"You have? I suppose that makes sense- we've been busy over there, fixing up the ship to travel on a... a culinary expedition of sorts."
“Do the suppers here not satisfy you?”
"Unfortunately so. Much to my dismay, I cannot partake in material foods, for I have no mouth with which to eat. What I can consume, however, is light- and I hope to travel the stars to sample the flavors of the cosmos."
“I see. There is much dark between the stars. Doldrums of famine for you my friend. But I suppose you are familiar with such journeys.”
"Well, we've been trying to find ways to cut down on travel time as well. It's... well, it's going alright."
“Is it just you and your ferret friend who are on this adventure?”
"Well, there's also False- another friend of ours- but I don't know whether or not they want to join us on our journey. But as far as who we know for sure is joining, it's just the two of us."
He picks up a tankard from the table and says, “Have you taken into account the atmospheric anomalies of this country?”
"You have? I suppose that makes sense- we've been busy over there, fixing up the ship to travel on a... a culinary expedition of sorts."
“Do the suppers here not satisfy you?”
"Unfortunately so. Much to my dismay, I cannot partake in material foods, for I have no mouth with which to eat. What I can consume, however, is light- and I hope to travel the stars to sample the flavors of the cosmos."
“I see. There is much dark between the stars. Doldrums of famine for you my friend. But I suppose you are familiar with such journeys.”
"Well, we've been trying to find ways to cut down on travel time as well. It's... well, it's going alright."
“Is it just you and your ferret friend who are on this adventure?”
"Well, there's also False- another friend of ours- but I don't know whether or not they want to join us on our journey. But as far as who we know for sure is joining, it's just the two of us."
He picks up a tankard from the table and says, “Have you taken into account the atmospheric anomalies of this country?”
"Well... not initially. Though, I'm looking into inter-dimensional travel just in case it doesn't work out."
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Former Spider Queen of the Spider Guild, and friendly neighborhood scheming creature.
"Made by spiders, for spiders, of spiders."
My pronouns are she/her.
Web Weaver of Everlasting Narrative! (title bestowed by Drummer)
*Imagine this scenario: You're a suburban dad in the 1990s watching TV downstairs in the middle of the night with the lights off. The old CRT turns to static and shuts down, and you see the reflection of the Spectre's eyes in the dark of the screen, perfectly still. You know how dangerous Spectres are, and you know you need to get your family out of here. But you're too scared to move from your seat or even look away from the eyes on the television. Lucky you, your mobile phone sits beside your chair, where you left it when you got home from work. You pick it up slowly, and nearly drop it when the spirit suddenly jerks forward before returning to its normal stillness.*
*You catch your breath and call 911. It rings so loud. You stare off at the reflected horror, unable to make out its form through the dust. Finally, after what must have been centuries, the phone picks up.* *"Hello, Paranormality Hotline, please explain the nature of your situation."* *"There is a Spectre in my house." You whisper, trying not to agitate the being any further.* *"Connecting you to the Hunter's Guild. Please hold."* *...* *...* *...* *...* *"Hello, this is dispatch. Can you answer a couple of questions for me?"* *...* *...* *"Hello?"*
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Let him who is without sin cast the first stone.
May each word that I speak be backed by each of my teeth.
