My wings were clipped, my heart in a chain, I suffered then, I walked through pain, but even now I know my strength, and I know I'll go any length to save the ones I love.
My least favorite person is me, but my favorite people are y'all.
You should make this attunement, and change the wording to the following:
“When casting a spell or using an ability that restores HP to a creature, you may add an extra 1d4 to the total amount of HP restored. In addition, when you make a saving throw against the poisoned condition or to resist a spell or ability that would bestow a curse on you (such as the Bestow Curse spell), you may add a 1d4 to your saving throw.”
Make this attunement, make it a very rare magic item, and change the wording to “While you are attuned to this ring, you have a +2 bonus to AC while you are not wearing armor or carrying a shield. Additionally, you have a +1 bonus to all saving throws.
Cursed: This item is cursed. While you are attuned to it, you have a -1 to weapon attack rolls and unarmed strikes.”
Actually I’m reviewing the soulstone and kind of have no idea what it does.
- What do you mean by Curses? There aren’t curses listed to pick from and I’m not sure how they relate - What does storing HP into the soulstone actually do? - Does the item give you extra dreas points? Or are you spending those dread points for the curse/hp stuff?
And a couple notes:
- Neutral, Enemy, and Willing should be replaced by just Willing and Unwilling - Remove the AC bonus, it doesn’t need to have it - Resistance to poison saves isn’t a thing, id suggest saying advantage on saves against the poisoned condition
I can reword the item once these clarifications are made.
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*hey Cyno and Gibber can you check PM's, i sent yall some homebrew*
*It’s not showing up, I think you forgot the underscore in my name, a lot of people do when they add me to PMS 😔*
*Hihihi Cyno, working on a new thread, highly video game themed.*
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My wings were clipped, my heart in a chain, I suffered then, I walked through pain, but even now I know my strength, and I know I'll go any length to save the ones I love.
My least favorite person is me, but my favorite people are y'all.
*hey Cyno and Gibber can you check PM's, i sent yall some homebrew*
*It’s not showing up, I think you forgot the underscore in my name, a lot of people do when they add me to PMS 😔*
*Hihihi Cyno, working on a new thread, highly video game themed.*
*sick!*
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— δ cyno • he/him • number one paladin fanδ — making a smoothie for meta ——————| EXTENDED SIG |—————— Φ • redpelt’s biggest fan :) DM, minmaxer, microbiology student, and lover of anything colored red • Φ
*hey Cyno and Gibber can you check PM's, i sent yall some homebrew*
*It’s not showing up, I think you forgot the underscore in my name, a lot of people do when they add me to PMS 😔*
*Hihihi Cyno, working on a new thread, highly video game themed.*
*sick!*
*Thanks!*
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My wings were clipped, my heart in a chain, I suffered then, I walked through pain, but even now I know my strength, and I know I'll go any length to save the ones I love.
My least favorite person is me, but my favorite people are y'all.
*Alright looking forward to see what a full decked out correllion looks like*
fellow follower of JEFF!!!! and a fan of botw
Co-cult leader of the cynophobia cult
Archivist of the kingdoms and Crowns thread, Percy Jackson thread, and Mechanicus thread
*Hi Cyno*
My wings were clipped, my heart in a chain, I suffered then, I walked through pain, but even now I know my strength, and I know I'll go any length to save the ones I love.
My least favorite person is me, but my favorite people are y'all.
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*Hi naner*
fellow follower of JEFF!!!! and a fan of botw
Co-cult leader of the cynophobia cult
Archivist of the kingdoms and Crowns thread, Percy Jackson thread, and Mechanicus thread
*hey Cyno and Gibber can you check PM's, i sent yall some homebrew*
Even Girls enjoy D&D :3
*unnatural cyno responded to the homebrew earlier*
fellow follower of JEFF!!!! and a fan of botw
Co-cult leader of the cynophobia cult
Archivist of the kingdoms and Crowns thread, Percy Jackson thread, and Mechanicus thread
fellow follower of JEFF!!!! and a fan of botw
Co-cult leader of the cynophobia cult
Archivist of the kingdoms and Crowns thread, Percy Jackson thread, and Mechanicus thread
*It’s not showing up, I think you forgot the underscore in my name, a lot of people do when they add me to PMS 😔*
— δ cyno • he/him • number one paladin fan δ —
making a smoothie for meta
——————| EXTENDED SIG |——————
Φ • redpelt’s biggest fan :) DM, minmaxer, microbiology student, and lover of anything colored red • Φ
*Hihihi Cyno, working on a new thread, highly video game themed.*
My wings were clipped, my heart in a chain, I suffered then, I walked through pain, but even now I know my strength, and I know I'll go any length to save the ones I love.
My least favorite person is me, but my favorite people are y'all.
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*brains*
fellow follower of JEFF!!!! and a fan of botw
Co-cult leader of the cynophobia cult
Archivist of the kingdoms and Crowns thread, Percy Jackson thread, and Mechanicus thread
*sick!*
— δ cyno • he/him • number one paladin fan δ —
making a smoothie for meta
——————| EXTENDED SIG |——————
Φ • redpelt’s biggest fan :) DM, minmaxer, microbiology student, and lover of anything colored red • Φ
*:)*
fellow follower of JEFF!!!! and a fan of botw
Co-cult leader of the cynophobia cult
Archivist of the kingdoms and Crowns thread, Percy Jackson thread, and Mechanicus thread
*Thanks!*
My wings were clipped, my heart in a chain, I suffered then, I walked through pain, but even now I know my strength, and I know I'll go any length to save the ones I love.
My least favorite person is me, but my favorite people are y'all.
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