I got no notification for this release, so sorry. Wizard School: Really cool. The Basic Hemocraft isn't really powerful enough and the Crimson Curse needs to be specified you can cast the spell once only. Blood Toll is brilliant, absolutely fantastic. Sanguine Shield is pretty bad against small foes, but great against big ones, but it needs to be specified that the AC bonus is against the attack or something. The Surge of Vitality feature has a strange name.
The Plated Glider is really cool. That is all.
Shortsword of the Lord of Thieves is a long name... and hard to say. The attunement is so strange and yet it's cool. Magic items are hard beyond rare, but I think this should be Legendary.
I got no notification for this release, so sorry. Wizard School: Really cool. The Basic Hemocraft isn't really powerful enough and the Crimson Curse needs to be specified you can cast the spell once only. Blood Toll is brilliant, absolutely fantastic. Sanguine Shield is pretty bad against small foes, but great against big ones, but it needs to be specified that the AC bonus is against the attack or something. The Surge of Vitality feature has a strange name.
The Plated Glider is really cool. That is all.
Shortsword of the Lord of Thieves is a long name... and hard to say. The attunement is so strange and yet it's cool. Magic items are hard beyond rare, but I think this should be Legendary.
I’ll act on these. PS I think you misread the name of the Shortsword of the Lord Thieves.
They all looks great, especially hemocraft wizard.
The hemocraft wizard is absolutely amazing flavor-wise, but there is a problem balance wise. Sanguine shield is overpowered. It's an average of 7 extra AC, while only dealing an average of 2 self damage. That's crazy good, especially considering it's proficiancy bonus per short or long rest (4 times when you first get it), AND it only get's better, maxing out at 6 times per short/long rest and adding an average of 9 AC, while only dealing an average of 2.5 self damage.
Other than that it's pretty balanced and very awesome. Definitely something I'd consider playing. (There area ton of good subclasses out there, so that's saying a lot)
They all looks great, especially hemocraft wizard.
The hemocraft wizard is absolutely amazing flavor-wise, but there is a problem balance wise. Sanguine shield is overpowered. It's an average of 7 extra AC, while only dealing an average of 2 self damage. That's crazy good, especially considering it's proficiancy bonus per short or long rest (4 times when you first get it), AND it only get's better, maxing out at 6 times per short/long rest and adding an average of 9 AC, while only dealing an average of 2.5 self damage.
Other than that it's pretty balanced and very awesome. Definitely something I'd consider playing. (There area ton of good subclasses out there, so that's saying a lot)
Okay… neither does true polymorph.
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Which is also exactly what I said. Just, True Polymorph allows you to wild shape to a CR that makes OP Moon druids look puny (6 max vs 16 max)
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but seriously. Thanks for bringing that up, that’s a big flaw I didn’t consider.
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Yeah. WotC made True Polymorph weird.
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I think I’ve balanced it. Tell me what you think:
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GREAT.
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Bonjour, encore! Take a look!
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I got no notification for this release, so sorry.
Wizard School: Really cool. The Basic Hemocraft isn't really powerful enough and the Crimson Curse needs to be specified you can cast the spell once only. Blood Toll is brilliant, absolutely fantastic. Sanguine Shield is pretty bad against small foes, but great against big ones, but it needs to be specified that the AC bonus is against the attack or something. The Surge of Vitality feature has a strange name.
The Plated Glider is really cool. That is all.
Shortsword of the Lord of Thieves is a long name... and hard to say. The attunement is so strange and yet it's cool. Magic items are hard beyond rare, but I think this should be Legendary.
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I’ll act on these. PS I think you misread the name of the Shortsword of the Lord Thieves.
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Shortsword of the Lord Thieves (Magic Item) [Legendary]
Let’s play Spot The Differences.
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They all looks great, especially hemocraft wizard.
The hemocraft wizard is absolutely amazing flavor-wise, but there is a problem balance wise. Sanguine shield is overpowered. It's an average of 7 extra AC, while only dealing an average of 2 self damage. That's crazy good, especially considering it's proficiancy bonus per short or long rest (4 times when you first get it), AND it only get's better, maxing out at 6 times per short/long rest and adding an average of 9 AC, while only dealing an average of 2.5 self damage.
Other than that it's pretty balanced and very awesome. Definitely something I'd consider playing. (There area ton of good subclasses out there, so that's saying a lot)
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Aw, thanks!
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Looks great!
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Sorry I’m late! Have these!
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As a side note, how would you feel about more frequent posting on this thread?
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Journey in Shadow and the Chupacabra are great! Primal Prowess is okay (balanced, but no thrills)
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Hello, everyone! Just asking again, should I post more often?
In the meantime, have these:
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Quick Reflexes (Feat)
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Cool. I like canid, the tea is excellent thank you, and the feat is great, but I'm too busy freaking out over the Netherdeep to give balance.
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Repost because I’d like a bit more feedback.
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