*Imagine this scenario: You're a suburban dad in the 1990s watching TV downstairs in the middle of the night with the lights off. The old CRT turns to static and shuts down, and you see the reflection of the Spectre's eyes in the dark of the screen, perfectly still. You know how dangerous Spectres are, and you know you need to get your family out of here. But you're too scared to move from your seat or even look away from the eyes on the television. Lucky you, your mobile phone sits beside your chair, where you left it when you got home from work. You pick it up slowly, and nearly drop it when the spirit suddenly jerks forward before returning to its normal stillness.*
*You catch your breath and call 911. It rings so loud. You stare off at the reflected horror, unable to make out its form through the dust. Finally, after what must have been centuries, the phone picks up.* *"Hello, Paranormality Hotline, please explain the nature of your situation."* *"There is a Spectre in my house." You whisper, trying not to agitate the being any further.* *"Connecting you to the Hunter's Guild. Please hold."* *...* *...* *...* *...* *"Hello, this is dispatch. Can you answer a couple of questions for me?"* *...* *...* *"Hello?"*
*Thanks, Dark! I'm still developing it with its own unique technology and societal structures.*
*Any critique or comments on the story? I'm gonna be extending it to fit a 20 page manga.*
*I guess this won't be a problem if it is a manga, but a description of the monster would have been cool. I was a little confused by the placement of the monster in the story. At first I thought it was looking at him from inside the TV, but then it jerked forward so I reckon it was outside of it and moved closer. Then you say that I can't make out its form through the dust, but I don't know what dust you're talking about. This would all probably be solved in manga format because I could actually see what was going on.*
*I love the detail about how the phone rings so loud. That's exactly how things like that sound in those sorts of situations.*
*Dang, the Paranormality Hotline has terrible service.*
*I'm guessing there will be more content for the manga version. You'll definitely need more than what you've got if you want to fill up 20 pages.*
*Overall it is a really interesting story. It leaves me wanting to see more of the world and the monsters in it.*
*He was looking at the reflection of the monster on the dusty TV screen. I was trying to avoid that confusion, but I guess I failed at that.*
*And oh yeah, there will be a lot more. Mystery, fear, maybe even a fight.*
*Thank you for the compliments. It's intended to basically be a hook into the setting, giving knowledge about the world without being an info dump.*
*Oh okay. The dusty screen is a great detail.*
*It is really good at being a hook and not a info dump.*
*I had the idea that the dad would be alerted to the threat beforehand by an entity called TRAUMA FM, a superintelligent radio signal that gives highly-targeted premonitions of doom. It can effectively feel with radiation waves, from radio to gamma, and it is extremely creative with the knowledge it collects. It has a backstory, but you'll have to find that out through RP or interaction with my Villain Maker character, who owns TRAUMA FM as one of their imprisoned Spectres.*
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Let him who is without sin cast the first stone.
May each word that I speak be backed by each of my teeth.
*He was looking at the reflection of the monster on the dusty TV screen. I was trying to avoid that confusion, but I guess I failed at that.*
*And oh yeah, there will be a lot more. Mystery, fear, maybe even a fight.*
*Thank you for the compliments. It's intended to basically be a hook into the setting, giving knowledge about the world without being an info dump.*
*Oh okay. The dusty screen is a great detail.*
*It is really good at being a hook and not a info dump.*
*I had the idea that the dad would be alerted to the threat beforehand by an entity called TRAUMA FM, a superintelligent radio signal that gives highly-targeted premonitions of doom. It can effectively feel with radiation waves, from radio to gamma, and it is extremely creative with the knowledge it collects. It has a backstory, but you'll have to find that out through RP or interaction with my Villain Maker character, who owns TRAUMA FM as one of their imprisoned Spectres.*
*Ooh I really like that. The idea of a radio station giving people premonitions is super cool. Sort of reminds me of the radio station in National Anthem The True Lives of the Fabulous Killjoys but it is still very different.*
Off in some dark lonely corner of the Autumn Country, the yellowed skull of some long forgotten titan lies nestled between shadowy hills. A red glow shines from out of its mouth and thick black smoke rises out of its eye sockets. The heavy pounding of a metal against metal sounds from inside the skull like a scream choking out of its long dead throat.
I'm fry, and I make doodles. That's why they call me FRY DOODLES. Also no pressure but check out my YouTube channel (Fry Doodles) Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult) I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, artsy dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown. But, I'm also god's favorite princess and the most interesting girl in the world. Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose
*i don't have the widest assortment of characters, and I think nobody would like it if I brought felicity back*
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I'm fry, and I make doodles. That's why they call me FRY DOODLES. Also no pressure but check out my YouTube channel (Fry Doodles) Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult) I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, artsy dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown. But, I'm also god's favorite princess and the most interesting girl in the world. Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose
I'm fry, and I make doodles. That's why they call me FRY DOODLES. Also no pressure but check out my YouTube channel (Fry Doodles) Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult) I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, artsy dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown. But, I'm also god's favorite princess and the most interesting girl in the world. Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose
This perky young girl has gray eyes with horizontal pupils, a light brown complexion, and wavy brown hair neatly braided. She is a little short, quite muscular, and has horns and has a set of powerful bat-like wings. She likes wearing elegant clothing. She gets lost easily and likes watching television static.
yep this is what monster person generator gave me.
