Hey! I've made a couple of subclasses homebrews as i'm working on a project to adapt the Wakfu classes to DnD 5e . I'm looking for feedback for this one in particular as it's the first I intend to playtest. I'd really like help for the wording as i'm not sure how to explain abilities without babling too much (lol), as well as for the numbers and the mask mecanic with the meditations . PLEASE let me know what you think! I've posted it on reddit but only had one answer ... is it too much? what seems unnecessary or unflavorful? What should be reworded? what seem's unbalanced in it?
I don't know what Wakfu is, making it hard form to understand all of the lore, but here's what advice I can offer. The document doesn't really flow, I first need to understand how a mask works before we even get to the subclass abilities. And from what I can tell the mask mechanic seems a little convoluted and not well explained. Having differing levels for when you get a new ability depending on the mask doesn't jive well with 5th edition D&D. I strongly suggest you look at the Barbarian's Path of the Totem Warrior for how it should be formatted and explained.
"The relevant equation is: Knowledge = power = energy = matter = mass; a good bookshop is just a genteel Black Hole that knows how to read." - Terry Pratchett
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Hey! I've made a couple of subclasses homebrews as i'm working on a project to adapt the Wakfu classes to DnD 5e . I'm looking for feedback for this one in particular as it's the first I intend to playtest. I'd really like help for the wording as i'm not sure how to explain abilities without babling too much (lol), as well as for the numbers and the mask mecanic with the meditations . PLEASE let me know what you think! I've posted it on reddit but only had one answer ... is it too much? what seems unnecessary or unflavorful? What should be reworded? what seem's unbalanced in it?
Here's the link : http://homebrewery.naturalcrit.com/share/HJ-UY18fkG
Please leave a comment for what you think should be reworked!
Thanks a bunch!
I don't know what Wakfu is, making it hard form to understand all of the lore, but here's what advice I can offer. The document doesn't really flow, I first need to understand how a mask works before we even get to the subclass abilities. And from what I can tell the mask mechanic seems a little convoluted and not well explained. Having differing levels for when you get a new ability depending on the mask doesn't jive well with 5th edition D&D. I strongly suggest you look at the Barbarian's Path of the Totem Warrior for how it should be formatted and explained.
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"The relevant equation is: Knowledge = power = energy = matter = mass; a good bookshop is just a genteel Black Hole that knows how to read." - Terry Pratchett