragonSlayer.
Extended sig
Dawg that insult was as burning as mustard. Get some real heat before you start trying. Respectfully.
What's life without a little war to spice things up? Anyone who worries about the little things should notice the bigger picture.
I am (As drummerboy stated) The master of many faces, The unseen puppeteer, The illumination, & The unnoticed influence.
Favorite games series: Dark Souls. Shirtless Solaire. Best best game series of all time: Paper Mario. Fight me about it.
Etiam im librum scribo
Whatever
Straight insults are fine, but clever ones are more entertaining. Insulting drawings would be more towards the straight up insults, while insulting a person you should twist their words and be more clever about it.
Hey y’all, you can call me Sel, pronouns they/he. Some things about me, I like reading, writing, dnd, theater, art. I have an art doc and my yt channel linked below. Pms are always open if you need to talk. Love y’all <3
Is art
@Irunwithskissors
(Both are links, please click them…)
This is why im trying to help himy lol
ive been insulting people since i was like seven. It was my favorite activity in second grade. A couple boys and i would spend all of recess insulting each other to see who had better insults
Hey y’all, you can call me Sel, pronouns they/he. Some things about me, I like reading, writing, dnd, theater, art. I have an art doc and my yt channel linked below. Pms are always open if you need to talk. Love y’all <3
Is art
@Irunwithskissors
(Both are links, please click them…)
Hombre I ain’t even trying. That was just me stating my opinion. Or facts cause ngl it truly was ass
respectfully of course
O sorrow, I have ended, you see, by respecting you, because I am certain you will never leave me.
Ah! I realize it: your beauty lies in the force of your being. You are like those who never left the sad fireside corner of my poor black heart.
O my sorrow, you are better than a well-beloved: because I know that on the day of my final agony, you will be there, lying in my sheets, O sorrow, so that you might once again attempt to enter my heart.
-Excerpt, Prayer for loving sorrow
Horribly unbalanced
O sorrow, I have ended, you see, by respecting you, because I am certain you will never leave me.
Ah! I realize it: your beauty lies in the force of your being. You are like those who never left the sad fireside corner of my poor black heart.
O my sorrow, you are better than a well-beloved: because I know that on the day of my final agony, you will be there, lying in my sheets, O sorrow, so that you might once again attempt to enter my heart.
-Excerpt, Prayer for loving sorrow
Himy v jester
go
show me what you can do while youre trying
Hey y’all, you can call me Sel, pronouns they/he. Some things about me, I like reading, writing, dnd, theater, art. I have an art doc and my yt channel linked below. Pms are always open if you need to talk. Love y’all <3
Is art
@Irunwithskissors
(Both are links, please click them…)
The drawing? Have you ever seen splatoon chars?
Hey y’all, you can call me Sel, pronouns they/he. Some things about me, I like reading, writing, dnd, theater, art. I have an art doc and my yt channel linked below. Pms are always open if you need to talk. Love y’all <3
Is art
@Irunwithskissors
(Both are links, please click them…)
What's unbalanced?
Hi there! My name's Elk. I'm NoiSilverheart's doppelgänger. I'm a demi/grayromantic, socially awkward Okie who may or may not be a pyromaniac. *random confetti blast*
I'm a warlock of the Archcrone, and my patron is TheFriendlyArchfey. I was nicknamed AchatesCervus8337 by VitusW and given the titles "Swashbuckling Scorcher", "The Unpredictable Jedi", "Burning Fury of the Ancients", and "Combustion Knight" by DrummerBoyDragonSlayer.
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Ah he's learning. Albeit as slowly as you can without stopping but he's learning.
What's life without a little war to spice things up? Anyone who worries about the little things should notice the bigger picture.
I am (As drummerboy stated) The master of many faces, The unseen puppeteer, The illumination, & The unnoticed influence.
Favorite games series: Dark Souls. Shirtless Solaire. Best best game series of all time: Paper Mario. Fight me about it.
Etiam im librum scribo
I can’t go all out on a fellow black man on the forums. I would get banned in a heartbeat. Heck I can’t go all out I general on here
O sorrow, I have ended, you see, by respecting you, because I am certain you will never leave me.
Ah! I realize it: your beauty lies in the force of your being. You are like those who never left the sad fireside corner of my poor black heart.
O my sorrow, you are better than a well-beloved: because I know that on the day of my final agony, you will be there, lying in my sheets, O sorrow, so that you might once again attempt to enter my heart.
-Excerpt, Prayer for loving sorrow
you try too hard to be clever with your insults and it makes them weak selia.
but then again insulting me is like insulting a wall so dont listen to me
Back in black baby
The sword
O sorrow, I have ended, you see, by respecting you, because I am certain you will never leave me.
Ah! I realize it: your beauty lies in the force of your being. You are like those who never left the sad fireside corner of my poor black heart.
O my sorrow, you are better than a well-beloved: because I know that on the day of my final agony, you will be there, lying in my sheets, O sorrow, so that you might once again attempt to enter my heart.
-Excerpt, Prayer for loving sorrow
You dont have to go all out, just friendly insults like Grad and i normally exchange
Hey y’all, you can call me Sel, pronouns they/he. Some things about me, I like reading, writing, dnd, theater, art. I have an art doc and my yt channel linked below. Pms are always open if you need to talk. Love y’all <3
Is art
@Irunwithskissors
(Both are links, please click them…)
I was Inosuke for Halloween two years ago. That was the same Halloween I sprained my spine. Got a **** ton of candy outa it tho
I have stolen your shredded cheese.
AgateElk8337’s Doppelgänger
I mean probably on here but thats just because i end up spending too much time thinking about it
Hey y’all, you can call me Sel, pronouns they/he. Some things about me, I like reading, writing, dnd, theater, art. I have an art doc and my yt channel linked below. Pms are always open if you need to talk. Love y’all <3
Is art
@Irunwithskissors
(Both are links, please click them…)
friendly?
Back in black baby
If we went all out we would be in jail I'ma be real.
What's life without a little war to spice things up? Anyone who worries about the little things should notice the bigger picture.
I am (As drummerboy stated) The master of many faces, The unseen puppeteer, The illumination, & The unnoticed influence.
Favorite games series: Dark Souls. Shirtless Solaire. Best best game series of all time: Paper Mario. Fight me about it.
Etiam im librum scribo
Could you explain further?
Hi there! My name's Elk. I'm NoiSilverheart's doppelgänger. I'm a demi/grayromantic, socially awkward Okie who may or may not be a pyromaniac. *random confetti blast*
I'm a warlock of the Archcrone, and my patron is TheFriendlyArchfey. I was nicknamed AchatesCervus8337 by VitusW and given the titles "Swashbuckling Scorcher", "The Unpredictable Jedi", "Burning Fury of the Ancients", and "Combustion Knight" by DrummerBoyDragonSlayer.
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