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I'm fry, and I make doodles. That's why they call me FRY DOODLES. Also no pressure but check out my YouTube channel (Fry Doodles) Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult) I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, artsy dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown. But, I'm also god's favorite princess and the most interesting girl in the world. Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose
This perky young girl has gray eyes with horizontal pupils, a light brown complexion, and wavy brown hair neatly braided. She is a little short, quite muscular, and has horns and has a set of powerful bat-like wings. She likes wearing elegant clothing. She gets lost easily and likes watching television static.
yep this is what monster person generator gave me.
This perky young girl has gray eyes with horizontal pupils, a light brown complexion, and wavy brown hair neatly braided. She is a little short, quite muscular, and has horns and has a set of powerful bat-like wings. She likes wearing elegant clothing. She gets lost easily and likes watching television static.
yep this is what monster person generator gave me.
*Hmm, that’s interesting.*
*remarkably similar to felicity but okay. gonna roll for fundamental flaw
*i got Vain Capricious mischevious*
*so spoiled vampire kid*
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I'm fry, and I make doodles. That's why they call me FRY DOODLES. Also no pressure but check out my YouTube channel (Fry Doodles) Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult) I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, artsy dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown. But, I'm also god's favorite princess and the most interesting girl in the world. Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose
I'm fry, and I make doodles. That's why they call me FRY DOODLES. Also no pressure but check out my YouTube channel (Fry Doodles) Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult) I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, artsy dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown. But, I'm also god's favorite princess and the most interesting girl in the world. Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose
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He picks up a tankard from the table and says, “Have you taken into account the atmospheric anomalies of this country?”
"Well... not initially. Though, I'm looking into inter-dimensional travel just in case it doesn't work out."
Former Spider Queen of the Spider Guild, and friendly neighborhood scheming creature.
"Made by spiders, for spiders, of spiders."
My pronouns are she/her.
Web Weaver of Everlasting Narrative! (title bestowed by Drummer)
*Hey Dark. Story time.*
*Imagine this scenario: You're a suburban dad in the 1990s watching TV downstairs in the middle of the night with the lights off. The old CRT turns to static and shuts down, and you see the reflection of the Spectre's eyes in the dark of the screen, perfectly still. You know how dangerous Spectres are, and you know you need to get your family out of here. But you're too scared to move from your seat or even look away from the eyes on the television. Lucky you, your mobile phone sits beside your chair, where you left it when you got home from work. You pick it up slowly, and nearly drop it when the spirit suddenly jerks forward before returning to its normal stillness.*
*You catch your breath and call 911. It rings so loud. You stare off at the reflected horror, unable to make out its form through the dust. Finally, after what must have been centuries, the phone picks up.*
*"Hello, Paranormality Hotline, please explain the nature of your situation."*
*"There is a Spectre in my house." You whisper, trying not to agitate the being any further.*
*"Connecting you to the Hunter's Guild. Please hold."*
*...*
*...*
*...*
*...*
*"Hello, this is dispatch. Can you answer a couple of questions for me?"*
*...*
*...*
*"Hello?"*
Let him who is without sin cast the first stone.
May each word that I speak be backed by each of my teeth.
*Pretty sick! I love the setting.*
*Thanks, Dark! I'm still developing it with its own unique technology and societal structures.*
*Any critique or comments on the story? I'm gonna be extending it to fit a 20 page manga.*
Let him who is without sin cast the first stone.
May each word that I speak be backed by each of my teeth.
*I guess this won't be a problem if it is a manga, but a description of the monster would have been cool. I was a little confused by the placement of the monster in the story. At first I thought it was looking at him from inside the TV, but then it jerked forward so I reckon it was outside of it and moved closer. Then you say that I can't make out its form through the dust, but I don't know what dust you're talking about. This would all probably be solved in manga format because I could actually see what was going on.*
*I love the detail about how the phone rings so loud. That's exactly how things like that sound in those sorts of situations.*
*Dang, the Paranormality Hotline has terrible service.*
*I'm guessing there will be more content for the manga version. You'll definitely need more than what you've got if you want to fill up 20 pages.*
*Overall it is a really interesting story. It leaves me wanting to see more of the world and the monsters in it.*
*He was looking at the reflection of the monster on the dusty TV screen. I was trying to avoid that confusion, but I guess I failed at that.*
*And oh yeah, there will be a lot more. Mystery, fear, maybe even a fight.*
*Thank you for the compliments. It's intended to basically be a hook into the setting, giving knowledge about the world without being an info dump.*
Let him who is without sin cast the first stone.
May each word that I speak be backed by each of my teeth.
*Oh okay. The dusty screen is a great detail.*
*It is really good at being a hook and not a info dump.*
*I had the idea that the dad would be alerted to the threat beforehand by an entity called TRAUMA FM, a superintelligent radio signal that gives highly-targeted premonitions of doom. It can effectively feel with radiation waves, from radio to gamma, and it is extremely creative with the knowledge it collects. It has a backstory, but you'll have to find that out through RP or interaction with my Villain Maker character, who owns TRAUMA FM as one of their imprisoned Spectres.*
Let him who is without sin cast the first stone.
May each word that I speak be backed by each of my teeth.
*Ooh I really like that. The idea of a radio station giving people premonitions is super cool. Sort of reminds me of the radio station in National Anthem The True Lives of the Fabulous Killjoys but it is still very different.*
Off in some dark lonely corner of the Autumn Country, the yellowed skull of some long forgotten titan lies nestled between shadowy hills. A red glow shines from out of its mouth and thick black smoke rises out of its eye sockets. The heavy pounding of a metal against metal sounds from inside the skull like a scream choking out of its long dead throat.
*hi*
I'm fry, and I make doodles. That's why they call me FRY DOODLES. Also no pressure but check out my YouTube channel (Fry Doodles)
Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult)
I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, artsy dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown. But, I'm also god's favorite princess and the most interesting girl in the world.
Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose
*Hi'dy.*
*i don't have the widest assortment of characters, and I think nobody would like it if I brought felicity back*
I'm fry, and I make doodles. That's why they call me FRY DOODLES. Also no pressure but check out my YouTube channel (Fry Doodles)
Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult)
I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, artsy dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown. But, I'm also god's favorite princess and the most interesting girl in the world.
Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose
hello
I'm fry, and I make doodles. That's why they call me FRY DOODLES. Also no pressure but check out my YouTube channel (Fry Doodles)
Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult)
I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, artsy dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown. But, I'm also god's favorite princess and the most interesting girl in the world.
Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose
*Hello.*
i don't have good char so imma randomize a thing
This perky young girl has gray eyes with horizontal pupils, a light brown complexion, and wavy brown hair neatly braided. She is a little short, quite muscular, and has horns and has a set of powerful bat-like wings. She likes wearing elegant clothing. She gets lost easily and likes watching television static.
yep this is what monster person generator gave me.
I'm fry, and I make doodles. That's why they call me FRY DOODLES. Also no pressure but check out my YouTube channel (Fry Doodles)
Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult)
I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, artsy dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown. But, I'm also god's favorite princess and the most interesting girl in the world.
Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose
*Hmm, that’s interesting.*
*remarkably similar to felicity but okay. gonna roll for fundamental flaw
*i got
Vain
Capricious
mischevious*
*so spoiled vampire kid*
I'm fry, and I make doodles. That's why they call me FRY DOODLES. Also no pressure but check out my YouTube channel (Fry Doodles)
Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult)
I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, artsy dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown. But, I'm also god's favorite princess and the most interesting girl in the world.
Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose
*and her name is.....*
Juliet.
I'm fry, and I make doodles. That's why they call me FRY DOODLES. Also no pressure but check out my YouTube channel (Fry Doodles)
Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult)
I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, artsy dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown. But, I'm also god's favorite princess and the most interesting girl in the world.
Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose